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    Wings of An Angel – Bette and Tina

    Story written on June 30, 2005 by Leo Paradise.
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    Number of Comments: 23
    Words: 4017
    Story Shortlink: https://www.assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=55128
    Author Notes:

    Just another love story from the beginning

     

    My eyes swiftly open, I turn to my immediate left and are swept into the most compelling deep brown chocolate eyes I have ever seen.  Our minds intertwine, two single thoughts woven into one string quartet; playing a tale of rhythm, volume and base.  With all the sounds surrounding us and from the moment our eyes locked, all I could hear was the beating of  my own heart.  Drumming a song titled, Its you, its me, its us.

     

    My god . . . . . shes beautiful.  No. . . . . shes exquisite.  Shes . . . . . all woman.  I experience an arousal of new heights and depths that hasnt happened to me before.  My blood travels like a rushing river within my veins sending an electric current through out my entire body.  Lightning struck the center of my throbbing core.  Who is she?

     

    She has the face of a queen; strong, purposeful and true.  I explore from the dark recesses of her soul, to the smooth texture of her nose, polished rosy cheeks to come to the end of my journey at her mouth; an intoxicating, voluptuous, kissable portal.  A portal that will lead me to an island of adventure.  I nearly jumped out of my skin as I fight the urge to walk across the room to partake of her offering.  My body temperature rises as I follow the tip of her moistened tongue gliding across her full bottom lip to slowly move upward to continue the act of wetting her top one.  As I gaze upon her, the suns reflective rays suddenly break through the clouds to bestow her lips the color of golden bronze.  She smiles at me and I shyly smile back at the realization that I have been caught.  That doesnt stop me from exploring further.

     

    She has wavy, brown, fudge like hair that trickles past her shoulders to fall mid way down her back.  My hands crave to run my fingers through her glorious mane to encompass the rich texture of a beautiful waterfall.  Her skin color reminds me of cinnamon; a spice that adds the necessary flow to enhance the right mixture of butter, sugar and honey.  I can just imagine how sweet she is.   For just a moment, I drown myself into her world and devour her realm with the tips of my fingers.  She has been waiting for me; wet, warm and smelling of heated arousal.  I inhale deeply to catch my breathe as the image of loving her with my hands stirs me to complete her satisfaction.  I want her.  I  want to bring her to an orgasmic climax whereby she screams my name over, and over, and over.  How can this be happening to me?  I dont even know her name.

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    3. Leo Paradise. Oh this is simply quality stuff at work here! I love the flow,the beautiful words, the air of anticipation, the sexual tension, I can’t recall ever reading something this beautiful in quite while from this achieve, it reads like a poetry, very melodious. A very promising start indeed, I look forward to see how the rest of the story will unfold and thank you for sharing this, it is a delightful read!

    6. A true poem, as delicate as a flower, as light as a ray of sunshine : simply beautiful. Thank you so much for such a magical moment and please, please continue this way !

    12. It would be a great diservice if you didn not continue. Your writing is exquisite, it is an absolute must that you take us on their journey of discovery. Brilliant!

    14. Wha tha…? Where the hell have you been, girl?!! You are so gifted! That was brilliant!! Look at all my !!!!!! I’m just sayin’!…you have to continue this story ’cause I am soooo hooked already. Thank you.

    15. First of all….um….WOW! It’s amazing. You truly are a talented writer and I must say I’m hooked. I do however have one tiny bit of constructive criticism. (please don’t hurt me, cos honestly your story is brilliant), Just…for the dialogue…when you put things like Tina: “Tina’s dialogue”, it really takes away from the flow and style of the story, and I know you are way, way above that. I’m sorry, I didn’t mean to sound rude, and your writing truly is amazing, keep up the good work!
      5 Stars for sure :)

    16. I must echo the sentiments of all those who posted before me! This is simply divine. You words flow across the page in a poetic fashion leaving me longing for more! Terrific!

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