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The beginning of a friendship, chpt 46
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Mommy!!!!!!!!
Tina:
The strange thing was that her outburst seemed tottaly in place.
As if I could feel what she was feeling just by holding her close to me.
I could feel the beating of her heart against mine.
The trembling of her body, her soft and warm body, melted my heart.
I felt how her sobs became intenser, and gently kept stroking her back with my fingertips.
All I wanted at that moment was to hold her close.
The hurt she was feeling was flowing from her soul…
Her veins…
To mine…
Just as I intended…
There was so much pain behind those chocolatbrown eyes.
And when I withdrew slightly to wipe away those countless tears, I saw how it all had broken loose.
All those emotions, raging through her soul…
Her soul clearly visible in her warm eyes…
Bare…
But so incredibly beautifull I had to gasp for air.
It was as if with that gaze she gave me all of her.
She blinked before she shut her eyes, turning away her head.
God this is embarressing
She smiled shyly, and glanced back, bringing her hand to her face to wipe away the tears.
But I stopped her, wrapping my fingers around her wrist.
No it’s not…
I reached out to her face now, cupping half of it with my other hand.
Still surprised by the way my hand seemed made for this gesture.
The swirling feeling in my stomach…
My god… I had never been in love…
Never ever had I felt this breathtaking weakness of my knees just by looking, smelling or touching an other person…
The way she made me feel was like a miracle to me, and somehow I found it hard to believe that she could feel the same…
My heart dropped at the thought of her bright laugh when I had told her I had no idea how to make love to a woman…
She seemed to see my change of heart in my eyes because:
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again, thankyou….but that was too short
You better not be apologizing for the shortness of a 5 pager, ’cause then I’m doomed ;-) I’m with rockingirl on ‘Your Body Is a Wonderland’ btw, I love that song… and John Mayer, he’s my ideal man *sigh* Well, thnx for using your precious time to write, now I gotta go stand up, ’cause the back of my thighs are burned. :S Damn you, sun! ;-D
WOW!!!! Another Great CHapter. Thank you
the girls are sooooooooooooooo sweet!!!!!! thanks for the 5 pages your kill me with the stopping when it is getting good you want me dead lol i will say it to make you feel better longer
wonderful chapter, can’t wait for the next one
Oh how I have missed this story. Another wonderful chapter, look forward to when they get jiggy
sooooo glad so see this post, i am in love with how sweet this bette and tina are.please post ASAP. i know i am terrible at posting regularly but that doesn’t mean i can’t ask others to. i really did have a great time in holland and i hope to go over again next month.
if i was tina, i would say: shoe me now…i hope you’re getting there
Captain you are breaking my heart. I have already filled up one bucket with tears and am now reaching for the second bucket. These two are defintely soulmates and the show needs to get a gribe and fix them. This was so hard to read with Bette falling apart. All the hurt and anxiety of loosing a parent is unbearable for anybody but especially for a child. Tina already feels and understands Bette more than anybody else and Bette has those same feelings and desires towards Tina. Hopefully life will allow you to come back to us not only as an author but as our Tibette Captain.
yes i got a lolipop! how did you know green apple is my favorite?”I would be honored to show you how…If you want me to, I mean…” what kindof question is that bette she wants you so bad. hope you post soon any story :) =) 2 smileys for u.
Lamentamini – u are sharing come on be nice .”You do realize when they actually get there that all of our computers will short circuit and then spontaneously combust, right? I really should back up the hard drive before that happens… ” not only will my computer get fried half the world will be missing cold water because that will definatley be a cold shower alert!!!
wow… this is so touching… *sob sob* :D life is never easy and there’s always bitter in all the sweetness ;)
cummon porter teach her till she is purfect and may you keep on repetin it again and again and agiantht was a beautifull chapter M i totally loved it
Just wonderful. What a chapter! I am still totally in love with your writing. I can’t get enough of it. This chapter was so full of raw emotion and with such tenderness and passion it is breathtaking. Write more when you can – I can’t wait to read it!
Poor Bette. This was wonderful, really emotional. I loved it. Please don’t wait too long to post. (Look whose talking, I know…) Great stuff! *thumbs up!*
Some people thinks that children don’t remember. They just bury it and then dig it up again and again, When someone leaves a child they leave a child with lasten heartache. Poor Bette. 27 yrs of hurting. thanks
hey! i am happy to see your post! you did it! and did it great! i hope Tina will ask Bette to teach her somethings! your story is excellent! take care!
Yes, indeed, I love this one too. Just keep our girls in love with each other and let them find the happiness they both deserve. Lovely story.
Hey Captain Mom! ;) I loved ur chapter. I just finished reading the whole story. Its beautiful. But ure indeed killing us softly. I see a NC-17 coming soon… :P And I hope to talk to u soon. Take care, dear.
sounds like class will be in sesson very soon… and i have a feeling tina will be a star pupil… love this… please continue
Wow this is amazing and the way they talk is beautiful, love it. Ok post soon please, thanks!
If?! IF?! Um… yeah… Slow Burn Queen, I’m still lovin’it!
I want IC to put this chapter on the screen – this is so wonderful how you are showing their beginning and the vulnerability they both came into the relationship with. I love your writing and your going back and forth between their inner worlds as they try to open up to one another and to see what gets shared and what doesn’t – helps explains the gaps that exist even as we get close to another – have I said it before AWESOME!!
Awww so sweet and I loved Bette for saying “I would be honored to show you how…If you want me to, I mean…” So great :o)))
Why stopping here?. You’re a tease you know. Anyway I loved it.
mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm, sensitive…..
Poor Bette! Glad she’s finally able to open up to Tina about her past and why she was so upset. I’m sure Tina will gladly accept those lessons from Bette when she’s ready (who wouldn’t?).
I’m not sharing lollipops with anyone! MWAHAHA! You do realize when they actually get there that all of our computers will short circuit and then spontaneously combust, right? I really should back up the hard drive before that happens…
I remember when you use the Westlife’s song when Bette thought about Tina as taken and straight and during your last chapters I wanted you to use Your body is wonderland when they finally do it but you’re prolonguing it!! I loved this soft side of Bette, I think (or maybe I haven’t read) I ever read about Maxine’s leaving and how Bette suffered and let me tell you, I loved how you described it.
Capt. Mom that was beautiful =)
Oh come on… no more IF! Just show her, Porter. lol… sound like NC17 is getting closer AGAIN. *doing little happy dance*, please continue soooon :)
hey justy, im still here reading all your fic, keep them coming!!! cause they rock!!!! but yet you still like killing us softly, i suppose ill have to put up with it.
i cant wait to read more! of this one and your other stories too! please update asap! thanks!!! =)