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The Power of Suggestion…Finale Part Two
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"Uh…wow Tina. I’d like to know."
Bette looked around the table, as one by one her friends silently nodded their heads in agreement with Shane. "Fuck," she mumbled to herself. "I am in so much trouble."
Tina had been resting her hand on Bette’s shoulder, totally aware that the heat from her touch was threatening to burn a hole through Bette’s suit jacket. Casually, she ran her hand along the brunette’s shoulders as she walked around and stood in front of her.
"Well, first of all, you both have to be naked. Isn’t that right baby…no clothes to get in the way?"
Bette wasn’t about to respond to Tina, knowing it would only encourage her.
"Now remember, Bette is a woman who loves foreplay. To her, foreplay is just as important as the actual making love part."
"Tina, please…you have made your point. What I did to Henry was wrong. Now, can we please stop this…"
Bette stopped cold as she watched Tina just smile and lick her lips.
"Now once you are at a place where you don’t think you can take it anymore…where the foreplay is about to become the final play, you sit Bette up on the edge of the bed, and straddle her."
"Oh shit…" Bette looked down, covering her face with her hands.
That’s right baby, you love it don’t you when you can feel my legs spread around you, my juices dripping down right onto your clit." Tina straddled Bette’s chair, and lowered herself down to where she was almost sitting on Bette’s lap, and then stopped.
Bette looked up, and Tina could see the lust swimming in the deep brown orbs staring back at her.
"Then once you are totally on top of her…"
"Enough!" Bette said with a force that caused Tina to stop in mid sentence. "That is enough Tina Kennard! The rest is NOT for public consumption!" Bette gently lifted Tina off of her, and then stood up. Grabbing a hold of Tina’s right wrist with her left arm, she bent down, wrapping her other arm around Tina’s right leg, and stood up, bringing a very surprised Tina with her as she tenderly threw her over her shoulder.
"Bette!!" Tina yelled through her laughter.
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I so loved this story. To funny Bette pulling Tina out of the car. Sea Thank you
OMG, that was extremely sexy and well, explosive. I was not sure that they were going to make into the house. Now that would have been a sight that I would have paid hard earned money to see. Bette bringing Tina to an orgasm right there on the sidewalk for all to see. Are you sure that you want to end this little wild story?
I had such a good time reading this. Please let out any other ideas of this nature that are jumping around in your brain. I enjoyed visiting with you in San Francisco.
You had fun writing it, we had fun reading it, and B&T…just had fun.
“TINA!!!” Bette yelped as she found herself being led up the sidewalk by her newly trimmed pubic hairs.” LMAO I didn’t even know that’s possible.. Loved it from the very beginning.. Thanks..
I’m with everyone. This was so funny and sexy and I’ve enjoyed it immensely. The scene in the Planet and outside B&T’s house was hilarious!
Sea, that was off the chain! You’re crazy!!!
Excellent and oh so sexy!
Good chapter. Love Bette carries Tina out of the planet and pulling Tina out of the car and the outside of B&T is so funny and hot. Thanks!
I just read this story and love ur sense of humour, the scenes at therapist, Planet and especially out side their house was hilarious lol:)))))))))))
this chapter was even crazier and i agree with helena, when i read about B&T together all i can think of is…well, whatever helena said…anyway, i think you should do finale part 3 and explain what happened after they get into the house and before they lived happily ever after :)
Someone’s horny. LOL.
hilarious!
Finally! Great fun, loved it.
Sea, you are completely out of your mind……that opening scene with the therapist was a riot. Bette did tell Tina to get hershit together; but I don’t think she meant like this. Tina is going to end up a looneytune just like Jenny and Moira / Max!……..Now for the rest of it….I somehow expected mind blowing sex. Although THAT didn’t happen within pages 1 – 4, it was still funny as hell nonetheless!! ANDDDDDD, I still think it should be you seeking therapy Sea, right beside Tina!
OMG! Hilarious. This is one hell of a crazy story. But i just love it! ^_^ I think BTF is right, Sea. You need to give us finale part 3 ;-) Pleeaaase…
As it should be!
seahurst –you are a twisted woman and i love you for it. jenny and helena ??? thats actually worse than hen and max – though thats cos i loathe Jenny. i again bow to you – totally brilliant
“TINA!!!” Bette yelped as she found herself being led up the sidewalk by her newly trimmed pubic hairs. “Tina…ouch…baby…oh…honey…ouch…slow down!!!” ROFL!!!!!!!!!!! Methinks someone was ready for some, uh, primal sex. ;)
I liked it Ms.S realy good!!!!!!!!!!!
just… lmao!
OMG U stopped there? lmao’Way meany, I was all excited, when they get into the house, we was gonna see some hot sreamy sex goin dwn, BUT I loved this lil story, I wished s3 ended like this, or maybe this could be in s4 somewhere .. maybe u could do a xtended chap of this, with the steamyness plz lol!
Seahurst, I can’t believe you wrote that but, I’m so glad you did. It was funny as all get out and rather HOT too. Now you must come back and tell us what happened once they got in the house and then end it. WE MUST KNOW. Tina had me all worked up with her lascivious description of what Bette needed so you must come back and tell us what happened, then hte BBQ and then what happens after everyone goes home. Helena and Jenny? When Tina was doing her description, and Shane was leaning forward to hear, I thought you were gonna tell us that Shane fell off her chair. Now I’m going to read the entire thing again. Thank you Seahurst.
One more vote for finale part 3! :)
Seahurst, I do believe that’s the first time I’ve ever seen the phrase “got ’em by the short hairs” actually illustrated. Oh well, Bette deserved it after making Tina exit the car the way she did. But how come we didn’t follow them inside for the main show?
Love it, love it, love it! I haven’t cracked up so much since – help me out here folk, was it – Captivated?
It’s Sunday, and I want to thank god (and Seahurst) for comic relief!
That was so funny and sexy all at the same time. Jenny and Helania.not so funny, Henery and Max well you get what you deserve. Thanks
Please – just one more part to the finale?!!? Loved the back and forth between B/T, especially short hairs,lol! Thanks for writing!
OMG….This was one crazy story……Is there any other funny/weird things that’s running around in your head? If so, feel free to keep sharing!!!!!!!
So great Sea, a way with words you have for certain! My god I was rolling of my chair with laughter again… Jenny/Helena LMAO Hope to read more from you soon!
ABSOLUTELY AMAZING…….I AM JUST…….AT A LOST FOR WORDS…..I…I….I….ERRRR….NEEDA COLD SHOWER……SEE YA LATER…..LMAO
1st……..I like that!!
Woo Hoo – crazy love, Sea.
Hahah… I love that Bette carries Tina out. And what Helena says after that… I think that might be a common issue among viewers of the show… You’re one twisted woman, but I love your stories and anxiously await your next endeavor!
Girl, you did it again, it’s still early in the morning overhere, I’m so horny….i’ve got to wake up my wife, she is so gonna like it. Thanks for that.
Crazy is right to describe this, but let’s add a word “Hot”