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Wings of An Angel – Bette & Tina – Chapter 7
Shane’s other thoughts are interrupted upon the arrival of Alice and Dana; whose skins are gleaming with moisture after participating in a dance marathon for the past forty five minutes. Dana takes her seat and says, “Your energy level still amazes me”. Everyone expectedly looks to
As Bette and Tina reach the center stage to join the other dancers, the slow erotic beat takes a different direction to spin into a vibrant reggae song; a song that creates a tempting melody to touch, tease and seduce your partner. The way the crowd began to move their bodies was a sensual production of a seductive salsa melody that compelled the innocent to twist, to hug, to squeeze, to kiss, to caress, to allure their cautious prey within their passionate clutch. The only barrier that controlled their restricted movement of touching each other bare was the clothing that they wore; clothing that obstructed the need to feel the closeness of skin as the climatic energy of combustible body heat ignited their flaming soul. Bette and Tina performed a dynamic duo of rhythmical motions that portrayed the feverish pitch of ecstasy, desire, arousal, and orgasmic celebration. The invocation surrounding them necessitated their fellow dancers to stand still and watch for there wasn’t a single person who could compete against the swirling passion. Bette and Tina were driven by an unforeseen force to conquer the thunderous craving that dominated their minds; falling into a world of their own solitude forgetting all, but each other. As the song drummed its last chord, Bette held Tina closer to whisper in her ear, “It’s time, T”. Bette and Tina silently made a path to the exit while their watchful friends knowingly smiled at their departure.
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(43 votes, average: 3.47 out of 5)
Amazing! You have revived my hope that passion like that really does exist! I think I need to go back to bed now, or maybe a cold shower! *wink, wink*
Hot, Hot super hot!!
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!! my computer is on fire you have buy me new one!!!!!!!!!!!!
Wow, I have read this so many times, it was so sweet, esp B telling T “It’s time” and T asking B to “teach her” at the end. Post more soon!!!
dear god in heaven, that was by far one of the best love scenes i have ever read, including books….i literally had my mouth hanging open so long, i have no saliva left….you rock!!!!!
Excellent detail. Very nice. Post again soon for us, please.
WOW that was hot,sexy and beautiful THANKS
Oh my god!!!! I am totally speechless, thankyou for that unexpected pleasure. I don’t even know how to respond to a chapter like that…thankyou..what will you give us from Tina’s turn??
Good God .. that was beautifully sexy. Thank you for your time, the commitment shows and it makes your stories well worth the wait. Thank you. Have a great weekend
Well now, I gotta say that was fucking great, wait no it was….. see look at me not knowing what to say. that doesn’t happen often. Now sneaky hmmm that’s the first time I have been called that. for the record I was just trying to be friendly LMAO. so lessons are expensive?? you don’t give college students any discounts??? LOL
Well I guess if you give us another nc-17 I will forgive you for that mini vacation you just took from writing.
So who’s flirting with who????
can’t wait until next chapter!!!
Just getting in and log on……And look what I find……A long awaited post from Leo Paradise…….Now I can go on and say it took you long enough but you know I like the ANTICIPATION…..so I’m not……Great job…..Now looking forward to Bette teaches Tina how to love her…..Post Soon!
Damn Leo! That was great. Your skills are the bomb! I feel like I read 5 pages of 4play….you go you! Nice…..very nice.
But, I know your not done yet; its now Tina’s turn to pleassure and please Bette which means – say it with me ya’ll….
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Damn so fucking hot and sexy and awesome, love it. Now let see how Bette gonna teach Tina how to show her love. Post soon please, thanks!
OMG..serious the most fucking hot nc-17 ever i dont need just a cold shower i need relieve right now..lol..and that line “i born for you”..priceless..ok cant wait for payback and how great student Tina will be..lol..post soon please
That was so HOT! Can’t wait for Bette to give Tina lessons on how to please her. Next chapter coming soon i hope.
Haha it would literally be Bette’s pleasure! Hehe Yes I must say, Bette definitely pleased Tina in this chapter!! Excellent job, Leo! It was well worth the wait. I love how descriptive your writing style is and how you tie all aspects in, from their emotions to the ambience of the room. Congrats on your first NC-17, very well done! Thank you!!
great, great job, luved it@!!!!!!!!!!