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City Of Angels Chapter 4: What goes around, comes around.
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“You’re going to Hell Officer Johnson. Look me up when you get there.”
Bryce started to flail his arms like a mad man while the fire began to consume his body. His echoing screams of pain was deafening as he felt his intestines explode.
The entire lab explodes as the fire rips through the front of the lab, spilling and rolling out clouds of fire from the wreckage and onto the streets. The windows shatter outwards in a storm of glass.
Dana emerges from the raging fires. She walks through the flames, indifferent to the heat as the fire surrounded her. Many particles of Bliss fluttered around her like it was snow flakes.
Dana raises her head to the sky as she lets out a maniacal laugh from within. The first hit on her list has been made. She continued to laugh louder as the flames licked every inch of her body. And through out the entire ordeal she felt absolutely nothing.
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“Oh shit!” Officer George Peterson yelled out as he caught the explosion from the front seat of his red hotrod. He looked in terror as particles of what use to be “bliss” flew around in the sky. He turned his custom made hotrod in reverse as he speeded down the street and towards the flaming wreckage.
As soon as he got to his destination, his face was frozen in dismay as his mind was trying to register what he just saw. The drug laboratory that he and his men were responsible was now up in flames.
“Damn it!’ He yelled out as he got out of his car. He ran his fingers through his short hair as he silently cursed Johnson for letting this happen. Yet there was something unsettling about this entire scenario. As he walked closer to the burning drug factory his frustration was automatically replaced with a massive feeling of dread.
He looked down at the large insignia that was formed by the particles of broken glass and the left over debris that had fallen from the skies. The glass particles and the bits of debris took the shape of a crow with its wings outstretched.
He stared down in disbelief as the symbol began to disintegrate.
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great job! dana’s ass kicking completely blew me away. damn. i can’t imagine what dana has in store for the rest of those people responsible for her’s and alice’s murders. the carmen scene was so sad but sweet at the same time. looking forward to more!!
You rock Eleck thank u so much for writting through without making me want to cry lol Dana really did kick some ass. I just hope she doesnt loose herself in the revenge. I watched C 2 and 3 but it wasnt the same without B.Lee. Youre doing a fantastic job here Eleck and i cant wait to read the next chap so dont keep me waiting for 2 long plz! :P
great update! there is something sexy about dana getting her revenge. and i loved the moment between her and carmen.
that was great what will carman do now I can’t wait to find out please post soon I love it great update
Gruelsome kill..didn’t watch 2 or 3 since death of B. Lee..still has some catching up to do here.
Wow this chapter was totally awsome!!!! I was bouncing in my chair while reading!Please post soon,your doing a wonderful job!!!!
i’m in love with this story!! this was a really great chapter that you do, i feel like that i’m watching this on tv or something!! just keep it coming and good job!!!