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Children of the Night Ch5
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“You brother is cool with just the two of us in here?”
“There are hidden CCTV throughout the house, he is probably listening to our conversation right now.”
The color of Shane’s face went white and headed upstairs to find her room. She reached the landing of the first floor and walked along the long corridor. There were three rooms, the last one has a pink door which had graffiti on it. Inspecting it closer, the graffiti read ‘Carmen’.
She opened the door of the second bedroom, it was like walking into a hotel presidential suite. It was luxurious, but the metal bars on the window made it looked like a luxurious prison instead of a hotel suite. She closed the curtains immediately and put her bag down next to the bed. She lay on the bed with her arms spread widely. It was the most comfortable bed she had slept on and she soon fell asleep.
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Carmen had this strange thought that if she could seduce Shane, maybe she could find a way pass her walls. So after being nice to her deliberately for a whole day, tonight Carmen sneaked into Shane’s room after she fell asleep. She tipped toe quietly in the dark and slipped under the cover next to her. Shane was only wearing a thin t-shirt and a pair of boy pants.
Carmen started kissing her neck lightly and slided her hand under her pants. Shane moaned slightly but still hadn’t stirred from her sleep. Getting the encouragement that she needed, Carmen couldn’t wait to capture her lips with her own. Shane must be having a sweet dream as she was kissing Carmen back passionately with her eyes still closed. Carmen could felt her heart pounding with excitement as Shane’s hands were roaming all over her body.
“Shane…” She whispered into her ear.
“em.. I love you… Cecil…” Shane said softly.
“What did you say?” Carmen asked while pushing her away suddenly.
“What?” Shane woke up from her sleep and was looking at the brunette confusedly.
“Carmen, what are you doing here?” She questioned.
Carmen didn’t know what to say suddenly.
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I liked this chapter =P I think I’ll read the chapter you posted before.
Noo, Carmen shouldn’t give up! She was right when she said that “what can be broken can be mended. Your wound will heal. The hardest part is to forgive yourself. What happened was not your fault.” It’s only been a week right, so she still has 3 weeks left. Shane seems to have warmed up to her a tiny bit, so she’s made some progress in making Shane view her in a different light. This is a great fic! Hope you update soon! :-)
wow ur back with a great update ,buti agree with livvy carmen shouldn’t give up please post more soon
Yeah, this is a good story. Please keep writing, it has heaps of potential. I need to go catch up on the previous chapters myself. PPS!
Niceeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!! ^^ Welcome back Catseye!!!!! Are you guys in ourchart? add me oriana1010… I miss Carmen so much…. :(
PLEASE continue !
GOD! YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW I MISSED YOUR STORIES!WELCOME BACK!
YEEEEEAAAAAAAH!!!!!!!!!!! You are back!!!! This was very good!!!! Please post soon.See people love your fic…so dont make us wait fro so long again!!!!!