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The Laws of Attraction: Part Twenty Six (Final Chapter)
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In a strange way, Alice thought she was almost addicted to Gabby
because of the way she always returned to her despite the fact she knew
she would be hurt by her again. She couldn’t seem to help herself once
she was near Gabby and drawn into her delicious web of charm.
Odd as it sounded, Alice saw her relationship with Gabby as being
similar to the one a groupie has with her favorite band. Whenever Gabby
was near on one else existed and she was so happy, so *****
deliriously happy to have the screenwriter there. And when Gabby would
ask her out, no matter how wary she would appear outwardly on the
inside she was releasing a noise of delight that Gabby was asking her
out again.
It was sad and it was pathetic and it was something Alice wished she
could change but she couldn’t. It has been that way since the day they
met and she suspected it would always be that way. That was simply the
effect the brunette had on her as a person.
But if her relationship with Gabby was an addiction then her one with Dana was the cure.
Or perhaps, to be more politically correct and accurate it was rehab.
Being with Dana taught Alice everything that romantic love should be.
And with earnest determination and devotion, Dana worked until the
formidable chains Gabby had around her heart were untangled and ready
to be pushed off completely. That last step, the one to free Alice of
Gabby forever wasn’t something that Dana could do herself. Only Alice
had that ability and that’s what caused the athlete to tremble with
fear.
What if she worked long and hard for nothing? What if Alice didn’t want
to be free of Gabby? What if she wanted to wrap those chains around her
heart like they were a blanket that warmed her and kept her safe
instead of seeing them as something that would drag her down until she
slowly but surely began to emotionally wither away from unbearable
weight of wearing them? What if Alice decided she simply didn’t want
her? That she misread her emotions and really all she felt for Dana was
friendship mixed in with sexual attraction? What if Dana became the
friendly ***** so many accused Gabby of being?
Just the thought of that nearly killed her.
Something that Gabby didn’t fail to notice and some odd part of her was
jealous that Dana felt so ***** comfortable showing that. Mostly
because she felt the same way but she couldn’t allow herself to put
those feelings on display in the same way that the athlete was
currently doing. She found the very idea of it so goddamn repellant
that there was no way she could actually do it. Especially with Dana
there and the possibility of it getting out, her ***** sad Harlequin
romance behavior here and have it being used against her somehow. Gabby
knew it was paranoid to feel that way but she couldn’t help it. Ever
since she was a teenager she had masked her feelings behind a carefully
constructed wall of bitchy ***** behavior.
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I don’t know how I got so lucky but this story is the first TLW fic I’ve read and became one of my favorite. Yes, this is an end of an Era, I’m gonna miss seeing this title next to your name Dreiser. I’m sure your following stories along with the continuing ones will be at least this good. But somehow LOA will be number one in my heart. Thank you for your time.
that was beautiful! that was THE perfect ending! like Foxfire said you do have a way with words. i will look out for your next fan fic.
Like Bconfused – I had never read a fanfic and this was the first one I had read – it got me hooked not only on this story but all the other danish stories. you are an amazing writer and it is weird that this is ending, because i feel like it has been apart of my sundays for so long. guess i’ll just have to reread while waiting for your dana story. great job – perfect ending for such a great well written story. thank you.
This was the first fanfiction I’ve ever read too. It’s because of this one, I found this website. It seems like I’ve been reading it for ages, I can’t believe its over. It was amazing from start to finish, and it definately got me through the summer without the show lolIt was perfect. You are really something.
It really is like the end of an era here and like others this was my first fan-fic story and it was just soo engrossing and soo well written that it captivated me until now–the end. I can’t believe that it’s over but the way you ended it was great, I think everyone ended up just the way they were supposed to..it flowed very well. I can’t wait for your next fic…and never doubt that any of your chapters suck or that your writing is crappy…bc I think we can all agree that they don’t and it doesn’t.
Thanks for share your talent and for love Alice and Dana. Now to wait for your future and current stories.
It’ll be a strange, coming to the site and not finding anymore updates to this fic. Like many, your’s was one of the very first fic I read and I’ll definately miss this. But that was a perfect ending to a perfect sotry. The screenplay by Gabby was a masterstoke, I love Gabby *sigh*. But the fact that a Dana fic is on it’s way does makes up for this fic ending.
wonderful. really wonderful.
Excellent! That was wonderful Dreiser. I love your wit and your style. Thank you for all of the care and time that you put into this amazing story.
Great final chapter, even though I’m sad it’s finished. Thanks for writing this. Like others, I’ve often looked forward to updates of Laws more than to new episodes of TLW. Poor Gabby – loved the part about her hating wallowing dykes!
Awsome, just phucking awsome, that was great can’t wait for your next fic.
OK- so it took me a month to finally read this. Dreiser, this story got me hooked here, started my writing (for better or worse)It was a wonderfully fun, super sappy at moments, yet with relative angst story with a happy ending! Dana does love her lots and lots and lots! Anyone who can bring Monchichi’s into the same chapter as Boom Boom Boom will always have my respect!!!
*claps* I can’t believe it’s actually over. This fic captivated me more than just about any other I’ve read. You truly have a way with words. I couldn’t wait to find out what would happen, but now that I know, I’m sad it’s over.But…Danish! Squee! I knew it! This has so made my day. I really can’t wait for your next fic.
Just perfect.
its like the end of an era.
What an absolute perfect ending for this story. I love how you wrote Gabby at the end of this story, no one is a loser. Thank you for this story, I can honestly say, I’ve enjoyed it and looked forward to it as much as the show itself. Like I told you in the past I would read warning labels if they were written by you. Thanks again for this story and the adventure. I am looking forward to not only the other story you are still working on, but also anything you may write in the future. Deb
This is my all time favourite fan fic so obviously sorry to see it end…but what an ending!!! Only thing that has puzzled me all along was why no Lenore? I think I am right in saying she only made a brief appearance in this chapter and no other. Anyhoo just wanted to say how much I enjoyed the story and looked forward to reading this almost more than watching the show itself. I a huge Dana fan (not so much with Helacious) so will be keeping an eye out for your next fic. Thank you again for a great story. Danish forever!!!!!!!!
great and thank god that you did not make us wait to long for who alice really wanted to be with and the endding was great maybe there could have been one where that were to get married and have kids in it please post again soon I loved every min of this story thank you so much for it
hi five dreiser. its over but a nice ending to a fantablououso story ill miss reading it!