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    Wings of An Angel – Bette and Tina

    Story written on June 30, 2005 by Leo Paradise.
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    Number of Comments: 23
    Words: 4017
    Story Shortlink: https://www.assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=55128
    Author Notes:

    Just another love story from the beginning

     

    To completely describe her in one word takes very little thought; she is gorgeous.  Face is delicate, but reveals dynamic characteristics of gentleness, judgment, patience and love.  High cheek bones, a small petite nose, a reflection of maturity all brought together with the most luscious lips I have ever seen.  Lips, the color of coral pink, inviting you to sample at your leisure.  Something I would take great pleasure in doing, to tell the truth, nothing would please me more then to mold my lips against hers and taste my fill.  I close my eyes, take a deep breathe and imagine kissing her.  She tastes like peaches, mixed with ecstasy and rum; a deadly combination.  I slowing open my eyes to catch a glimpse of her again and to my surprise, I find her even more beautiful.  I am compelled into silence by the mysterious beauty. 

     

    I knew I could never forget the drunken feeling of intimacy as my body responded just by watching her.  She was the divine reason of being a woman; divine in that my life has forever changed.  I didnt realize how much I missed her until I found her.  At this very moment, I didnt realize how much I needed her.  I try to communicate my inner thoughts to her, Can you feel me?  From just one look, do you know how you have affected me.  Can this be real?

     

    Tina

     

    I felt her before I saw her.  My soul knew her before I could envision her face.  I feel her presence.  I sensed her watching me from the moment I stepped through the door; not letting me out of her sight for a second.  I feel her wanting me.  My body begins to tingle knowing that its other half is only a few feet away.  I mentally leave the conversation my friends are having and start looking around the restaurant to find her.  A minute hasnt even passed and I am already frustrated that I havent laid my eyes upon her.  Where is she?

     

    The Planet is extremely busy today for a Sunday afternoon; making my connection with her even more difficult.  I see too many faces, see too many colors, seeing all that is not her.  I close my eyes, take a deep breathe and let my conscious guide me to my fate.  I anxiously await to feel her again, to have her touch me again, to call me again.  I silently ask Where are you?  Please . . . . . tell me.  A voice, soft as silk, crawls into my being and whispers, Right here waiting for you.  All you have to do is look.

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    3. Leo Paradise. Oh this is simply quality stuff at work here! I love the flow,the beautiful words, the air of anticipation, the sexual tension, I can’t recall ever reading something this beautiful in quite while from this achieve, it reads like a poetry, very melodious. A very promising start indeed, I look forward to see how the rest of the story will unfold and thank you for sharing this, it is a delightful read!

    6. A true poem, as delicate as a flower, as light as a ray of sunshine : simply beautiful. Thank you so much for such a magical moment and please, please continue this way !

    12. It would be a great diservice if you didn not continue. Your writing is exquisite, it is an absolute must that you take us on their journey of discovery. Brilliant!

    14. Wha tha…? Where the hell have you been, girl?!! You are so gifted! That was brilliant!! Look at all my !!!!!! I’m just sayin’!…you have to continue this story ’cause I am soooo hooked already. Thank you.

    15. First of all….um….WOW! It’s amazing. You truly are a talented writer and I must say I’m hooked. I do however have one tiny bit of constructive criticism. (please don’t hurt me, cos honestly your story is brilliant), Just…for the dialogue…when you put things like Tina: “Tina’s dialogue”, it really takes away from the flow and style of the story, and I know you are way, way above that. I’m sorry, I didn’t mean to sound rude, and your writing truly is amazing, keep up the good work!
      5 Stars for sure :)

    16. I must echo the sentiments of all those who posted before me! This is simply divine. You words flow across the page in a poetic fashion leaving me longing for more! Terrific!

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