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    Roadtrip to L.A. Part 5

     

    Marina: ‘You look good’

     

    Sue: ‘Yeah but then again you only saw me in my dirty baggy pants and a ripped sweatshirt’

     

    Marin smiles

     

    Marina: ‘Come I’ll show you how everything works’

     

    Sue follows Marina in behind the bar and pretty soon she finds out how everything works and she really likes the job.

     

    Marina: ‘Is it okay to leave you alone for a view hours? I would really like to get some rest and read a book maybe’

     

    Sue: ‘Yeah sure I can handle it and if there’s really a problem I know where to reach you’

     

    Marina looks really tired and Sue is glad she can give her a break.

    Marina leaves the room and goes to her apartment.

     

    Tine and Alice walk in.

     

    Alice: ‘Well well, you already have a nice job here’

     

    Sue feels she’s getting red

     

    Sue: ‘Yeah, Marina was so nice to offer me a job here so she can get a little break from all her hard work’

     

    Tina: ‘That’s good for Marina I already said she should take some time for herself’

     

    Alice: ‘Can I have two coffees?’

     

    Sue makes the girls some coffee and they sit at the bar drinking it.

     

    Alice: ‘Anyway how have you been doing?’

     

    Sue: ‘Can’t complain, Shane took me to the police office to declare a statement after that I went shopping with Jenny which was also really nice’

     

    Tina: ‘Doesn’t someone at home miss you?’

     

    Sue: ‘No they knew I would be here all summer so they don’t wonder where I am’

     

    Tina: ‘How about your girlfriend? Isn’t she worried’

     

    Sue: ‘Faye? No not really she has plenty other girlfriends to worry about’

     

    Tina: ‘More girlfriends?’

     

    Sue: ‘Yeah its kind of complicated’

     

    For the first time the girls saw Sue as a totally different person.

    She didn’t look that insecure as when she walked in the first time.

    She looked older, more self-conscious even a little tough.

     

    Alice: ‘T we need to go, Bette is waiting for us at the CAC’

     

    Sue: ‘You have an appointment?’

     

    Tina: ‘Yeah, Bette is giving a presentation at the CAC and we promised we’d be there’

     

    Sue: ‘Than you better go, come on get up you don’t want to be late’

     

    Tina smiles at Sue.

     

    Tina: ‘Yeah let’s go thanks for the coffee Sue’

    Sue: ‘Anytime’

     

    The girls leave but when they walk out the door they say hi to Jenny who just walks in The Planet.

    Sue looks up from the counter and sees Jenny walk in the Planet, she wears a short blue dress and her hair straight down.

    Sue can’t help but thinking she’s hot.

     

    Sue: ‘H, ,heey Jenny how are you’

     

    Jenny: ‘Fine and you’

     

    For some reason Sue is getting the idea Jenny’s checking her out.

     

    Jenny: ‘Hey listen I was wondering are you coming to that party tonight?’

     

    Sue: ‘Tonight? At what time I don’t know for how long I need to stand in for Marina‘

     

    Jenny: ‘Marina has got more people working for her so I don’t think that would be a problem‘

     

    Sue teasing Jenny

     

    Sue: ‘And how will I get there?’

     

    Jenny: ‘Ill pick you up’

     

    Sue: ‘And we’ll go together’

     

    Jenny: ‘Yes?‘

     

    Sue: ‘Okay cool’

     

    Sue saw Jenny leave The Planet and thought

    ‘This night could get fun’

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    Comments

    1. Hey Tiny..slow&steady is better than fast&clumsy/quik&easy….the tortuse won the race..I think the pace you move at Nanouk is jus fine cuz your stry jus keeps gettin better&better….I LUV your writing..each post is wrth the wait..GREAT chapter..I like where your going with this..Looking forward 2 Jen&Sue..sum alchohal&a party..‘This night could get fun’…thnx 4 writing..dun stop..PLEASE mst Post so0N..

    2. Good news the next part is going to be much better:p and Im already almost doen so you don’t have to wait as long as for this part… next part will be the best thing I wrote so far…

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