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Wings of An Angel – Bette & Tina – Chapter 7
Located a few meters in the distance under a white canopy is a private banquet fit for a queen; an inflatable full size bed covered in dark pink silky sheets, huge two dozen pillows the color of pastel blue carefully surrounding the sides and head of the bed, waiting in the middle of the clearing was a tray occupied with covered plates hiding edible treats and in the lower right corner was an ice bucket holding a bottle of white wine. “Bette, this is beautiful. I can’t wait to see what other surprises you have waiting for me”. Taking their respective places on the cool sheets, Bette says, “Believe it or not, I actually attempted at cooking”, Bette paused at Tina’s scared facial look. Chucking at the sight, Bette continues, “Don’t worry. I ended up getting take-out”. Tina exhales with relief and Bette laughs even further. “You haven’t even tasted my cooking yet, T”. Bette uncovers the plates to reveal platters of fried chicken and fish, potato salad, mixed vegetables and fruit salad. Tina inhales and says, “My goodness, this smells heavenly. I’m suddenly famished”. Not too delay any further; they partake of the amorous food to conquer their hunger.
“That was delicious”, Tina says while taking a sip of the wine. “I’m stuffed”. Tina feels Bette staring at her and with a questioning look, “What?” Instead of answering her, Bette stands to remove the tray to the foot of the bed. She turns around to knee down and ever so slowly begins to crawl her way towards Tina; to put their bodies in close proximity of each other. “Are you finished with that?” Tina’s confused expression is an indication that she doesn’t what Bette is referring to as her mind is bogged with Bette’s image of portraying a cat ready to pounce on the flavor of the day. Bette takes the glass of wine from Tina’s relaxed fingers to swallow the last droplets left. As she lays the glass down, Bette leans forward to softly kiss Tina. Bette inches back, “You are definitely more potent. Now I understand why I’m always dizzy”. Bette returns to lavish on her dessert and as she does, she gently uses the upper weight of her body to push Tina backwards so that their bodies are intimately stretched out on the mattress. Bette and Tina moan into the kiss at discovering the full contact of having their frames pressing against the other; their bodies spiritually contacted in that they were both created from the same circle of life. Without breaking the kiss, Bette covers Tina completely with her body to welcome the sensation of having Tina beneath her; to enjoy two hearts beating as one in an endless love song. Both are mentally tracing the form of each other as their hands memorize every curve, every touch, every dip, every scar; as well as the parts still miraculously concealed. Breaking for air, Bette asks, “Are you still ready for us, T?” as she passionately rubs her body into Tina’s. “I was always ready. I was just waiting for you”.
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(43 votes, average: 3.47 out of 5)
Amazing! You have revived my hope that passion like that really does exist! I think I need to go back to bed now, or maybe a cold shower! *wink, wink*
Hot, Hot super hot!!
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!! my computer is on fire you have buy me new one!!!!!!!!!!!!
Wow, I have read this so many times, it was so sweet, esp B telling T “It’s time” and T asking B to “teach her” at the end. Post more soon!!!
dear god in heaven, that was by far one of the best love scenes i have ever read, including books….i literally had my mouth hanging open so long, i have no saliva left….you rock!!!!!
Excellent detail. Very nice. Post again soon for us, please.
WOW that was hot,sexy and beautiful THANKS
Oh my god!!!! I am totally speechless, thankyou for that unexpected pleasure. I don’t even know how to respond to a chapter like that…thankyou..what will you give us from Tina’s turn??
Good God .. that was beautifully sexy. Thank you for your time, the commitment shows and it makes your stories well worth the wait. Thank you. Have a great weekend
Well now, I gotta say that was fucking great, wait no it was….. see look at me not knowing what to say. that doesn’t happen often. Now sneaky hmmm that’s the first time I have been called that. for the record I was just trying to be friendly LMAO. so lessons are expensive?? you don’t give college students any discounts??? LOL
Well I guess if you give us another nc-17 I will forgive you for that mini vacation you just took from writing.
So who’s flirting with who????
can’t wait until next chapter!!!
Just getting in and log on……And look what I find……A long awaited post from Leo Paradise…….Now I can go on and say it took you long enough but you know I like the ANTICIPATION…..so I’m not……Great job…..Now looking forward to Bette teaches Tina how to love her…..Post Soon!
Damn Leo! That was great. Your skills are the bomb! I feel like I read 5 pages of 4play….you go you! Nice…..very nice.
But, I know your not done yet; its now Tina’s turn to pleassure and please Bette which means – say it with me ya’ll….
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Damn so fucking hot and sexy and awesome, love it. Now let see how Bette gonna teach Tina how to show her love. Post soon please, thanks!
OMG..serious the most fucking hot nc-17 ever i dont need just a cold shower i need relieve right now..lol..and that line “i born for you”..priceless..ok cant wait for payback and how great student Tina will be..lol..post soon please
That was so HOT! Can’t wait for Bette to give Tina lessons on how to please her. Next chapter coming soon i hope.
Haha it would literally be Bette’s pleasure! Hehe Yes I must say, Bette definitely pleased Tina in this chapter!! Excellent job, Leo! It was well worth the wait. I love how descriptive your writing style is and how you tie all aspects in, from their emotions to the ambience of the room. Congrats on your first NC-17, very well done! Thank you!!
great, great job, luved it@!!!!!!!!!!