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    The Greatest Love Story Ever Told

    Story written on April 14, 2010 by skimmer.
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    Story Shortlink: https://www.assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=75449
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    Chapter 19

    “Shane do you think it’s a good idea that she watches while you bore holes into my head” Tina asked already knowing the answer

    Shane shrugged and took up her position behind Tina’s head, checking she had everything she needed to perform the operation.

    “I’ll turn away for that part, but I’m not going anywhere, if Shane hadn’t threatened to have security throw me out I would be in here holding your hand” Bette responded through the intercom and did her best to smile, but it was one that didn’t quite reach her eyes, she had never felt this gut wrenching fear in all her years.

    “Ok, if everyone’s ready, I shall begin, music maestro” Shane instructed not caring who carried out her request. “Louder” she added in the hope it would at least drown out some of noise she was about to make as she removed a section of Tina’s skull.

    Taking a deep breath Shane started what she was sure was going to be a laborious task ahead. A short time later she was entering treacherous territory.

    “You feel any pain or discomfort Tina” Shane asked as she passed through the part of the brain that controlled hearing

    “No, I can’t feel a thing” Tina replied

    “Good” Shane said but she was thinking thank fuck, emotionally this was harder than she had imagined it would be and she motioned for the tech to wipe the sweat of her brow.

    Bette didn’t want to watch this was pure torture for her, watching Shane force a needle into Tina’s head. Maybe it wasn’t such a good idea for her to be here but the alternative of pacing the halls outside didn’t hold any greater appeal. She felt nauseous, standing upright on legs that were in no shape to hold her weight she wanted to be anywhere else but here, she swallowed hard, here is where she would stay until this nightmare was over.

    Tina who was keeping a keen eye on Bette’s state could tell she wasn’t doing so good, in fact she looked like she was seconds away from crashing in a heap on the floor “Babe, why don’t you go grab a coffee or something, we’re good here, right Shane” Tina asked, hopeful that combined they could convince Bette to leave. There was only one thing she could imagine being worse than lying here fully conscious while her brain was poked and prodded and that would be watching Bette lying here in her place.

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    1. Im i seeing things Skimmy posted a chptr.well the chptr was sad i almost cried during the operation and afterwards excellent post, now please dont take soo long posting again.

    3. Fantastic chapter. Their remembrances of their life together was really sweet and loving. Did I miss the heart attack part or did you just not write it for us. That was a huge surprise when I read it. Hopefully Tina and Bette will be fine. Thanks for coming back and posting. Really missed this story. PPS

    4. Skimmer, you had me really, really worried there. Then it was alright when Tina remembered Bette forgetting the shoes and Shane poking fun at them standing in the middle of a monsoon after their wedding vows. And now… Now I’m worried again. Tina’s just got to be okay. And you have got to post again soon. Thank you for this chapter, skimmer, I loved it! :)

    6. Wow – “I’ll ask you to marry me every day”. You made me cry and I don’t cry very often while reading these stories. I too have missed this one. You are an excellent writer.

    8. hey there – you have me crying here and thats not good. You are going to make it right aren’t you ? thats not a suggestion – thats an order. You want to be locked in a room with emazon ? it can be arranged. That was really good mate – now what about the OTHER story ? ya remember ??

    9. I cried like….I loss someone i loved…especially in the operating room? god?……..I can’t think i can do it?..if someone I love is lying in there….And making a decision whether to continue or not……Hey finally caught you!…We’ve been trying to make to update this story in the other site?..would you still post it there?….MANY OF YOUR READERS ARE DYING FOR AN UPDATE!

    11. No you won’t let that happen, will you?Welcomeback with the story but please don’t let anything happen to Tina. Without her Bette is a wreck. PPVS

    12. Welcome back Skimmer! I have so missed this story. Was so sad and just absolutely amazing at the same time. Please post soon. thank you again for posting. Brilliant!

    16. Skimmer, this is such a good story, it deserves a happy ending.

      I hope that you will finish it. It doesn’t matter that it that has been a few years that you posted. Please come back.

      I hope that life treats you well!

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