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All you need is love — chapter 69
Paul came into the room – Josh jumped out of bed. Tina sighed
“Paul – Paul – come and read to me “
“I gather that some small people aren’t going to sleep so that Santa won’t come to them with lots of games and toys “
“That’s what Tina said “ Josh said looking at the adults with suspicion
“Well adults know these things “ Paul explained
“Really — do you know what I am getting from Santa ?”
“No “ Paul lifted him up and put him back in bed. He looked at Tina “ I’ll get this one settled “
“Thanks “
Tina went to the spare room where Becky and Madison had their own beds. Bette was sitting on Madison’s bed – Madison was lying against Bette while she read her a story – a big book was between them. Madison was clearly tired -Bette was stroking her hair and talking to her. Tina watched the sight with happiness – Bette was so good with Tina’s daughters – and they had settled down a lot since Bette had come into their lives. Bette looked at Tina and winked. Tina blew her a kiss and went downstairs. Ollie was sitting on the sofa – his wheelchair neatly folded up behind the sofa.
“You need anything ?” Tina asked
“I am fine – I just wish I could go up those stairs and watch them sleep “
“Fighting sleep in the case of Josh and Madison “
“How are they doing ? “
“Bette is reading to Madison and Paul is reasoning with Josh – he might have to read to him to get him to sleep. I really could do with an early night but we have to go over to Helena’s and pick up Josh’s bike – why she couldn’t drop it off when she was here earlier on God knows “
“Well as soon as Josh and Madi are asleep you and Bette head off and Paul can see to the grown up kids “
“He really seems to enjoy the mayhem “
“He loves it – he hasn’t got a family – he’s an orphan – so it just blows him away when he is in the middle of all of this . This is a dream come true for him – you should have seen him when we went to get Zak some Lego “
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AWE, what awesome chapter…. the love all the way around, that house is gonna be HUGE… i just see the dogs and the cat now haha.
What?! Someone has stolen my slightly tarnished name? How dare she? No, Dainty that’s not me, I really don’t spend much time in that neighborhood. So I want you to put a big lump of coal in the impostor’s stocking for me next time you see her.
Thank you for a lovely chapter. It’s beena shit day with my mum being rushed into hospital and not being there at Christmas this year for the first time ever. My dad has alzheimers and has been very confused. It was good to come tonight and read another great chapter. Thanks. Have a good Christmas.
Chapter 69…a PG rated chapter!!! I will be patient. I know Bette and Tina will consummate their engagement. Nice chappy. Happy Holidays!!!
awww ally… what a sweet chapter!!! my my…. Bette is one heck of a fantastic planner isn’t she!!! n i’m with funnyone about the NC-17, make it a super duper hot one pls. Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year to you :)
WOW…that was something…romantic proposal…way to go Ally…
Great chapter! What a beautiful proposal and how about the Ollie? He must have had an epiphany with his two near death experiences. Can’t wait for your next installment….I got a feeling that it might be an NC17?
The proposal was a great Christmas present. Thanks!
That was absolutely beautiful. I knew Bette had found the perfect home for thier very large family but I never expected that she would be having it built from the ground up. I am so glad that Tina didn’t get upset that she wasn’t the one who got to propose first. Wow Ollie made a 360 it is great how he wants to make sure that Bette and Paul are able to leagally take care of the kids should anything happen to Tina and him.
That was wonderful. Nice of Ollie too!
That was awesome and love it!
glad to see you taking your bows funnyone!!! very sweet ally. thx
LMAO@funnyone! On the last chapter I had thought, “Hmm next one is 69. Hehehehehe.” Maybe 77 will be super hot NC-17 since you get ate more.
How could you let CHAPTER 69 (of all chapters) be rated PG?????? I want an NC-17 for Christmas.
Ahhh, that sure was romantic Ally. Nice thing about the pre-fabs is you can keep adding units until the rooms and houses are the size and configuration you want. So will it all be sleekly modern? I mean it about the NC-17. I want a great big fat one.
Great, great. Finally Bette ask Tina to marry her. I was so touched. I love this and all your other story. Look forward to many come from you for a long time. Merry Christmas
I loved it.You almost made me cry.I agree with funnyone we need a NC 17.Merry Christmas.
Awww, shucks you guys! I do like a good laugh and I can’t see why I should wait for somebody else to do it. But I forgot to say that shit Ironsides cracked me up. It is most apropos! And of course it turned out Raymond Burr was gay too.
ally, you’ve got the goods. Just delivering one outstanding chapter after another. Brava!Have a Merry Xmas and Happy New Year.
Well Ally you have outdone !!! all my expectations for this chapter… it was trully one of your finest !!. Thanks for a wonderful christmas present.. I look forward to the next chapter have great christmas CG
Great chapter and a great proposal:)PPSFunnyone, whenever I read a story I make sure I read ur comments lol
Ally, that was awesome. Love all your stories. You are an excellent writer. Thank you very much. Merry Christmas & A Very Happy New Year!
wwwwell they’ve got it all rapped up then…loved it …thx and merry christmas…
Ally, you are truly something… and a great writer with an imagination beyond words. Merry Christmas Ally!
You really rock AllyE. Great chapter.Funnyone are you the same funnyone on the L-word showtime site that always talked it a special lady you worked with that was gay and you always raided her candy drawer and your question was, “Is it a date, Really?”
This was a great Christmas Eve present. I am looking forward to the kids excitement at their Moms getting married and the new home. I am totally hooked on this story and can’t wait for more.
excellent chrissie present for tina; loved the image of inebriated bette obsessing over her jimmy choos; & yes, T is a perfectionist with the ‘perfect’ woman. pps