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A helping hand and a push in the right direction-CH. 29
Their server came over and brought their breakfast to the table. Both Melvin and Peggy were quite as everything was laid out for them. Peggy continued to stare at Melvin as he mulled over what he was just told. When they were alone again Melvin looked up at Peggy with a remorseful expression on his face. “What should I do to make things right?”
Peggy smiled widely. “Eat your breakfast Melvin we’ll need to come up with a game plan.”
Back at the beach house
Bette had been waiting to make love to Tina ever since they had cleared the air about their past…her need for her blond lover was as strong now as it was when she first realized that she was in love with the blond development executive who had managed to enthrall her from their first meeting. As Bette began to wake up she felt T’s arm draped over her and felt Tina’s leg lying haphazardly over her own. She hadn’t opened her eyes yet, but she was already smiling at how glorious her morning was going. She felt like shouting for joy at how unbelievably happy she was as she was lying in bed with the only woman she had ever loved…the fact that they were naked and how they had unbelievably hot sex over and over and over contributed greatly to her current mood. She couldn’t remember ever being this happy about being this sore…well that’s not entirely true she could recall many times over the course of her life that she’s been this happy and they all involved one Tina Kennard. She loved that they still fit together perfectly they still knew each others body and all the places they liked being touched. Although Bette did find a few new things about Tina’s body…like the small scar on Tina’s right knee where she had to have surgery to fix a torn ligament after a particularly bad fall or the nearly nonexistent mark on the heel of her left foot that she got when Eli accidentally dropped a glass on the floor she had stepped on a piece while trying to get her frightened son away from the sharp glass…Bette went over every inch of Tina’s body reacquainting herself with the woman she loved.
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(70 votes, average: 3.47 out of 5)
So fucking cute…=)
Thanks for all the time and effort you put into writing this story, it is so good, just love it. Thank you.
Love Eli, Bette is so including Eli in this. It so cute that she want his permission to marry his Mom. Thanks for posting and do forget us thanks
this was great longer
i think everything is falling into place right now for B&T and melvin is the last piece of the puzzle…thank you
I agree with Sea…I love the length of your chapters. It’s a lovely story. I hope Bette will be supportive of Melvin and Tina talking alone.
Awwww I love this amazingly sweet story, I’ve really missed an update, but totally understand your prioritys. Looking forward to the next one – btw I just loves the plans they’re making :o))
I’ve been following this story from its beginning. It is so awesome. I also love that you write detailed and layered chapters. You take the time to have the story unfold at a realistic pace. Great job. Bette is so accomodating w/o being a doormat. Being a diehard TiBetter this is how I pictured their life together. I hope this happens on the TV show.
Excellent as always :D Your writing is great!.
Tina and Melvin… this should be interesting, bring it on!
WOW!!!! SO Great. I so love this story. I am happy for Bette and Tina. Thank you PPS
Great job once again, toribio! Wish I could write such long chapters! The way you have everyone talking things out is great–filling in the gaps the show left. Can’t wait to see how Tina’s convo with Melvin goes–it was neat how you connected him and Peggy. All these characters are true to form. Please post again as soon as you can!
You, of course, can’t see it, but I’m doing my happy dance. :) Glad to see this story back, finally! You peg Peggy pretty dead on; that stream of words without stopping. Ah, I do love her so! I had to laugh at Bette getting sleepy with Tina stroking her hair; I’m the same way. I think it’s cute that Bette wants to ask Eli’s permission. Seems about right if she’s going to be stepping into their lives. As for Tina and Melvin alone… yikes. Can’t wait to read all about it, though! Love how long your posts are, and I hope you don’t keep us waiting as long next time!
Great as usual. I really missed this story. Thanks for posten.
Is this story every worth the wait. Great job. Love how B&T are actually talking to each other, how Eli is included in all they’re plans and thoughts, especially Bette. Melvin will come around now that Peggy got a hold of him. I agree with AmandaMG, a baby sister would be good.
The talk that Peggy had with Melvin seemed to have kick started his want to maybe make things right. He maybe doing this for Bette and Himself but in the long run it will also be for Tina and Eli. I am so glad that they are working towards becoming a true family.
This is awesome and let see whats next, thanks!
1/2 finished I’ll be back!
love this s tory… and i hope you have no plans on stopping this… i think eli needs a baby sister… don’t you think
EXCELLENT updateand Amanda, you took the words out of my mouth. I sooooo totally agree with Amanda and love you writing and comittment to this story, PPS :o)
Toribio, this is absolutely fan-fucking-tastic!!! Sorry, but there are no better words! And great of Tina to let Bette in on her talk with her father, it would be an aweful move to start their new life with a lie indeed! I loved every single word of this chapter… Wrong, I loved every single word of every single chapter of this story!!! Thank you so much and please come back soon with either of your stories, you’re a fantastic writer!
I love this B&T (and Eli) I love how they communicate better now…how they are with each other. I am proud of how Bette is so protective of her family. I like how they were both willing to compromise about the move. I guess in a nutshell I love this story. Thanks for continuing to post and giving us something wonderful to read.
I like how long your chapters are. Thank you. This is such a sweet love story. Totally love Eli, although I don’t agree with Bette feeling like she has to his permission to marry Tina. It is cute, but Eli is still a nine year old child.
Awesome, I have been waiting, and waiting and you ceertainly didn’t disappoint
Dude, you have totally made me cry. Good Job Buddy!!
lovely, just lovely…sigh…then you have introduce Melvin Porter???? what’up girlfriend!!!?????? PPS, make it shorter, I’ll read it anywayz…