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The Power of Suggestion…Finale Part Two
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Walking towards the front door, Bette stops and turns around. Smiling and winking at their friends, she says, "Don’t even think about calling either one of us tonight. Got it?"
"Got it!!" They all repeat in unison, laughing at the women’s antics.
As Bette turns back around and starts out the door, Tina manages to place her hand on Bette’s butt and pushes herself up so she can see her friends. Smiling from ear to ear, bouncing with each step Bette took, she says, "But we will see you all at OUR house tomorrow afternoon for a family BBQ. Got it?!"
"GOT IT!!!" They all repeat again, laughing and doing a jig around the table, ecstatic that their two friends are back together again…and for good this time!
As she watched the door close behind the two women who were truly the heart and soul of this little family, Helena’s eyes started to roam around the room, her lust zooming in ready to lock onto a target. Spotting Jenny, she remembers their night together in Canada.
Feeling someone’s eyes on her body, Jenny trembled with anticipation, as a chill shivered down her spine.
Grabbing onto the writer’s hand, Helena starts towards the door, almost dragging the petite brunette behind her. "Well, come on then." Shaking her head, she asked, "Why is it whenever Bette and Tina are in a room together all I can think about is fucking someone?"
Jenny’s eyes widened and she covered her mouth. Turning her head, she smiled behind her hand, giving her friends a silent good-bye, as she practically tripped trying to keep up with a very horny and determined Helena.
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Bette pulled into the driveway and shut off the engine. Tina grabbed onto the doorknob, but before she could open the door, Bette stopped her.
"Are you sure this is what you what Tina?"
"Absolutely Bette."
"Because once you cross over that threshold into that house, there is no going back. We are a family for the rest of our lives. No more sexual confusion, no more treating each other like the enemy. Once you cross over Tina, there is only love, kindness, respect….and a butt load of sex! So, am I asking you one last time, are you sure this is what you want?"
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I so loved this story. To funny Bette pulling Tina out of the car. Sea Thank you
OMG, that was extremely sexy and well, explosive. I was not sure that they were going to make into the house. Now that would have been a sight that I would have paid hard earned money to see. Bette bringing Tina to an orgasm right there on the sidewalk for all to see. Are you sure that you want to end this little wild story?
I had such a good time reading this. Please let out any other ideas of this nature that are jumping around in your brain. I enjoyed visiting with you in San Francisco.
You had fun writing it, we had fun reading it, and B&T…just had fun.
“TINA!!!” Bette yelped as she found herself being led up the sidewalk by her newly trimmed pubic hairs.” LMAO I didn’t even know that’s possible.. Loved it from the very beginning.. Thanks..
I’m with everyone. This was so funny and sexy and I’ve enjoyed it immensely. The scene in the Planet and outside B&T’s house was hilarious!
Sea, that was off the chain! You’re crazy!!!
Excellent and oh so sexy!
Good chapter. Love Bette carries Tina out of the planet and pulling Tina out of the car and the outside of B&T is so funny and hot. Thanks!
I just read this story and love ur sense of humour, the scenes at therapist, Planet and especially out side their house was hilarious lol:)))))))))))
this chapter was even crazier and i agree with helena, when i read about B&T together all i can think of is…well, whatever helena said…anyway, i think you should do finale part 3 and explain what happened after they get into the house and before they lived happily ever after :)
Someone’s horny. LOL.
hilarious!
Finally! Great fun, loved it.
Sea, you are completely out of your mind……that opening scene with the therapist was a riot. Bette did tell Tina to get hershit together; but I don’t think she meant like this. Tina is going to end up a looneytune just like Jenny and Moira / Max!……..Now for the rest of it….I somehow expected mind blowing sex. Although THAT didn’t happen within pages 1 – 4, it was still funny as hell nonetheless!! ANDDDDDD, I still think it should be you seeking therapy Sea, right beside Tina!
OMG! Hilarious. This is one hell of a crazy story. But i just love it! ^_^ I think BTF is right, Sea. You need to give us finale part 3 ;-) Pleeaaase…
As it should be!
seahurst –you are a twisted woman and i love you for it. jenny and helena ??? thats actually worse than hen and max – though thats cos i loathe Jenny. i again bow to you – totally brilliant
“TINA!!!” Bette yelped as she found herself being led up the sidewalk by her newly trimmed pubic hairs. “Tina…ouch…baby…oh…honey…ouch…slow down!!!” ROFL!!!!!!!!!!! Methinks someone was ready for some, uh, primal sex. ;)
I liked it Ms.S realy good!!!!!!!!!!!
just… lmao!
OMG U stopped there? lmao’Way meany, I was all excited, when they get into the house, we was gonna see some hot sreamy sex goin dwn, BUT I loved this lil story, I wished s3 ended like this, or maybe this could be in s4 somewhere .. maybe u could do a xtended chap of this, with the steamyness plz lol!
Seahurst, I can’t believe you wrote that but, I’m so glad you did. It was funny as all get out and rather HOT too. Now you must come back and tell us what happened once they got in the house and then end it. WE MUST KNOW. Tina had me all worked up with her lascivious description of what Bette needed so you must come back and tell us what happened, then hte BBQ and then what happens after everyone goes home. Helena and Jenny? When Tina was doing her description, and Shane was leaning forward to hear, I thought you were gonna tell us that Shane fell off her chair. Now I’m going to read the entire thing again. Thank you Seahurst.
One more vote for finale part 3! :)
Seahurst, I do believe that’s the first time I’ve ever seen the phrase “got ’em by the short hairs” actually illustrated. Oh well, Bette deserved it after making Tina exit the car the way she did. But how come we didn’t follow them inside for the main show?
Love it, love it, love it! I haven’t cracked up so much since – help me out here folk, was it – Captivated?
It’s Sunday, and I want to thank god (and Seahurst) for comic relief!
That was so funny and sexy all at the same time. Jenny and Helania.not so funny, Henery and Max well you get what you deserve. Thanks
Please – just one more part to the finale?!!? Loved the back and forth between B/T, especially short hairs,lol! Thanks for writing!
OMG….This was one crazy story……Is there any other funny/weird things that’s running around in your head? If so, feel free to keep sharing!!!!!!!
So great Sea, a way with words you have for certain! My god I was rolling of my chair with laughter again… Jenny/Helena LMAO Hope to read more from you soon!
ABSOLUTELY AMAZING…….I AM JUST…….AT A LOST FOR WORDS…..I…I….I….ERRRR….NEEDA COLD SHOWER……SEE YA LATER…..LMAO
1st……..I like that!!
Woo Hoo – crazy love, Sea.
Hahah… I love that Bette carries Tina out. And what Helena says after that… I think that might be a common issue among viewers of the show… You’re one twisted woman, but I love your stories and anxiously await your next endeavor!
Girl, you did it again, it’s still early in the morning overhere, I’m so horny….i’ve got to wake up my wife, she is so gonna like it. Thanks for that.
Crazy is right to describe this, but let’s add a word “Hot”