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Roadtrip to L.A. Part 5
Sue: ‘Yeah but then again you only saw me in my dirty baggy pants and a ripped sweatshirt’
Marin smiles
Sue follows
Sue: ‘Yeah sure I can handle it and if there’s really a problem I know where to reach you’
Tine and
Sue feels she’s getting red
Sue: ‘Yeah,
Tina: ‘That’s good for
Sue makes the girls some coffee and they sit at the bar drinking it.
Sue: ‘Can’t complain, Shane took me to the police office to declare a statement after that I went shopping with Jenny which was also really nice’
Tina: ‘Doesn’t someone at home miss you?’
Sue: ‘No they knew I would be here all summer so they don’t wonder where I am’
Tina: ‘How about your girlfriend? Isn’t she worried’
Sue: ‘Faye? No not really she has plenty other girlfriends to worry about’
Tina: ‘More girlfriends?’
Sue: ‘Yeah its kind of complicated’
For the first time the girls saw Sue as a totally different person.
She didn’t look that insecure as when she walked in the first time.
She looked older, more self-conscious even a little tough.
Sue: ‘You have an appointment?’
Tina: ‘Yeah, Bette is giving a presentation at the CAC and we promised we’d be there’
Sue: ‘Than you better go, come on get up you don’t want to be late’
Tina smiles at Sue.
Tina: ‘Yeah let’s go thanks for the coffee Sue’
Sue: ‘Anytime’
The girls leave but when they walk out the door they say hi to Jenny who just walks in The Planet.
Sue looks up from the counter and sees Jenny walk in the Planet, she wears a short blue dress and her hair straight down.
Sue can’t help but thinking she’s hot.
Sue: ‘H, ,heey Jenny how are you’
Jenny: ‘Fine and you’
For some reason Sue is getting the idea Jenny’s checking her out.
Jenny: ‘Hey listen I was wondering are you coming to that party tonight?’
Sue: ‘Tonight? At what time I don’t know for how long I need to stand in for
Jenny: ‘
Sue teasing Jenny
Sue: ‘And how will I get there?’
Jenny: ‘
Sue: ‘And we’ll go together’
Jenny: ‘Yes?‘
Sue: ‘Okay cool’
Sue saw Jenny leave The Planet and thought
‘This night could get fun’
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Hey! Your story’s great, I mean it. But it doesnt go fast enough for me anyway!
No im jocking, dont worry im working on that stuff.
Hey Tiny..slow&steady is better than fast&clumsy/quik&easy….the tortuse won the race..I think the pace you move at Nanouk is jus fine cuz your stry jus keeps gettin better&better….I LUV your writing..each post is wrth the wait..GREAT chapter..I like where your going with this..Looking forward 2 Jen&Sue..sum alchohal&a party..‘This night could get fun’…thnx 4 writing..dun stop..PLEASE mst Post so0N..
Good news the next part is going to be much better:p and Im already almost doen so you don’t have to wait as long as for this part… next part will be the best thing I wrote so far…