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A helping hand and a push in the right direction-CH. 29
“No no no baby pretend I didn’t say anything go on continue with your plan.”
Bette decided to tease Tina a little. “I don’t know T the moment is kind of gone it won’t be as romantic kissing you awake if you’re already awake.”
Tina bit her bottom lip and furrowed her brow. “Bit I haven’t opened my eyes yet if I haven’t opened my eyes then technically I’m not completely awake yet…” Tina licked her lips. “Do you think you can make an exception and forget that I said anything?”
Bette was completely turned on when she saw Tina bit her lower lip and she couldn’t take her eyes off Tina’s mouth when she saw Tina’s tongue peak out as she licked her lips. “I think I can make an exception this one time…”
Bette closed the space between their lips and began to softly kiss Tina. The kiss was soft but if felt all that more erotic when they felt their bare bodies brush against each other as they leaned more fully into the kiss. Bette ran her right hand up Tina’s left thigh up the curvature she was eyeing a few moments ago. Tina’s tongue brushed against Bette’s lips but it was only for a moment because Bette was all too willing to deepen the kiss. Both women moaned into the kiss when their tongues touched for the first time. They stroked their tongues against each other before they continued to further explore each others mouth. When Tina felt Bette’s hand stop caressing her thigh and continue its journey upward between her legs Tina untangled her hand from Bette’s hair so her hand could make its way further down Bette’s body. She could feel Bette’s hand so close to its destination Bette’s hand began to softly stroke up and down causing Tina to pull out of their kiss as she gasped at the sensations she was now feeling. Her eyelids were drooping down but she could still see the big smile on Bette’s face as she continued to tease Tina. Not one to be out done Tina’s hand continued downward brushing against Bette’s breast rolling Bette’s nipple between her fingers causing Bette to gasp in kind at the gentle pressure being paid to her breast.
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(70 votes, average: 3.47 out of 5)
So fucking cute…=)
Thanks for all the time and effort you put into writing this story, it is so good, just love it. Thank you.
Love Eli, Bette is so including Eli in this. It so cute that she want his permission to marry his Mom. Thanks for posting and do forget us thanks
this was great longer
i think everything is falling into place right now for B&T and melvin is the last piece of the puzzle…thank you
I agree with Sea…I love the length of your chapters. It’s a lovely story. I hope Bette will be supportive of Melvin and Tina talking alone.
Awwww I love this amazingly sweet story, I’ve really missed an update, but totally understand your prioritys. Looking forward to the next one – btw I just loves the plans they’re making :o))
I’ve been following this story from its beginning. It is so awesome. I also love that you write detailed and layered chapters. You take the time to have the story unfold at a realistic pace. Great job. Bette is so accomodating w/o being a doormat. Being a diehard TiBetter this is how I pictured their life together. I hope this happens on the TV show.
Excellent as always :D Your writing is great!.
Tina and Melvin… this should be interesting, bring it on!
WOW!!!! SO Great. I so love this story. I am happy for Bette and Tina. Thank you PPS
Great job once again, toribio! Wish I could write such long chapters! The way you have everyone talking things out is great–filling in the gaps the show left. Can’t wait to see how Tina’s convo with Melvin goes–it was neat how you connected him and Peggy. All these characters are true to form. Please post again as soon as you can!
You, of course, can’t see it, but I’m doing my happy dance. :) Glad to see this story back, finally! You peg Peggy pretty dead on; that stream of words without stopping. Ah, I do love her so! I had to laugh at Bette getting sleepy with Tina stroking her hair; I’m the same way. I think it’s cute that Bette wants to ask Eli’s permission. Seems about right if she’s going to be stepping into their lives. As for Tina and Melvin alone… yikes. Can’t wait to read all about it, though! Love how long your posts are, and I hope you don’t keep us waiting as long next time!
Great as usual. I really missed this story. Thanks for posten.
Is this story every worth the wait. Great job. Love how B&T are actually talking to each other, how Eli is included in all they’re plans and thoughts, especially Bette. Melvin will come around now that Peggy got a hold of him. I agree with AmandaMG, a baby sister would be good.
The talk that Peggy had with Melvin seemed to have kick started his want to maybe make things right. He maybe doing this for Bette and Himself but in the long run it will also be for Tina and Eli. I am so glad that they are working towards becoming a true family.
This is awesome and let see whats next, thanks!
1/2 finished I’ll be back!
love this s tory… and i hope you have no plans on stopping this… i think eli needs a baby sister… don’t you think
EXCELLENT updateand Amanda, you took the words out of my mouth. I sooooo totally agree with Amanda and love you writing and comittment to this story, PPS :o)
Toribio, this is absolutely fan-fucking-tastic!!! Sorry, but there are no better words! And great of Tina to let Bette in on her talk with her father, it would be an aweful move to start their new life with a lie indeed! I loved every single word of this chapter… Wrong, I loved every single word of every single chapter of this story!!! Thank you so much and please come back soon with either of your stories, you’re a fantastic writer!
I love this B&T (and Eli) I love how they communicate better now…how they are with each other. I am proud of how Bette is so protective of her family. I like how they were both willing to compromise about the move. I guess in a nutshell I love this story. Thanks for continuing to post and giving us something wonderful to read.
I like how long your chapters are. Thank you. This is such a sweet love story. Totally love Eli, although I don’t agree with Bette feeling like she has to his permission to marry Tina. It is cute, but Eli is still a nine year old child.
Awesome, I have been waiting, and waiting and you ceertainly didn’t disappoint
Dude, you have totally made me cry. Good Job Buddy!!
lovely, just lovely…sigh…then you have introduce Melvin Porter???? what’up girlfriend!!!?????? PPS, make it shorter, I’ll read it anywayz…