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Original of the Species
“Well there’s nothing more to add, I already told you everything that happened” Tina said innocently as she entered the bride’s room, and to her surprise Kelly was alone at the moment.
“There are two things you haven’t told me yet. First how good was the sex, and second what are you gonna do with Eric, is he coming?” Kelly asked as she sat down in front of the big mirror again.
“The sex was… well there are no words to describe it actually… just mind blowing, life altering, unbelievable, earth shattering” Tina started saying absentmindedly.
“So there are words” Kelly said looking at Tina’s reflection on the mirror amazed at her friend’s expression. After all the years of knowing Tina, Kelly thought this was the first time she truly saw her happy. Her eyes were sparkling and she looked gorgeous and renovated.
“Sorry” Tina said blushing.
“So, what about Eric? Is he coming or what?” Kelly asked again and Tina’s whole demeanor changed upon hearing that name.
“No he won’t, I broke it off with him over the phone” Tina said frowning.
“Over the phone?! TK that’s harsh even for you! Well as I have told you before: the dude was an idiot, and I’m happy for you Tina, I really am. Clearly this new life you’re starting to explore suits you better, you little slut” Kelly said smiling widely.
“Look who’s talking about sluts, if Brad only knew. But you’re right Eric was an idiot… I think now after all that has happened recently that perhaps I did dated idiots so I would have good reasons to leave them. Does that make any sense at all?” Tina said pensive.
“You know, I think you’re right about that one. Now come help me with the make up, I cannot decide which lipstick to use tomorrow” Kelly quickly said.
A couple of hours went by like minutes, everybody there had a role to play and things to do. The huge and beautiful mansion where the reception would be held was filled with people coming and going. Some of them were working on the flowers, others setting the tables, others were just guests that had just arrived and were curious.
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Pancakes…Tina…hmmmmm. Great story
Ah, breakfast is going to be a bit of a revelation for someone, I hope. Nice chapter, thanks! :)
ahh, pancakes for breakfast….again. this will be an interesting breakfast. one has to wonder if bette will be introduced as the chef who tuned this variation together with the help of her staff. hmm. thickening plots and near miss meetings between these two. YOU are a tease!!what a great story. bette is a chef. how great is that? can’t wait to read more of this story. and thanks for taking the time to share with us.
Great pacing – draw it out a bit to tease us! The pancakes are a nice touch….will Tina choke as she suddenly realizes who “Elizabeth” is?
Tina must be sure to get up for breakfast and have a meal that she will never forget. How will she handle all the emotion that will be happening to her, with her parents present. Great update. Thanks for posting.
I love how you have written both Bette and Tina. I can’t wait for the pancakes to appear and to see what Tina’s reaction will be to those pancakes. Do you think you could pass on the recipe for the chocolate desert?
Hoping Tina tumbles to the pancake revelation and then what? Hope to see another chapter from you soon. Thanks for writing!
I am so loving this story!!! Wonder how pale Tina will go when she see’s the pancakes. Thank you PPS
hmm Tina’s gonna love breakfast! nice twist, pps.
Too cute. Thanks for the post and I’m still driving around trying to find this damn wedding! ;)
The rub lies within the pancakes…
oh this is killing me..
Yummy pancakes….Love your story, pps.
I love this story so much! I can so see Bette as a chef mmmm. I can’t wait for those pancakes!
I still can’t get over Bette being a chef lol. And a great one. Love it. PPVS
Pancakes… well looks like tina will guess who made the pancakes… love this story… pps
Huummm Pancakes. Knowing that Tina had never eaten a pancakes so tasty, I’m thinking that Tina is going to connect to a special pancakes Bette Potter. Can not wait for the reunion of the two. More please………….
Alright that was good, now let see Tinas reaction when she eat pancake lol. Please post more, thanks!
THE PANCAKES!..I think Tina should recognice the one that Bette made! oh THIS SO EXCITING!!!I Can’t wait! ..
THE pancakes! Will TIna recognise their taste? This is very appetizing!
Oh boy…meeting time…can’t wait! Are you going to make Laurel a twisted character in the triangle of young love? Or will she just pine away for Bette? Interesting twist and options that you have. Ok…let the games begin!
was partying last night but was so nice to get up this morning and read another chapter, cant wait for Bette and Tina to meet again in the next one
Thanks for this story! It’ s so good!! :DPPS
Oh Wow! I can’t wait for breakfast. This story just gets better and better. Thank you.
So, Laurel has a thing for Bette.