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    The Greatest Love Story Ever Told

    Story written on April 14, 2010 by skimmer.
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    Story Shortlink: https://www.assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=75449
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    Chapter 19

    The look on Tina’s face left Bette in no doubt she had once again said the wrong thing, spitting feathers sprung to mind.

    Still mindful of the sleeping child lying just inches away Tina adapted the hushed angry tone “Me spoil it, how dare you, it wasn’t me who described it as nice, nice Bette really, that’s what we are now just nice”

    Bette wondered for a second if Tina had any idea how ridiculous she sounded, that thought disappeared as quickly as the blood that was now dripping from Tina’s nose.

    “Tina your nose is bleeding, you feeling ok” Bette asked overly concerned for a nose bleed but since the diagnosis she panicked every time Tina so much as tilted her head, so a nose bleed was more than enough for the panic meter to go into overdrive

    Tina raised her hand to her nose, surprised to see the flow of blood running down the back of it. Bette handed her a tissue “Don’t move I’ll go get Shane”

    “Bette stop panicking it’s just a nose bleed, it will stop…” Tina all but landed on the sleeping child as her head dropped the sudden onset of pain in her head immediately unbearable.

    “Tee, Tina, what’s happening” Bette was close to hysterical, the steady dripping of blood now gushing from Tina’s nose draining every last ounce of colour from her already pale complexion. “SHANE” she screamed loud enough to wake the dead, least of all a sleeping child, who awoke petrified, crying immediately his eyes opened and he saw all the blood. He jumped into Bette’s arms seeking reassurance when right now she didn’t have any to give.

    Tina collapsed onto the now available pillow clutching her head in the vain hope she could somehow waive off the imminent explosion.

    Bette torn between offering comfort to a now sobbing grandchild and Tina was just for a brief second relieved when Lizzie was the first to enter the bedroom quickly followed by the Al, Helena,Dana and little Alice, everyone except the one person she needed.

    “Where the fuck is Shane?, someone go get Shane NOW” she ordered before passing a still sobbing child to Lizzie “Take the children out of here” Bette wasted no more time, she knelt on the bed next to Tina who was lying face down not uttering a word or groan. Bette froze for a second, her hand suspended over Tina’s back waiting for the rise that would confirm the motionless was still breathing, when it didn’t come hysteria took over Bette roughly turned Tina over “Don’t leave me, don’t you dare leave me”

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    1. Im i seeing things Skimmy posted a chptr.well the chptr was sad i almost cried during the operation and afterwards excellent post, now please dont take soo long posting again.

    3. Fantastic chapter. Their remembrances of their life together was really sweet and loving. Did I miss the heart attack part or did you just not write it for us. That was a huge surprise when I read it. Hopefully Tina and Bette will be fine. Thanks for coming back and posting. Really missed this story. PPS

    4. Skimmer, you had me really, really worried there. Then it was alright when Tina remembered Bette forgetting the shoes and Shane poking fun at them standing in the middle of a monsoon after their wedding vows. And now… Now I’m worried again. Tina’s just got to be okay. And you have got to post again soon. Thank you for this chapter, skimmer, I loved it! :)

    6. Wow – “I’ll ask you to marry me every day”. You made me cry and I don’t cry very often while reading these stories. I too have missed this one. You are an excellent writer.

    8. hey there – you have me crying here and thats not good. You are going to make it right aren’t you ? thats not a suggestion – thats an order. You want to be locked in a room with emazon ? it can be arranged. That was really good mate – now what about the OTHER story ? ya remember ??

    9. I cried like….I loss someone i loved…especially in the operating room? god?……..I can’t think i can do it?..if someone I love is lying in there….And making a decision whether to continue or not……Hey finally caught you!…We’ve been trying to make to update this story in the other site?..would you still post it there?….MANY OF YOUR READERS ARE DYING FOR AN UPDATE!

    11. No you won’t let that happen, will you?Welcomeback with the story but please don’t let anything happen to Tina. Without her Bette is a wreck. PPVS

    12. Welcome back Skimmer! I have so missed this story. Was so sad and just absolutely amazing at the same time. Please post soon. thank you again for posting. Brilliant!

    16. Skimmer, this is such a good story, it deserves a happy ending.

      I hope that you will finish it. It doesn’t matter that it that has been a few years that you posted. Please come back.

      I hope that life treats you well!

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