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All you need is love — chapter 69
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“Do you think she knows what you have planned for tonight ?”
“I don’t know “
“Maybe she is planning to propose as well “
Bette laughed “ I came in the other day and she was looking up commitment rings “
“What if she’s bought some ?”
“We can wear both “
“Do you know the words ?”
Bette shook her head “ I may be a writer but nothing comes to me when I think about it – I will just know at the time “
“It will be okay “
Bette nodded and grinned “ I woke up this morning and she was asleep next to me. And it hit
me that very soon I will wake up next to every morning – that just thrills me “
“Shane says Tina glows “
“Shane would “
Tina looked up to the window and waved at Bette – the brunette grinned and waved back.
“I better go downstairs and bring them all inside. We are hoping to tire them out so they fall asleep nice and early tonight “
“Then you can give them a Christmas present they all want – you know the kids all want you two to get married ?”
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Tina was trying to get Josh into bed but he was wriggling around and doing all he could to fight sleep. So far Zak and Hannah, worn out by all the outdoor games and deliberately early morning walk had fallen asleep and were both dead to the world. Becky and Dan were playing computer games in Dan’s room -both were in the Pyjamas and having fun and being quiet. Which left Josh and Madison – who Paul had nicknamed “ the jumping beans “ as being the major problems.
“Will you settle down Josh “
“Not tired – can I not get up and talk to Ollie and Paul ? “
“They will be here in the morning and you can play with them then “
“Why can’t I stay up ?”
“Because Santa doesn’t come to a house when he knows that some little person is still awake “
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AWE, what awesome chapter…. the love all the way around, that house is gonna be HUGE… i just see the dogs and the cat now haha.
What?! Someone has stolen my slightly tarnished name? How dare she? No, Dainty that’s not me, I really don’t spend much time in that neighborhood. So I want you to put a big lump of coal in the impostor’s stocking for me next time you see her.
Thank you for a lovely chapter. It’s beena shit day with my mum being rushed into hospital and not being there at Christmas this year for the first time ever. My dad has alzheimers and has been very confused. It was good to come tonight and read another great chapter. Thanks. Have a good Christmas.
Chapter 69…a PG rated chapter!!! I will be patient. I know Bette and Tina will consummate their engagement. Nice chappy. Happy Holidays!!!
awww ally… what a sweet chapter!!! my my…. Bette is one heck of a fantastic planner isn’t she!!! n i’m with funnyone about the NC-17, make it a super duper hot one pls. Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year to you :)
WOW…that was something…romantic proposal…way to go Ally…
Great chapter! What a beautiful proposal and how about the Ollie? He must have had an epiphany with his two near death experiences. Can’t wait for your next installment….I got a feeling that it might be an NC17?
The proposal was a great Christmas present. Thanks!
That was absolutely beautiful. I knew Bette had found the perfect home for thier very large family but I never expected that she would be having it built from the ground up. I am so glad that Tina didn’t get upset that she wasn’t the one who got to propose first. Wow Ollie made a 360 it is great how he wants to make sure that Bette and Paul are able to leagally take care of the kids should anything happen to Tina and him.
That was wonderful. Nice of Ollie too!
That was awesome and love it!
glad to see you taking your bows funnyone!!! very sweet ally. thx
LMAO@funnyone! On the last chapter I had thought, “Hmm next one is 69. Hehehehehe.” Maybe 77 will be super hot NC-17 since you get ate more.
How could you let CHAPTER 69 (of all chapters) be rated PG?????? I want an NC-17 for Christmas.
Ahhh, that sure was romantic Ally. Nice thing about the pre-fabs is you can keep adding units until the rooms and houses are the size and configuration you want. So will it all be sleekly modern? I mean it about the NC-17. I want a great big fat one.
Great, great. Finally Bette ask Tina to marry her. I was so touched. I love this and all your other story. Look forward to many come from you for a long time. Merry Christmas
I loved it.You almost made me cry.I agree with funnyone we need a NC 17.Merry Christmas.
Awww, shucks you guys! I do like a good laugh and I can’t see why I should wait for somebody else to do it. But I forgot to say that shit Ironsides cracked me up. It is most apropos! And of course it turned out Raymond Burr was gay too.
ally, you’ve got the goods. Just delivering one outstanding chapter after another. Brava!Have a Merry Xmas and Happy New Year.
Well Ally you have outdone !!! all my expectations for this chapter… it was trully one of your finest !!. Thanks for a wonderful christmas present.. I look forward to the next chapter have great christmas CG
Great chapter and a great proposal:)PPSFunnyone, whenever I read a story I make sure I read ur comments lol
Ally, that was awesome. Love all your stories. You are an excellent writer. Thank you very much. Merry Christmas & A Very Happy New Year!
wwwwell they’ve got it all rapped up then…loved it …thx and merry christmas…
Ally, you are truly something… and a great writer with an imagination beyond words. Merry Christmas Ally!
You really rock AllyE. Great chapter.Funnyone are you the same funnyone on the L-word showtime site that always talked it a special lady you worked with that was gay and you always raided her candy drawer and your question was, “Is it a date, Really?”
This was a great Christmas Eve present. I am looking forward to the kids excitement at their Moms getting married and the new home. I am totally hooked on this story and can’t wait for more.
excellent chrissie present for tina; loved the image of inebriated bette obsessing over her jimmy choos; & yes, T is a perfectionist with the ‘perfect’ woman. pps