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The Power of Suggestion…Finale Part Two
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"Bette Porter, did I not do as you asked? Did I not stay out of your life for the last three months? Did I not work every day, and spend a fortune in order to get my shit together? Did I not come to you today to tell you that I am ready to come home, and to be with whom I belong? Did I not do all those things Bette?!?"
"Well, yes…at least I.."
"No Bette! There is no at least…I am here, I am yours, and I am so fucking hot for you, that unless you take me across that goddamn threshold now, I am going to explode all over your beautiful leather seats! Now take me inside and give me a proper welcome home, dammit!!!"
Bette let out a deep guttural moan. "Oh my fucking God!!"
She jumped out of the car, and not wanting to waste time by running around to the passenger side, reached in and locked her fingers around Tina’s wrist, dragging her out of the car through the driver’s side door.
Tina fell out of the car, grabbing onto Bette’s arm to help pull herself upright. "Geez Bette! That’s not exactly what I had in mind!"
Bette stepped behind Tina, and in one smooth move, slammed her hard nipples into Tina’s back, while at the same time shoving her hand down the front of Tina’s slacks. It was Tina’s turn to moan, as she let her head fall back onto Bette’s shoulder. "Fuck," she whispered.
Spreading Tina’s soaking wet lips, Bette used her middle finger and very lightly circled around the blonde’s engorged clit. Whispering in her ear, she asked, "So, just how close to exploding are you T? Hmmm? Think you can make it into the house like this?"
It was all Tina could do to stay on her feet. After that whole scene at The Planet, and the torturous ride home, and now with Bette’s finger getting reacquainted with Tina on the sidewalk of their home for all to see, Tina couldn’t even formulate an answer to Bette’s question, let alone walk into the house. "I don’t…I don’t…fuck," the breath left her body.
With her free hand, Bette intertwined her fingers with Tina’s, then bringing both their hands behind Tina’s back, she rested them on her very hot crotch. "What do you want more T, to have me touch you, or you touch me?"
Tina released her fingers from Bette’s and felt around until she was at the waistband of Bette’s pants. With every ounce of strength she had, she shoved her hand down, past Bette’s thong, easily sliding her fingers into the drenched folds of the love of her life. "Both," she whispered. "I want both."
"Fuck," Bette blew out a breath into Tina’s hair. "Oh my God, you feel so good!"
Tina wrenched her eyes open, knowing they had to get into the house before someone saw them. "Come on baby," she panted. "Let’s go inside."
"Come for me first T. I want you to come for me, right here, right now. Then we can go inside."
"Dammit Bette!" Tina could feel her orgasm building, but did not want to experience such an intimate act outside for everyone to witness. So, she did the only thing she could think of. She grabbed Bette’s hand and pulled it out of her pants, letting out a soft whimper at the loss of her touch, and at the same time….
"TINA!!!" Bette yelped as she found herself being led up the sidewalk by her newly trimmed pubic hairs. "Tina…ouch…baby…oh…honey…ouch…slow down!!!"
"Get in this house now Bette! I want to be fucked, and I want to be fucked properly!! Not outside on a damn sidewalk in the middle of WeHo!!!"
With her hips thrust out in front of her, waddling up the stairs like a duck, Bette answered Tina with her very best alpha Yalie come back…
"Uh…yes baby."
And, they lived happily ever after…Bette and Tina and Angelica makes three!
THE END!
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I so loved this story. To funny Bette pulling Tina out of the car. Sea Thank you
OMG, that was extremely sexy and well, explosive. I was not sure that they were going to make into the house. Now that would have been a sight that I would have paid hard earned money to see. Bette bringing Tina to an orgasm right there on the sidewalk for all to see. Are you sure that you want to end this little wild story?
I had such a good time reading this. Please let out any other ideas of this nature that are jumping around in your brain. I enjoyed visiting with you in San Francisco.
You had fun writing it, we had fun reading it, and B&T…just had fun.
“TINA!!!” Bette yelped as she found herself being led up the sidewalk by her newly trimmed pubic hairs.” LMAO I didn’t even know that’s possible.. Loved it from the very beginning.. Thanks..
I’m with everyone. This was so funny and sexy and I’ve enjoyed it immensely. The scene in the Planet and outside B&T’s house was hilarious!
Sea, that was off the chain! You’re crazy!!!
Excellent and oh so sexy!
Good chapter. Love Bette carries Tina out of the planet and pulling Tina out of the car and the outside of B&T is so funny and hot. Thanks!
I just read this story and love ur sense of humour, the scenes at therapist, Planet and especially out side their house was hilarious lol:)))))))))))
this chapter was even crazier and i agree with helena, when i read about B&T together all i can think of is…well, whatever helena said…anyway, i think you should do finale part 3 and explain what happened after they get into the house and before they lived happily ever after :)
Someone’s horny. LOL.
hilarious!
Finally! Great fun, loved it.
Sea, you are completely out of your mind……that opening scene with the therapist was a riot. Bette did tell Tina to get hershit together; but I don’t think she meant like this. Tina is going to end up a looneytune just like Jenny and Moira / Max!……..Now for the rest of it….I somehow expected mind blowing sex. Although THAT didn’t happen within pages 1 – 4, it was still funny as hell nonetheless!! ANDDDDDD, I still think it should be you seeking therapy Sea, right beside Tina!
OMG! Hilarious. This is one hell of a crazy story. But i just love it! ^_^ I think BTF is right, Sea. You need to give us finale part 3 ;-) Pleeaaase…
As it should be!
seahurst –you are a twisted woman and i love you for it. jenny and helena ??? thats actually worse than hen and max – though thats cos i loathe Jenny. i again bow to you – totally brilliant
“TINA!!!” Bette yelped as she found herself being led up the sidewalk by her newly trimmed pubic hairs. “Tina…ouch…baby…oh…honey…ouch…slow down!!!” ROFL!!!!!!!!!!! Methinks someone was ready for some, uh, primal sex. ;)
I liked it Ms.S realy good!!!!!!!!!!!
just… lmao!
OMG U stopped there? lmao’Way meany, I was all excited, when they get into the house, we was gonna see some hot sreamy sex goin dwn, BUT I loved this lil story, I wished s3 ended like this, or maybe this could be in s4 somewhere .. maybe u could do a xtended chap of this, with the steamyness plz lol!
Seahurst, I can’t believe you wrote that but, I’m so glad you did. It was funny as all get out and rather HOT too. Now you must come back and tell us what happened once they got in the house and then end it. WE MUST KNOW. Tina had me all worked up with her lascivious description of what Bette needed so you must come back and tell us what happened, then hte BBQ and then what happens after everyone goes home. Helena and Jenny? When Tina was doing her description, and Shane was leaning forward to hear, I thought you were gonna tell us that Shane fell off her chair. Now I’m going to read the entire thing again. Thank you Seahurst.
One more vote for finale part 3! :)
Seahurst, I do believe that’s the first time I’ve ever seen the phrase “got ’em by the short hairs” actually illustrated. Oh well, Bette deserved it after making Tina exit the car the way she did. But how come we didn’t follow them inside for the main show?
Love it, love it, love it! I haven’t cracked up so much since – help me out here folk, was it – Captivated?
It’s Sunday, and I want to thank god (and Seahurst) for comic relief!
That was so funny and sexy all at the same time. Jenny and Helania.not so funny, Henery and Max well you get what you deserve. Thanks
Please – just one more part to the finale?!!? Loved the back and forth between B/T, especially short hairs,lol! Thanks for writing!
OMG….This was one crazy story……Is there any other funny/weird things that’s running around in your head? If so, feel free to keep sharing!!!!!!!
So great Sea, a way with words you have for certain! My god I was rolling of my chair with laughter again… Jenny/Helena LMAO Hope to read more from you soon!
ABSOLUTELY AMAZING…….I AM JUST…….AT A LOST FOR WORDS…..I…I….I….ERRRR….NEEDA COLD SHOWER……SEE YA LATER…..LMAO
1st……..I like that!!
Woo Hoo – crazy love, Sea.
Hahah… I love that Bette carries Tina out. And what Helena says after that… I think that might be a common issue among viewers of the show… You’re one twisted woman, but I love your stories and anxiously await your next endeavor!
Girl, you did it again, it’s still early in the morning overhere, I’m so horny….i’ve got to wake up my wife, she is so gonna like it. Thanks for that.
Crazy is right to describe this, but let’s add a word “Hot”