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You (Part the Forty-Seventh)
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“I love you,” Dana growled, kissing Alice even harder than she had before, sucking on her tongue and grinding herself into Alice as she felt her moan into her mouth. Dana pulled back again. “I love you,” she repeated breathlessly.
Alice finally seemed to come back to herself a little, away from the strange sadness she’d been showing all evening. “Dana,” she gasped, running her hands up and down Dana’s back. “Touch me, Dana,” she begged. Dana, her eyes the color of the ocean during a storm due to the overwhelming love and lust she was feeling, kissed her again and ran her hand down Alice’s body, grinding into her again as she felt rather than heard the moan Alice released at this.
“I want you so much,” Dana said breathlessly when she pulled away. After gently biting at Alice neck, she moved to her ear, biting the lobe before she whispered, “I love you. Let me show you that, baby. Please.”
Alice released a moan at this, straining up into Dana’s body, clinging to her tightly. Dana pulled back to stare into her eyes again, moving slowly over Alice’s body as she kissed her, tangling her hands into Alice’s hair. During the kiss, they moved against each other, no sound between them but quiet gasps and the occasional moan.
“Dana,” Alice gasped again as Dana surrounded a nipple with her mouth. Arching her back to push more of herself into Dana, Alice growled, “I want you inside me. Please, Dana. I want to feel you inside.”
Dana pulled away enough to suck on Alice’s neck and move her left hand down her body, playing at the outer folds and moaning in response to the reflexive shakes of Alice’s body. Feeling the want and the desperation and the need in Alice’s motions, she didn’t waste any time and entered her with three fingers in a hard thrust. Alice’s head tilted back into the pillows, her mouth open in a silent cry at the intensity of both the physical sensation and the emotion. “Do you feel that?” Dana gasped, biting at Alice’s neck. “Do you feel how real that is?” Alice moaned in response, and Dana quickened her pace, brushing her thumb over Alice’s clit. She sucked a nipple for a second or two as she continued to thrust, matching Alice’s movements as she arched up into Dana’s body. “Do you feel me, baby?”
“Yeah,” Alice answered breathlessly. “Harder. God, Dana. Fuck me harder, baby. Please,” she gasped, pulling Dana down to her for a kiss. Dana pressed her body into Alice’s and added another finger, increasing the speed of her thrusts. She felt Alice’s nails digging into her back deep enough to break the skin, and she gave a low moan at the delicious pain. Alice was close, but before she came, she removed one of her hands from her death grip on Dana’s back and quickly brought it down, sliding her fingers into Dana’s waiting warmth just as she came, the orgasm taking her power of speech with its intensity. Dana buried her face in Alice’s neck and held her tightly, but before she’d even recovered fully, Alice started thrusting into her again.
Close herself, especially after seeing Alice come so hard, Dana held tight to Alice as she brought her to a pretty fast and intense orgasm. Both of them knew they wanted more, and Dana was still reeling from the aftershocks when she felt Alice sitting up, taking Dana with and aligning their centers. They held each other closely as they moved together, with quiet gasps and deep kisses. “I love you,” Alice gasped as she felt the next orgasm approaching. Dana didn’t say anything in response, just held her tighter and moved her back down to the mattress, murmuring sweet nothings into her ear as she repeatedly brushed her clit against Alice’s. She initiated a deep kiss as Alice came, swallowing her moans and gasps. Alice moved away from the kiss and licked the salt from Dana’s neck as she continued to thrust up into her, grasping at her shoulders tightly as Dana came with a breathless pronunciation of Alice’s name.
They lay there for a long time, sweaty and exhausted, looking into each other’s eyes. They weren’t naive enough to think that the issue was over, but neither of them could deny the love there. As they fell asleep wrapped in each other’s arms, that love was enough for the moment.
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Bravo! I love seeing these two working things out and how much they truly love each other. Plus they get all the support from their best friends. I must say, the whole witnessing someone dying thing has to be the most traumatic experience. You really nailed it in Alice/Tasha conversaton. Your writing is so real. I often can picture the scenes unfold in my head. Thanks again for a wonderful chapter. Will Alice become really successful because of the chart and still drive the mini? Hope so. I am a little apprehensive about Tahsa though. Alice by nature is a caring person. I just hope that her love for Dana will keep her out of trouble. Can’t wait for your next post. btw, it’s water under bridge regarding “on the boards” last night. There is no need for apology. I was not even slightly displeased. Hope today is better for you. Can’t wait for you next post.
As always Muted you make me smile at all of your updates for our Danish. Sorry haven’t posted a comment in a while, but i have read them all and love your writing dearly. It always amazes me how i can see what you write in my mind. it is so much better then the show itself, i might not watch and just read your stuff instead :). ok, i’ll peak, only because of leisha though, keep up with the happy mood:) and the writing!
Perfect – as usual. Great to have you posting this story again as we need all of our Danish writers as you know that you are the best!!!
Once again my Sunday Danish fix, yay! Nice job in getting Tasha into the picture. Actually it’s kinda freakish how well you blend these characters into your story with close to actual storylines/dialogue from the show. I have to say your description of Dana’s eyes toward the end of the chapter just about melted my entire being, thanx!? Seriously, this story makes the actual show look like one big nightmare; I’m with Dana and Alice this has to be the reality…!
Babe you know I heart you and I heart this story, I really liked the was you got Tasha to open up a bit, I’m so loving my version of paws in this. I also loved the NC-17 well you knew I do anyway hehe.
I cannot express the excitement I felt when I saw an update. I haven’t quite had my danish fix besides watching my season 1 and 2 dvds. I’m so estatic about Dana mentioning kids with Alice. Too cute. Hope to see another soon.
hey, really good Alice & Tasha convo you created here. Very believable and real. Alice’s therapy sounds like a lot of work for both of them. Great great update!Nice to hear about your happyness in the private life department. Hope it works out for you. And hey, shut up about the ugly stuff, you’re silly if you think that. I just meant that you have a talent for words and writing and I’m sure talking as well. That also would have to mean you are charming and all the other stuff love and flirting requires, lol. So: good luck!
my god muted are u aware just how much i love this story well times that by a million you just cant help urself can you, getting better and better every chap i know its just a story and i prob sound like an idiot but ur just so good plus im in love with danish :) keep up the great work!!!
that was great I can’t wait to see what will happen next and I think that alice and tasha can help each other get pass all the problem that they are both having please post soon great update I love it
I’ve been reading you, and I’ve finished Valediction, I meant to leave a comment but I haven’t made an account first. I just thought I’d finally leave one and let you know that your work is really really good! I love it… and it makes me so happy that there’s atill Danish stories out here. thank you for taking time to write this:)
Awesome to see another update so soon…Great Stuff…I am happy that you are in a good mood, it’s a great way to feel…Love DANISH…Love, Love, Love, PPS