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Seemingly Lost Chptr. 1 (If y’all like)
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“I’m sorry baby, but there was intern who needed some special attention on a new project and she was so lost, then I hit traffic on the 405. Ugh, it was a mess.” She said hoping her excuse was enough to appease Tina’s mind.
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“I’m just happy you’re home.”
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Bette rose and quickly grabbed Justine’s neck with her hand covered by her sleeve before she had a chance to expose it to Tina’s glare. “Cuz, have you met…”
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“Kimberly.” Tina piped in.
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Justine turned towards Bette with a puzzled look and said “Have you Kimberly? She’s your date.” Justine turned back towards Kimberly and said “I’m sorry my cousin is such an ass, how she could forget such a beautiful woman’s name is beyond me.” Bette suddenly ripped her sleeve from Justine’s neck, causing her to flinch a little and give Bette a look of anger. But Bette just sat back down laughing as though it was a joke.
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“Well if you ladies will excuse me, I’m going to quickly jump into the shower, and be back out before anyone misses me.”
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Justine jumped into the shower and called out to Tina who was in the kitchen getting Kimberly some water. “Baby?”
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“Yeah?”
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“Can you lay out my gray pants with my black shirt and my strappy Prada’s?”
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“Yeah, ok baby.” Tina yelled back as she was handing Kimberly her water. Tina flashed a hopeful smile at Kimberly and Bette, and disappeared into the bedroom. Bette’s eyes followed her the whole way, she loved watching Tina walk, it was almost hypnotizing. She was drawn out of her hypnotic state by Kimberly saying her name.
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“I’m sorry what were you saying?”
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“I said that lipstick looks better on your cousin’s neck than it does on your sleeve.” Kim said nodding her head towards Bette’s new stain. Bette laughed nervously and was competing with her mind to say something, anything that would help her out of this situation.
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Thankfully Tina emerged with her keys in her hand and her purse in the other. “Bette did you see what I did with my cell phone?” Bette was still unable to form any sentence that sounded like her mind was connected to her mouth. Justine yelled from the bedroom ” Try the kitchen baby?”
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(43 votes, average: 4.02 out of 5)
ooooooo i like it….continue soon…….please…..
You got my attention, so continue soon please!
Justine is an ass and needs to go. Please post again soon!
o let’s hope Kimberly lets blind Tina into besotted Bette’s secret…and Let’s get it on!!!!sounds like a keeper, please continue…
great story plz continue..soon!
huh – u call tis a great story – i call it a complete mess of confusion!
Definitely have my attention. Liking it very much. Bette can’t keep saving her cousin at the cost hurting Tina and her self. In the long run, it is going to back fire on Bette. It is always better to know no matter how painful it is. Post continue and POST SOON!!!
Netta..I sure hope you continue. This is a very good start..I feel lots of drama coming. OH…and Justine is a bitch.
I like it post more soon thanks
maybe Kim can tell Tina the truth
good start. justine seems like kind of a jerk. please post soon
Great start…hooked already!! Thanks!
Yeah, this is different. Pls continue.
Bette, a piece of advise….next time don’t rescue Justine. The hell with her!
Great start and please please continue.
This is good start and please conintue soon. This is different and like it. Ok post soon please, thanks!
wow this is a good start!!
Great! I like it very much…Bette can’t tell Tina about Justine, for one she is family and two she is in love with her girl friend. It would look like she said something just to get the girl. Poore Bette…I think Tina just needs to open her eyes a little more and see Justine for what she is, a slut…Please post another soon. I can tell I am going to be addicted to this one lol.
Oh I am loving this. Bette needs to let Justine dig her own hole. What is Kimberly even doing there? She is putting herself thru unnecessary anger and rejection. Keep posting.
Please continue and post soon.
Great start I admit I was confused in the beginning. I thought B and T were a couple but then I figured it out. Keep going.
Yeah, I’m with miamigirl, why is Bette pulling Justine’s fat from the fire? Just cause you share blood doesn’t mean you have to enable their misbehavior. Too bad Tina is so blind, both to Justine’s bullshit and to Bette’s ardor. Still, Bette isn’t in a good position to remove the scales from her eyes, it would only look self-serving. Netta, honey, you must have liquid soap running in your veins. Ross Hunter would be proud. Yes, more of this please, but don’t abandon “Everything”.
ooo someone’s brain is getting enough oxygen and glucose…the creative juices are flowing~ I’d like to see what you have planned for these girls :)
I am with Lamentamini, get rid of Justine and maybe have Kimberly tell Tina of Justine’s extra activities. Hopefully, Tina will see that Bette only has eyes for her and no other person. Please continue.
hey j nobody can stop B&t destiny longer
Oh, please, continue!!! This sounds interesting! I am all eyes! Good start!
Looks like we all like it!! So please continue!!
Great Start. Poor Bettte. PPS
To answer another reader, what is Kimberley doing there? She’s the impartial observer. We see the story through her eyes. You have some sophisticated plotting going on here, Netta baby! Thanks!
I like the introduction of the new characters. Bette can always use more family, even the scoundrel kind. Thank you, and please, continue!