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The Adventures Of Bette Porter And Sissee Gardner Schmidt After Howie (Part 1, Chapter 10)
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Bette looked for Kit to calm down and relax but that was not going to happen. She continued to be highly agitated, very nervous and tense. They both ordered iced tea and Kit almost gulped hers, taking long drinks and asking for refills. Bette suggested the cobb salad, saying she and Tina had enjoyed theirs when they ate there.
Bette talked to Kit about Angelica. Her sister had not seen her lately, not even at Tina’s and Bette was telling her how much the baby’s vocabulary was growing but she knew she was not listening. When her food came she only picked at it and kept looking at her watch. Bette asked her several times if she wanted to call someone from AA and Kit shook her head no. When they finally finished and went to the meeting at a neighborhood church, where there was only a handful of people, Bette stuck close to her because nothing seemed to bring her down.
Then suddenly Kit caught her breath, she put a hand over her chest and said, “I can’t breathe……can’t…… swallow……” There was perspiration on her forehead. Bette, reached in her purse for her cell phone and became frantic when she could not find it. She jumped up and yelled , “Call 911,” to no one in particular, to anyone and everyone.
She picked up Kit’s purse and rummaged through it until she found her cell, flipped it open and found it was dead.
Meanwhile, she heard someone else make the call and give the address and the other people in the room began to gather around her.
Bette told me that she followed the ambulance to Cedars-Sinai Medical Center and arrived shortly after they did. She said it terrified her to see her sister strapped on a gurney with an oxygen tube in her nose, , as she was rushed into emergency. She followed her into a ward with a series of beds and watched as they transferred Kit onto one of them.
She was seen almost immediately by a very young doctor, with two nurses who asked Kit questions about her symptoms. He had her sit on the side of the bed and listened to her heart, in the front and back with his stethoscope, after which he ordered an EKG While she undressed and was furnished with a hospital gown, within minutes, a portable electrocardiogram machine arrived. Kit reached out to her sister and asked her not to leave her. Bette saw how frightened she looked and assured her she would be there for her and held her hand when she could.
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well, well, well…sissee, though i have been reading stories on this site for a couple of years now i’ve never tried yours, however, it was a slow day last week for my fave writers so i gave yours a try and i’m sooooo glad i did, it.is.brilliant!! i’m gutted now because i’m upto date and have to wait for your updates, boo! you’ve managed to do the unthinkable and actually have me rooting for someone other than tina for bette (me being a loyal tibetter) i love the way you write bette and back at the beginning when bette ended it when sissee was pregnant was heart wrenching…so glad you made sissee really work to get our bette back! anyway just wanted you to know you have a new fan and please, please, please keep your updates regular!!!
Can’t wait for the making up something something between B & S! They deserve to be together and the arguement in the morning about Jodie cannot break up their connection. They are two solid individuals who need each other in times of needs and love :-)
Dear Mush1912, Oh my, how I love to hear comments like yours from new readers. It just motivates me to write on and on. Thank you so very much. I’m not sure I’ve earned the “brilliant” word but it sure sounds nice and I want you to know I will work very hard at trying to live up to it.
The best part… Making up! Heehee! Great chapter! PPS
Now for the good part. A little lovin’ in the suds or wherever they may end up. Glad Bette was there for Kit & that they made up. Can’t wait for the next chapter.
hey u stop at the wrong time… come back, loved and enjoyed this chapter…please hurry, too good
The dialogue between Bette and Kit was outstanding. You really captured the essence of this sister relationship. Excellent chapter and I loved the banter between SGS and BP.
Azmama, You really do spoil me with your kind superlatives. You seem to savor each chapter and measure it on it’s own merit instead of looking forward to the next one, although I hope you do that too. Thank you so much.
bombastic bully, Oh yes, they will soon be making up in that bubble bath. Cover your eyes if you’re shy!
Kbergin47, If I recall correctly, this will be their first bubble bath and well, I know you can imagine……………..
Gummy Bear, You know by now I always try to stop with a mini-cliff hanger to tease my readers into coming back. Since our chapter hits seem to be growing, I hope it is working. Meanwhile, I’m just glad you keep coming back. My consistent reader/posters are very important to me. Thank you.
Like mush 1912 I read your story by accident. I started with the Hawaiian chapters which resulted in a night without much sleeep. I read your story from the beginning and was fascinated. It is a pity that your story does’t get the attention it is worth. It’s one of my favourite stories. I am from Germany and my English is not perfect, but I wanted to say thanks for the wonderful story.
Bette’s Babe, Sorry to be slow these days but I have got a lot on my plate. I know you are anxious for that next chapter but first they do have to resolve their morning differences. It won’t be long now and thanks for being here.
Mush1912, It’s nice to know that you thought enough of this story to get sleep deprived.. I hope you are all caught up. As for this story getting more attention, I don’t know how. The only outside hook I have to bring readers in is the plot summary and I do my best to attract attention there. Thanks for your concern though and if you have any good promotional ideas, please let me know.
September, Thanks for your post. Sorry about leaving you all hanging.. My chapter is ready to go so I hope you’ll all enjoy it.
Jurefesa, I am very happy to welcome you to the Adventure stories. I am sorry it took me a while to comment to you but I have been very busy. I can’t move on though until I address your post. I am very pleased to know you liked my story after coming upon it accidentally. You can’t know how happy I am that you represent another country and can still relate to my story. Thank you so very much for being here.
That is just…well..not nice leaving us hanging there it was just getting that erotic flavor you know. but i will forgive you as soon as you post the next update ;)
i sympathise jurefesa – i had a few nights where i was thinking i’ll just read one more chapter before i go to bed…2 hrs later still reading, damn sissee for making the story so addictive and i totally agree about it not getting the attention it deserves, we’ll have to get an ad on the site and tell people to read it!! btw sissee…a post would be nice????!!!