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You (Part the Forty-Sixth)
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“I just wanna touch you,” Alice gasped after a few minutes of this. Dana tried to turn, but Alice stopped her. “No, let me take care of you, baby. I don’t want you to hurt yourself.”
“I’ll be fine,” Dana panted, still trying to turn.
“I know, but I want to touch you. You’ll get your turn,” Alice breathed into her ear. Dana shuddered at feeling of the hot breath on her skin and sighed out her agreement, knowing that arguing would solve nothing as Alice started to kiss her neck, biting down gently every now and then. She heard a faint laugh as Alice’s hand ran over her body, making her tremble. She moaned as talented fingers pinched her left nipple and moved across her chest to her scars, brushing them so lightly that Dana wondered if she’d made contact at all. It almost didn’t matter, though. It felt so good she didn’t really care if she had or hadn’t.
Alice’s hand had barely made it it to Dana’s abdomen before she changed gears, moving away from Dana enough so that she could gently press her onto her back. From there, Alice let her mouth take over, tasting the salt on Dana’s skin as she moved down, caressing every curve with her tongue.
Dana was more than ready when Alice reached her destination. Moaning in anticipation at the intensity of Dana’s scent, she decided to prolong this as long as she could and moved her head down for that first long lick. Dana jumped when Alice’s tongue brushed her clit, but Alice didn’t stay there. Instead, she moved back and began kissing Dana’s outer folds with delicate precision, making Dana gasp and rise up into her face. “Please, baby,” she gasped, not knowing how much more torture she could take. Alice decided to be nice and held Dana’s writhing hips in her hands as she buried her tongue in the waiting wetness, her nose brushing against Dana’s distended clit with every stroke.
“God, Dana, you taste so good,” Alice moaned into her as she kept pushing her tongue inside. As Dana’s moans got louder, she moved up a little and took Dana’s clit into her mouth, entering her with three fingers and finding her g-spot immediately. Dana arched off the bed and into her, matching her pace until she was seconds away from coming.
“Alice,” she gasped, trying to warn her but not able to summon any more words. Alice moaned at the thought, the vibration on her clit causing Dana to come hard. Alice moved down and sucked as much as she could, licking up the rest until Dana was totally clean but still trembling.
“I love you,” Alice whispered, moving up to lay beside Dana and kissing her hard. Dana, intent on returning her attentions, turned into her and placed her leg between Alice’s. Alice sighed into Dana’s mouth and copied the motion, and they held each other tightly as they moved together.
“I love you too, Alice. I love you so fucking much,” Dana growled as she tore her mouth from Alice’s and bit down on her neck. As she felt Alice moving faster against her, Dana tightened her embrace and began to move faster herself.
“God, Dane. Keep doing that. You feel so good,” Alice whispered, holding tight to Dana and pressing into her harder.
“Oh, Al. Come for me, baby,” Dana gasped, kissing her hard. Alice tried to hold out, but the look of sheer lust in Dana’s eyes when she pulled back was too much for her. The orgasm hit her hard and fast, but Dana held her until her breathing had calmed down. She’d intended to return Alice’s attentions from before and move down to clean up the mess she’d made, but laying in Alice’s arms, listening to the sound of her breathing, was so comforting that she didn’t get the chance. Alice couldn’t exactly blame her for falling asleep, though. She snuggled into her and smiled, and they slept that way the rest of the night, happy and
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MT, you are good!!! Love a wise & caring Alice. The conversation w/ Tina and her comments on the radio showed the best of Alice. Nice touch also with Ruth. Love seeing Dana being with the kids. Is there one in the making for them? I suppose they have to get marrried first. Like I said before, your writing style and story line are way better than the show. Again I truly emjoyed reading this chapter. pps
Two more thoughts. 1st, Al to T, “…let bygones be bygones. Life’s way too short, okay? Trust me on that one.” Isn’t it the truth? We all should remind ourselves often. 2nd, Danish loving is always welcome especially when D is slowly getting back her health. You have A being so loving, caring and thoughtful to Dana. And Dana always reciprocated in her own way. That’s exactly why Danish should live forever.
hey girl, it’s good to be back and be able to read your story again. I’m back since 2 days and read all your updates! Great as always, I love socks btw. Great addition. I also liked Alice’s conversation with Tina. It sounded very real and just like something that would have been something good and much needed on the show. Loved all your updates! :) ps.: Are you still single btw? With a talent like this, it’s just so hard to imagine you know..
You’re right MT, I think your Danish is the archetype of a relationship!!! (I just hope my boyfriend doesn’t read this, he’d freak out!!!;)Loved Alice`s argument about the positivism, not just in health issues. It`s time for Dana to start believing in herself and just go beyond what’s expected!Thanks again MT; reading your stuff makes my working summer a bit better…So…pps!
As always, very well done. I quite like having my weekend end with a little Danish! Nice to see Alice and Tina interact once again and I really liked Alice’s radio commentary. I could almost hear it in my head. Ok we know I’m a little nuts but it was very well done. Dana having time with the kids and sleeping with the Angie was really sweet. Kudos!
Hey, you changed the last scene changed a bit. It was still great though. :) And one of these two or the two of them together in combination with Socks and children aretoo cute! As long as you keep writing them like this, I keep believing a relationship like this is possible in real life. Please, don’t burst my bubble! ;)
Amen to that hail_danalice! :)
Thank you, MT! At the risk of repeating myself… Another excellent chapter! Loved the talk with Alice and Tina and all the Danish moments. Looks like Dana has made another advance in her recovery by admitting she is hurt and needs some help. The relationship you have written for Danish is so sweet and supportive. PPS!
loved it! i cant believe i didnt comment on your last chapter, but i totally read it and loved it too. okay so wii tennis is, possibly the most addicting thing ever, and im such a dork that when i read that you had dana playing it, i suddenly got worried that she would get hurt. see, after the first few times i played it i developed something i like to call “wii elbow”, which can be defined as intense pain in one’s wii-playing arm from being such an absolute spaz when playing wii tennis. anyway, can’t wait for your next update!
So pleasantly suprised to see this Update…Awesome as always…They have an awesome relationship, as they should, as we all should…Just wondering will there be any Gabby Devaux angst to stir the pot, I don’t know why, but I think it would be nice for Dana to put her in her place…Loved the convo with Tina, Loved Dana and the kids and of course her and Angie! I’m babbling, Once again Great Update! PPS