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Roadtrip to L.A. Part 5
Shane puts her arm around Sue’s shoulder and walks out.
They get in Shane’s car and drive back to the Planet.
Shane stayed in the car and Sue got out.
Sue: ‘Shane, thank you so much for helping me I don’t know how I can ever repay you’
Shane: ‘You don’t have to you would do the same thing if you where me’
Sue smiled at Shane and Shane smiled back.
She closed the portal and walked towards Jenny who was sitting outside the planet at a table drinking some coffee
Jenny: ‘How did it go?’
Sue: ‘Good’
They sit there for a view minutes not knowing what to say.
Jenny: ‘Lets go downtown I know some really good shops where we can go and get some new clothes come on it will be fun’
Sue: ‘Yeah let’s go!
Sue and Jenny walk down town check out some stores and Sue finally can laugh again.
Sue: ‘I’m gonna try on this shirt’
Sue holds up a crazy punk shirt pink with holes in it.
Jenny: ‘okay go ahead’
Sue gets in a dressing room and puts on the shirt
Sue: ‘I’m not coming out this is so not me’
Jenny laughs
Jenny: ‘Come on show me’
Sue: ‘No you’re going to laugh’
Jenny: ‘I’m already laughing so it doesn’t matter come on let’s see it’
Sue gets out and Jenny looks at Sue, the shirt looks pretty ridiculous so they both burst into laughter.
Jenny: ‘Here put this on’
She tosses Sue a nice black sleeveless shirt.
Sue: ‘Now that is more me’
Sue gets back in the dressing room and takes off the pink shirt and replaces it with this much better black shirt.
She walks out puts her hands in her sides and waits for Jenny’s opinion.
Jenny: ‘That looks fabulous really’
She walks up to Sue
Jenny: ‘Spin a round for me come on’
Sue turns around sees her reflection in the mirror behind her and thinks that the shirt looks good on her.
Suddenly Jenny stops laughing
She hold Sue’s arm
Jenny: ‘How did you get these?’
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Hey! Your story’s great, I mean it. But it doesnt go fast enough for me anyway!
No im jocking, dont worry im working on that stuff.
Hey Tiny..slow&steady is better than fast&clumsy/quik&easy….the tortuse won the race..I think the pace you move at Nanouk is jus fine cuz your stry jus keeps gettin better&better….I LUV your writing..each post is wrth the wait..GREAT chapter..I like where your going with this..Looking forward 2 Jen&Sue..sum alchohal&a party..‘This night could get fun’…thnx 4 writing..dun stop..PLEASE mst Post so0N..
Good news the next part is going to be much better:p and Im already almost doen so you don’t have to wait as long as for this part… next part will be the best thing I wrote so far…