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You (Part the Forty-Seventh)
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She waited until they were in the car heading home again to ask. Alice just sucked in her breath. “Can it wait until we get home?” she asked. Dana nodded, but after they got home, Alice wanted to watch a movie rather than talk. Worried but understanding her need for space, Dana just sat at the desk and worked on ideas for her color commentary with Billie Jean. By the time she was tired of doing that, Dana decided to just go to bed, a little hurt that Alice couldn’t tell her what was wrong.
As she watched Dana walk to the bedroom, Alice couldn’t help feeling a little bad. It wasn’t that she didn’t want to talk to Dana, she just had no idea whatsoever how to say it, or even if she should. Still, as she shut the TV off, checked on Socks and walked into the bedroom, she knew she’d have to say something.
Even in the darkness, she could tell that Dana had been crying. Sighing sadly, Alice undressed and got into bed, wrapping Dana up in a tight embrace. “I’m sorry,” she whispered.
“Don’t be sorry. I just wish you’d stop feeling like you have to hide from me, Al. I know it’s hard and I know your appointment’s private and everything, but if this is bothering you so much, I wish you felt like you could tell me what’s wrong,” Dana said through a sob.
“Awww, baby, that’s not it. I just don’t want to put any more shit on you, that’s all. I want you totally better and you can’t get that way if you’re worrying about me too. Besides, I should be able to work through my own shit. It’s all me, Dana. It doesn’t have anything to do with you, you shouldn’t have to take care of me when you’re not even better yet,” Alice replied, crying herself.
“You don’t have to always be the strong one!” Dana exclaimed. “You have to let me take care of you too, Alice. I know I fucked that up before, but you don’t have to be strong around me all the time. You think I don’t know that you’re still having nightmares about it? How sad they make you when you wake up crying?”
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Bravo! I love seeing these two working things out and how much they truly love each other. Plus they get all the support from their best friends. I must say, the whole witnessing someone dying thing has to be the most traumatic experience. You really nailed it in Alice/Tasha conversaton. Your writing is so real. I often can picture the scenes unfold in my head. Thanks again for a wonderful chapter. Will Alice become really successful because of the chart and still drive the mini? Hope so. I am a little apprehensive about Tahsa though. Alice by nature is a caring person. I just hope that her love for Dana will keep her out of trouble. Can’t wait for your next post. btw, it’s water under bridge regarding “on the boards” last night. There is no need for apology. I was not even slightly displeased. Hope today is better for you. Can’t wait for you next post.
As always Muted you make me smile at all of your updates for our Danish. Sorry haven’t posted a comment in a while, but i have read them all and love your writing dearly. It always amazes me how i can see what you write in my mind. it is so much better then the show itself, i might not watch and just read your stuff instead :). ok, i’ll peak, only because of leisha though, keep up with the happy mood:) and the writing!
Perfect – as usual. Great to have you posting this story again as we need all of our Danish writers as you know that you are the best!!!
Once again my Sunday Danish fix, yay! Nice job in getting Tasha into the picture. Actually it’s kinda freakish how well you blend these characters into your story with close to actual storylines/dialogue from the show. I have to say your description of Dana’s eyes toward the end of the chapter just about melted my entire being, thanx!? Seriously, this story makes the actual show look like one big nightmare; I’m with Dana and Alice this has to be the reality…!
Babe you know I heart you and I heart this story, I really liked the was you got Tasha to open up a bit, I’m so loving my version of paws in this. I also loved the NC-17 well you knew I do anyway hehe.
I cannot express the excitement I felt when I saw an update. I haven’t quite had my danish fix besides watching my season 1 and 2 dvds. I’m so estatic about Dana mentioning kids with Alice. Too cute. Hope to see another soon.
hey, really good Alice & Tasha convo you created here. Very believable and real. Alice’s therapy sounds like a lot of work for both of them. Great great update!Nice to hear about your happyness in the private life department. Hope it works out for you. And hey, shut up about the ugly stuff, you’re silly if you think that. I just meant that you have a talent for words and writing and I’m sure talking as well. That also would have to mean you are charming and all the other stuff love and flirting requires, lol. So: good luck!
my god muted are u aware just how much i love this story well times that by a million you just cant help urself can you, getting better and better every chap i know its just a story and i prob sound like an idiot but ur just so good plus im in love with danish :) keep up the great work!!!
that was great I can’t wait to see what will happen next and I think that alice and tasha can help each other get pass all the problem that they are both having please post soon great update I love it
I’ve been reading you, and I’ve finished Valediction, I meant to leave a comment but I haven’t made an account first. I just thought I’d finally leave one and let you know that your work is really really good! I love it… and it makes me so happy that there’s atill Danish stories out here. thank you for taking time to write this:)
Awesome to see another update so soon…Great Stuff…I am happy that you are in a good mood, it’s a great way to feel…Love DANISH…Love, Love, Love, PPS