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Freedom Fest Ch. 8
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(Present)
“We came here so many times over the years. There’s just something about this place that always gave us the courage to talk about whatever was bothering us. Talk about are concerns and fears or the problems we were having. I would bring you here right now Al if I thought you would talk to me.” Dana stepped out of the SUV and walked over to the picnic benches next to the playground. It was dark, but the moon shined bright enough for her to see the playground. She remembered bringing the kids with them many times. The kids loved to play on the playground and Alice and Dana always had a chance to talk for a few minutes without life getting in the way. To Dana it was like time would stop whenever they were at the park and they were able to focus completely on each other.
Dana sat down on one of the benches and stretched out her legs. It felt like the memories she was reliving were a movie and someone had hit the pause button while she was driving to the park and walking over to the bench and as soon as she sat down the movie began to play again and memories came flooding back.
(Thanksgiving Weekend 2001)
“I’m going to miss you this weekend.” Dana said while giving Alice a long hug in the parking lot. She was heading back to San Diego after her classes and Lenore was picking Alice up from campus so they could leave for Arkansas. Bart’s family lived in Arkansas and that’s where their wedding was supposed to take place in a few months.
“I’m going to miss you too Dane and don’t do anything stupid this weekend.”
“I won’t. I love you.” Dana whispered in Alice’s ear as they separated and she watched Alice climb into Lenore’s truck and drive away.
Dana began walking across campus to her car. She already missed Alice and wished they could spend the holiday weekend together. They had spent every night together since the day they kissed. She was actually surprised that she missed Alice and wasn’t glad to have a few days apart. She loved spending time with her friends and family, but she liked her alone time too and when she was around people for too long she would become irritable if she wasn’t able to be alone. She had spent all of her time with Alice the past three weeks and never craved time alone. The only time they weren’t together was when they were in class or meetings and even then she would think about Alice. Sometimes she would even write Alice little notes, saying she was sitting in class thinking about her, wondering what she was doing or what she was thinking about.
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I am thinking pretty much the same as MaGoose. Except, I would go even further to say that A was not acting responsibly. I find it very hard to accept her out right telling D that she was dating other people. WTF? How could she be so callous about it and at the same time telling D that she loved her. At present, I think D was more invested into this relationship than A. That was why D wanted to end her life?What a hopeless romantic! cougar, this is a terrific story, because this situation happens all the time and is sad. I feel for D being all alone reminiscing the yesteryears. Can’t wait for your next post. btw, 2 beautifully written NC-17 scenes from you and MaGoose consecutively is a rare Danish gem these day! Thank you very much!!!
I loved the update even though I think Alice is a bitch to Dana, I don’t think I woukd have put up with what Dana have to, I do how ever hope like everybody else for a happy ending..Loved it keep it up…
What a powerful chapter, cougar! Seriously… You churned up a lot of emotions. I love how this story shows the thoughts and feelings of Dana in both present day and when the events happened. I am glad Alice broke things off with Jay and seems to be opening up with Dana. I was initially very pissed at Alice for the Arkansas Jay thing. But now I am wondering if she is scared of the walls dropping and is trying to keep Dana from getting completely through the walls she has built. It was still a rotten thing to do, though. And I think Dana should either ask for them to be exclusive or maybe date someone else herself so Alice knows what it feels like. Obviously they work out something to be together for five years. You are getting the hang of the NC-17, I see. Very well done. Heh. Thanks so much. I have found myself to be really caught up in this story and I can’t wait to see what happens next.
that was a lot of emotions for one chapter but being an alice and dana story it the only way it should be can’t wait to read the next chapter so pps great update I love it
4 personal reasons al ia m saying…OOHH BOY…but on another note..that was a truly NC-17 story..brings bak memories of one of my past relationships..cant wait till ch. 9
great chapter! im dying to know what happened between them and why wouldn’t alice talk to her. ahh alice wat is she doing? does she realise that shes hurting dana or is she really oblivious to it? Is it okay that she’s sorta cheating with guys i wonder how dana would react if it was a lady alice got with hmmmm im sorry i want to know so badly lol.