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The Set Up (11)
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In place of the gentle ‘sorry’ Tina might have liked to say, she pulled her confidence together and gently smiled instead. “Goodnight, Bette.” She watched the stunned brunette walk to her car, turning once more to wave goodbye before sitting in the vehicle and making her way home.
Before she even arrived, she dialled Shane from speed dial, putting her on speakerphone. “I totally botched it. Everything.” She was trying not to panic, waiting for her friend’s voice to calm her down.
“Whoa, hold on. What happened?” Shane sounded half-asleep, but Bette didn’t care. She was too upset to think logically, and she knew her best friend would be there for her.
“I fucking … told her! I told her I was a mother fucking player! Like the idiot I am! Why did I do that?!”
“Cause you care about this one,” Shane answered, looking over to the blond asleep in her bed. She’d been up partying since the night before, but she tried to sound alert as she slowly sat up in her bed.
“Don’t call her this one,” Bette complained, trying to control her breathing. “I’m really fucking scared. Please … Shane, I don’t know what to do.”
“Slow down. Where are you now?”
“Driving.”
“Bette, just pull over. You’re gonna get into an accident.”
“I’m fine.”
“Just pull the fucking car over. I’m cabbing it to wherever you are.” Shane tossed a look over her shoulder at the girl who was stirring into wakefulness. She covered the phone with her hand, stepping into her pants. “Got a friend issue. Be back later.”
The girl gladly went back to sleep, and Bette gave Shane her location, and it wasn’t long until she arrived, tapping at the passenger-side window, freezing in the cold night air.
“Fuck …” she groaned, getting into the car.
“You’re on quite a bender,” Bette said plainly, as she’d had some time to calm down in her spot, parked in a residential area. She spoke the words because she was worried for Shane, too.
“Yeah, well, that’s me. Now tell me about Tina.” Shane blew warm air into her hands just as Bette turned on the heat for her.
“I’m sorry. It’s cold out tonight, and you were probably sleeping at this early hour because god-knows-why, and-”
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Great Chapter!!! Angie I think is a little jealous of Bette. I hope it’s time for Tina to tell Bette about Angies dad. Glad Tina called Bette and left a message. Thank you PPS
i weally enjoy it thank you this story is awesome mmmmmmmooooorrrreeee please!!!
Great update. thank you.
I just can´t get enough! I need more! :)
this story has me hooked bad!.I love Bette to go ahead,despite being afraid,that she says i am this,take me or leave me. She really is playing for the love! and about Angie i don’t think she has a problem with Bette and Tina relationship,maybe she is being bullied at the school or maybe she doesn’t understand her mother being a lesbian (kids are complicated)and i also have the same question like seduction,Tina referring to herself as being a lesbian virgin is an accurate reason for Bette’s lust? it worth for me ha! it’s HOT. PPVS!!!
Really enjoying this story. Its emotion packed and you give us more hot scenes than anyone could ask for. Thank you. PPS.
so glad tina called bette… hey this all happened way before they even met… i have a feeling tina’s ex is the real reason… can’t wait to read what happened with them… aldo wondering whats up with angie… i have a idera, but i’ll wait to see how you write it… great chapter… pps
Great chapter!! I really love your writing. Some people that write great NC-17’s ,like you, dont always do so good with the heavy emotional stuff and yours is great! PPS!
Glad that Tina called Bette, I believe that Bette can now sleep more peaceful.I love your stories, awaiting the next update. thank you.
Thank you very much for another amazing chapter GR!! :-) I am glad that Tina was calling Bette. Also happy that finally Bette do her confession and I guess from Tina’s reaction is more on her personal bad experience.. Maybe Angie’s father was a player who take gullible Tina for granted and then leave her when she was pregnant!? Hm.. I wonder what happen to Angie.. Is she worry sick about Tibette closeness?! Well… I should stop babbling and wait for your update, so there won’t be anymore wild guessing :-p lol PPVS GR!! ;-) thanks!!
Bette did the right thing,she was honest with Tina.Tina really overreactet.Great update,thank you.
The Birthday Wish Hello GrindRight, I ‘m enjoying this story. Although I must admit it’sbringing back memories from my past. I too was once a player. I knew justwhat to say and do. “Dam the kitty cats tight.” Sorry I got lost for a moment.Back to the subject, my greatest concern is for Angelica. Bette mentioned to Shane that she does not love Angelica while confessing her love for Tina. Is it possible for Bette to give Tina real love while she herself is learning what love means? On the other hand, was Tina’s inference referring to herself as being a lesbian virgin an accurate reason for Bette’s lust? Do your thing keep grinding right!
Well, Bette, that might not have been the most artful delivery of the “player” news, but you can’t be smooth all the time. Listen to the yoda, you must. :)
Hey GR ✋😃 so loving this story and the direction you’re taking it in. Thank you so much for sharing it with us.
Thanks for the update. I think Tina had a right to be upset. Bette is the first woman she has been with so this is all new to her. For all she knows Bette tells all the women that she’s with that they are special and she’s a “changed woman” because of it. I think Tina is right to be skeptical. People don’t usually change. Bette will need to prove it over time. I’m glad Bette told her before she found out another way. It’s a good start for her new way of relating to a woman. I hope she sticks with it and I hope Tina gives her a chance. Looking forward to the next update.
Bette was a player and changed because of Tina. Great chapter.
Daaaammmnnn Bette got it bad!!!!
That was great and hope they will talk more