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To Live Without You (Chapter 14)
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"Hey Al, you remember my double’s partner Victoria." Victoria would have rather Dana just said partner or friend but double’s partner, that’s a step back. Victoria said hello to Alice, Tina, Bette, and Shane, she looked back to Dana who half-stared at Alice, the writer looked at her watched and panicked.
"Shit…I gotta go pick him up…um Shane let everyone what to do and have Carmen spin until I get back." Shane raised her beer and began corralling the guests into the backyard, Dana stared at Alice as she rushed through the large glass doors, picking up a beer and downing half of it in one sip realizing this was going to be a long night.
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Alice swung by Cliff’s place thirty minutes before the Super Bowl was supposed to start, she knocked on the door and was presented with green blue and white roses before even seeing her boyfriends face.
"My girlfriend is amazing and wants to watch my team win the Super Bowl," Alice smiled as she moved the flowers from Cliff’s face and kissed him passionately, as the kiss grew more intense Cliff began sliding his hands up Alice’s shirt. The writer smiled into the kiss moving his hands and turning to walk out of the door, Cliff chuckled grabbing her by the waist and pulling her back into him. His fingers roamed at the waistband of her panties, he whispered in her ears as kissed on her neck.
"Where are you going? Do we have somewhere to be?" Alice shook her head leaning back to give Cliff more access,
"…No, but I have…dinner in the oven and if I still want an apartment to go home to we should probably go in the next ten minutes…and there’s also that little insignificant game coming on, I think it’s called the Super Bowl." Cliff smiled sucking on her neck harder, he knew that biting on little spot between her shoulder and the slope of her neck would cause Alice to do anything. He teased her nibbling on her spot
"Ten minutes is plenty of time to do what I’m thinking of," Cliff slipped his hand into Alice pants slowly moving his finger along her clit, the writer turned around pulling him against the wall with her and moving to unzip his pants. Cliff stopped her kissing her neck before her explained,
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I was so happy to see your update. Dana’s in a bit of a downward spiral. Will Alice be the one to save her? Update soon. I can’t wait to see what Alice says.
ClosetDana, you are so entertaining. Slo-mo Dana, lol. “you let that out and your house, your whole block, will be burned to the ground” that comment stuck with me. The visual you gave me of Alice against the wall with her mouth open in orgasm… shouldn’t be Cliff though.I’m sure Alice wouldn’t have to direct Dana on what to do or how to do it.Man… Dana better get that head on straight, that pill-popping, beer-drinking woman is going to find herself in a whole lot of trouble. Those two need to tackle each other and show us some real action, if you know what I mean. NOOOOO… don’t move in with him!!! What are you doing to me??? I hope you have something satisfying coming up cause you don’t want to see me cry… trust me, you don’t. Want the Gena/Vic hookup. Make me proud darlin!
Whoo-hooo…I get to comment under my other great Danish writer (besides Master layla), I find both you gals writing amazing, am so happy to be able to read your fics…brteyes, love your stuff. I was so sad to see that Dana is hurting, but it feels good to see this side cause IMHO I always found that it was Alice who had shown the most pain in their break-up. Dana was sorta shallow in S3 and that wasn’t how I saw them in S1-2, I needed to see Dane downward spiral as well. If I haven’t said it mate, bloody awesome job. Cheers…
I love updates. I must say that you are quite the impressive writer. I really enjoy your fics. This one really has me hooked. I admit that I have been known to yell at the computer while reading it. Alice and Dana get so close and then…BAM! something happens and more drama ensues. It is definitely an interesting piece. I’m worried about Dana, and hope that she can get on the right track…with the help of Alice of course. I can’t wait to read more. Please update soon.Pheww! All done. I promise, no more drive bys…or um…read and runs without comments. Keep up the great writing.
DANA – stop the drugs. actually i don’t mind dana on drugs as long as she’s ALIVE. i love this story. post soon.
you just love doing the chiffhangers but I love it please post soon and who will save dana I think that only alice can help her great post
i just caught up with this story and i luv it : )
Another great update. I’m sure Alice will be the one to “save” Dana from the drugs and from Victoria. They just belong together. Love this story, looking forward for what’s in store.
Oh damn, they were so close… Drama, that’s what you writers love…and thats what gets me hooked. :) I hope Victoria will talk to Dana about her drugproblem… Btw, I really liked the (minor) interaction between Alice and Dana, a bit jealous…weren’t they? :) And to answer the question, was it a good thing or a bad hing that Shane erased the message. Maybe it’s good thing that they spent time apart and than on the other hand maybe they would live happily ever after (I know, in real life that doesn’t happen and your story is much more realistic :D).Oh well, we will never know. ;)