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    Wings of An Angel – Bette & Tina – Chapter 7

    Story written on September 24, 2005 by Leo Paradise.
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    Story Shortlink: https://www.assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=56760
    Author Notes:

    just another love story from the beginning.

     

    Saturday Evening – The Planet

     

    The Planet was crammed with Dana’s family and closet friends to enjoy the festivities of her birthday.  The place was decorated with rainbow balloons flying high and laying low, colorful string confetti covering every piece of furniture available, an enormous bold typed banner displaying ‘Happy Birthday Dana’, and presents piled five feet high.  The bass volume speakers were bellowing a variety of music from techno, salsa, reggae, R&B and country to please the mixture of the crowd.  The atmosphere created a vibe of excitement that flowed throughout the club touching the spirit of everyone present.  The only persons missing from the party were Alice and Dana.  “Dana’s birthday is today right?” Tina asks as she glances at her watch.  “It’s almost 9:00.  We have been here since 7:30″.  Shane has this expression on her face when she says, “Remember how late they were for their own wedding shower because they . . . how should I say this . . . lost the track of time”.  Tina thoughtfully returns Shane’s look and removes her cell phone from her purse with the intention of disrupting their ***** addicted friends.  When she is about to press the send button, Dana’s mom screams, “Their coming.  Everyone quiet”.

     

    Outside the Planet, Alice is dragging a reluctant Dana behind her while trying to rush to the door, without much success.  “Why are you in such a hurry, Al?  Kit will hold our table.  It wouldn’t be the first time we were late”.  Alice stops to turn to Dana with a look of utter shock expressed on her face.  “Did I hear you correctly?  After the workout you gave me, in continuous thirty minute intervals I might end, my body needs energy.  I am starving.  Feed me woman”.  Dana couldn’t phantom Alice‘s insistence to have dinner out.  “Al, I could have easily fed you at home; butt naked with black high heels on.  What better way to celebrate my birthday then to fed my body to my hungry wife?”  Alice eyes travels the length of Dana’s body and her breathing increases in speed as the picture of lavishing Dana on top of the dinner table tempts her wide senses into overdrive.  “I’ll make you regret those words, but later.  Food, I need food”.  Dana sulks at her misfortune and walks pass Alice intentionally saying, “See if you get anymore tonight”.  Alice thinks to herself, ‘Oh.  I’ll be getting and coming all night.  After tonight, I’ll have to fight you off with a stick.  I might even use your stick?  I love my life’.

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    1. Amazing! You have revived my hope that passion like that really does exist! I think I need to go back to bed now, or maybe a cold shower! *wink, wink*

    4. Wow, I have read this so many times, it was so sweet, esp B telling T “It’s time” and T asking B to “teach her” at the end. Post more soon!!!

    5. dear god in heaven, that was by far one of the best love scenes i have ever read, including books….i literally had my mouth hanging open so long, i have no saliva left….you rock!!!!!

    8. Oh my god!!!! I am totally speechless, thankyou for that unexpected pleasure. I don’t even know how to respond to a chapter like that…thankyou..what will you give us from Tina’s turn??

    9. Good God .. that was beautifully sexy. Thank you for your time, the commitment shows and it makes your stories well worth the wait. Thank you. Have a great weekend

    10. Well now, I gotta say that was fucking great, wait no it was….. see look at me not knowing what to say. that doesn’t happen often. Now sneaky hmmm that’s the first time I have been called that. for the record I was just trying to be friendly LMAO. so lessons are expensive?? you don’t give college students any discounts??? LOL
      Well I guess if you give us another nc-17 I will forgive you for that mini vacation you just took from writing.
      So who’s flirting with who????
      can’t wait until next chapter!!!

    11. Just getting in and log on……And look what I find……A long awaited post from Leo Paradise…….Now I can go on and say it took you long enough but you know I like the ANTICIPATION…..so I’m not……Great job…..Now looking forward to Bette teaches Tina how to love her…..Post Soon!

    12. Damn Leo! That was great. Your skills are the bomb! I feel like I read 5 pages of 4play….you go you! Nice…..very nice.

      But, I know your not done yet; its now Tina’s turn to pleassure and please Bette which means – say it with me ya’ll….

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    14. OMG..serious the most fucking hot nc-17 ever i dont need just a cold shower i need relieve right now..lol..and that line “i born for you”..priceless..ok cant wait for payback and how great student Tina will be..lol..post soon please

    16. Haha it would literally be Bette’s pleasure! Hehe Yes I must say, Bette definitely pleased Tina in this chapter!! Excellent job, Leo! It was well worth the wait. I love how descriptive your writing style is and how you tie all aspects in, from their emotions to the ambience of the room. Congrats on your first NC-17, very well done! Thank you!!

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