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City Of Angels Chapter 4: What goes around, comes around.
“You don’t seem to be afraid.” Dana said not taking her eyes of the larger man for a second. Nothing was going to stand in the way of her and her revenge. Nick just scoffed as he raised his hands in a fighter’s stance.
“I’ve seen many things in my life sweet heart. Even things that are scarier than you.”
Dana just stood her ground. She mentally prepared her self for the attacks that was about to come from the power hungry cop in front of her.
Nick let lose a series out jabs from his left hand. Taunting the former tennis player he continued to throw soft jabs at her as he danced around her. Yet in the back of his mind he knew that this was going to be a lot harder than he thought.
“Pretty quick for a dead person” he said. Dana just smirked at his comments and continued to deflect his blows.
He finally attempted to go in for the right hook yet he was instantly caught off guard as Dana stepped aside like a limber cat.
Nick look in astonishment at the speed and the agility of this woman.
“What’s the matter Nick? Feeling a little tired. I thought you were supposed to be some bad ass super cop. You can’t even take down a woman is not even half your size.”
Dana let out another laugh. “You’re pathetic”
Nick let out a grunt of frustration as he came for her again swinging punches like a crazed fighter. Dana was able to perform a pre-emptive block to any attack that Nick was throwing her way like.
Within a second of Nick’s sloppy barrage of punches Dana grabbed one of Nick’s arms. Nick tried many times to release the woman’s grip but Dana kept her hand clamped around Nick’s wrist with uncanny strength. Nicked looked in horror as the grip was getting tighter. With a flashy grin Dana looked up at the surprised cop.
“My turn.” She delivered a punch right into Nick’s face. The forceful punch sent him flying back. His head began to spin like a Ferris wheel as he looked up again only to see her other fist fly straight into his face.
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great job! dana’s ass kicking completely blew me away. damn. i can’t imagine what dana has in store for the rest of those people responsible for her’s and alice’s murders. the carmen scene was so sad but sweet at the same time. looking forward to more!!
You rock Eleck thank u so much for writting through without making me want to cry lol Dana really did kick some ass. I just hope she doesnt loose herself in the revenge. I watched C 2 and 3 but it wasnt the same without B.Lee. Youre doing a fantastic job here Eleck and i cant wait to read the next chap so dont keep me waiting for 2 long plz! :P
great update! there is something sexy about dana getting her revenge. and i loved the moment between her and carmen.
that was great what will carman do now I can’t wait to find out please post soon I love it great update
Gruelsome kill..didn’t watch 2 or 3 since death of B. Lee..still has some catching up to do here.
Wow this chapter was totally awsome!!!! I was bouncing in my chair while reading!Please post soon,your doing a wonderful job!!!!
i’m in love with this story!! this was a really great chapter that you do, i feel like that i’m watching this on tv or something!! just keep it coming and good job!!!