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    Wings of An Angel – Bette and Tina

    Story written on June 30, 2005 by Leo Paradise.
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    Number of Comments: 23
    Words: 4017
    Story Shortlink: https://www.assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=55128
    Author Notes:

    Just another love story from the beginning

    Bette

     

    She is the essence of an angel; bold, beautiful and sweet.  Her presence within my inner circle brought so much peace and tranquility that I wasnt sure if she was even real.  Feeling my way into the soul of who this stunning woman is instantly takes my breath away.  I watch her walk to a round table where other women have gathered and is she greeted with welcoming hugs and kisses.  I cant take my eyes off of her; whether it be for fear of never seeing her again or whether it be for fear of knowing that I could lose myself within her. 

     

    Her clothes fit her like a glove displaying the perfect symmetry of her body; especially in those low rise jeans.  Her skin is the color of vanilla with a hint of strawberry, which happens to be my favorite fruit; favorite for its sweet, tangy taste.  My mouth waters from the vision of myself drinking her juices dry.  The eyes of perception are the shades of a golden sunset, quiet and serene, taking your mind to the depths of natures hidden core of where the sky and ocean finally meet.  Her smile is the gateway to heaven, pulling my most inner thoughts and spirit to reveal all truths and secrets that I have locked away.  You feel safe and loved; her protective armor to keep you sheltered from harm.  

     

    Long, flowing hair that reminds me of yellow long stemmed roses being praised on a warm winters day; delicate petals held together with overwhelming strength.  The Gods blessed her with an enchanting temple to tease and tempt all creatures (big and small) because for those who looked upon her felt the pull of desire and lust.  A graceful neck that I could nibble on all day, tapered with narrow smooth shoulders connected to arms of warmth and security.  Full pert ***** made to nourish a hungry child and to feed the never ending appetite of her soulful lover.  I could encircle her waist with both arms while pulling her against my wanton body to feel the firm, well defined curve of her derriere.  Shapely toned legs that appear to go on forever; muscular to hold her mate tight in the throes of passion and gentle enough to caress with the stroke of my hand.

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    3. Leo Paradise. Oh this is simply quality stuff at work here! I love the flow,the beautiful words, the air of anticipation, the sexual tension, I can’t recall ever reading something this beautiful in quite while from this achieve, it reads like a poetry, very melodious. A very promising start indeed, I look forward to see how the rest of the story will unfold and thank you for sharing this, it is a delightful read!

    6. A true poem, as delicate as a flower, as light as a ray of sunshine : simply beautiful. Thank you so much for such a magical moment and please, please continue this way !

    12. It would be a great diservice if you didn not continue. Your writing is exquisite, it is an absolute must that you take us on their journey of discovery. Brilliant!

    14. Wha tha…? Where the hell have you been, girl?!! You are so gifted! That was brilliant!! Look at all my !!!!!! I’m just sayin’!…you have to continue this story ’cause I am soooo hooked already. Thank you.

    15. First of all….um….WOW! It’s amazing. You truly are a talented writer and I must say I’m hooked. I do however have one tiny bit of constructive criticism. (please don’t hurt me, cos honestly your story is brilliant), Just…for the dialogue…when you put things like Tina: “Tina’s dialogue”, it really takes away from the flow and style of the story, and I know you are way, way above that. I’m sorry, I didn’t mean to sound rude, and your writing truly is amazing, keep up the good work!
      5 Stars for sure :)

    16. I must echo the sentiments of all those who posted before me! This is simply divine. You words flow across the page in a poetic fashion leaving me longing for more! Terrific!

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