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I thought we could spend the evening together… PT14
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Bette zoomed the camera in to study Tina’s face, she again switched camera’s to observe from another viewpoint, she began to smile to herself, feeling voyeuristic at watching her love wandering around, completely unaware that her every move was being studied, she moved the camera angle downward, looking Tina up and down, slowly, zooming, retreating, zooming on a body part she wanted a closer inspection of, pulling back, altering the slant once again, gaining a view of her back, she lowered reaching Tina’s bottom as she leaned forward to study a piece of art closer, Bette took in the curves, excitement beginning to bubble in the depths of her stomach, her own temperature rising slightly as she realized she was enjoying being in this position of watching while her subject is completely and utterly unaware.
Tina heard a slight buzz behind her, a feeling of uncomfortable ness overcoming her, being the sole person in an empty, silent gallery, slightly unnerving with the eyes from the surrounding portraits seemingly watching her every move, the buzz once again, this time coming from a different direction, she again looked around, a fear creeping upon her, she tried to tell herself that she was alone, Bette was up in her office, there was no-one else in the building.
As Bette watched Tina, she saw that she started to turn quickly, looking around her, giving the impression that she thought someone was behind her; Bette switched the camera onto Tina’s face, noticing a slight panic. She quickly got up, logged off her computer, grabbed her bag, flowers and closed her office door.
She slowly made her way down to the gallery, the carpeted floor silencing her footsteps.
Tina assured herself that she was indeed alone and took a deep breath to calm her breathing, she continued to look at the south gallery, when she came face to face with a deep burgundy see-through curtain, she put her hand out to feel the soft gentle material, running her hand downwards along the voile, she allowed her fingertips to feel the material as she walked the length of the opening, the gentle sensation causing material to ripple beneath her fingers. She walked back to the centre of the curtains and allowed her hand to part the material, her curiosity was getting the better of her and she needed to see properly what was behind this curtain, although she could see through the material, the shadow of its folds gave an ever so slightly obscured view, she thought the overall look gave an extremely sensual feel.
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Excellent!
sexy f***ing HOT!!! loving this story! great!! pls post soon
damn I had to pick up my jaw from the floor!!!!! that was FRIGGIN HOTT!!!!!!!!!!! LORD HA MERCY!!!!! At one point I was so hoping for some ruff, animalistic sex, then I remembered they’re reconnecting….maybe over there long weekend together. AGAIN DAMN THAT WAS FRIGGIN, FUCKIN HOTT!!!!!!!!!!
Jobadge, I read that very slowly as I wanted the imagery to fully realize in my mind and it was well worth it even if I don’t win any speed reading prizes. Just one thing, is Bette the only one with access to the tape from the security cameras? If not, James may not mind working Saturday.
I can see it now: “Curators Gone Wild!”
Van you can say that again,Just kidding that was so Tender and very very sexy. That could blow your mind. thanks
OMG, Jo what are you trying to do to us woman–that was so SENSUAL and HOT!! I think I might need to borrow Ally’s oxygen supply after that chapter. The way you described the art work was brilliant. You are one fantastic writer. Thank you for this beautiful story.
Oh my God…I am most definitely going to go look for a girlfriend who works in an art gallery!! That was absolutely gorgeous to read…thank you.
sexy and very hot
Massive sensory overload. Not even an ice cold shower is going to help. Keep them coming.
f***ing amazing!!!!
w…o…w… WOW!! I totally agree with funnyone… your words totally slow me down in reading and transpiring the image into my mind a slowly… love the way you write :D
Jo == staggeringly hot sex and research …wow . that was one of the most sensual things i have read in a very long time. Thank you SO much for that and how sensitively you portray bette and tina
ok….now you definitely have our attention!!! That was amazing…truely amazing…bravo!!
***GULP*** my throat dried up from my jaw being on the floor!!! i’m lucky to still be breathing. i really don’t know what to say except um…. WOW! SHIT! GODDAMN! MUTHFUKA!! that chap was so incredibly sweet, loving, erotic, sensual, and most of all beautiful. thank you once again for making my day. good night kiddies. please post soon. PEACE.
“Intense,Sensual,and Erotic”…Your own words…and i cant think of any better to describe what ive just read…It litterally takes me my breath away! Thanks for putting yet another Smile on my face,
Oh my God, the intensity and the sensual eroticism was quite mind-blowing. I read it slowly and it magnified the intoxication of the experience. I agree with funnyone, I hope Bette is the only one with access to the security camera tapes, otherwise, James is going to enjoy working Saturday.
What a fine way to depict the intricate relationship between voyeurism and exhibitionism; add a little light SM to this and you get HOT DAMN that was sexy!!!
Wonderful Jo. What am i saying – it was the hotest thing i’ve read in ages!(and its not because i have a museum fetish – though maybe i wasted my time when i did work in one!)
Umm, yes Jobadge. I need to sign up for that gallery tour immediately! Also, I want to take that tour as many times as it’s being offered…uh, because I love art! It’s one of the coldest nights in Canada and I am actually sweating. Kuddos to you. Damn!
Damn that was fucking hot and sexy, love it!
Uhhh….wow! Love this story.
What an awesome job. Yes that plateform works nicely now we need to put it on the road. I want it in my backyard as well as yours. I love how intense the feelings come through the way you have them communicating with all five of their senses. Awesome. Thanks Jo
This was indeed very intense and very erotic – one off the best chapters ever!!!! The way you can create a scene between these two are amazing, I get totally spellbound (does is make sence in english?)…..They are gonna rock the dancefloor at Milk, better call the firedep. already LOL….Please post soon and take care
Read it four times now, still can’t come up with words it was that moving.