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Just The Girl – Chapter Twenty One (a HYD-inspired fic)
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"I have a sensitive digestive system too!" Bette shouted after the blonde. Hearing no response from her date, she sighed as she hurriedly went after Tina. "Fine." She grumbled as she struggled to keep up with the blonde’s pace. "Just pull my hair back when I get sick.." She mumbled under her breath.
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"Here?"
"Yep. Why?"
"You’re kidding right?"
"No. The restaurant is on the sixth floor.."
"I don’t think I want to go in there.."
"Why not?"
"This place makes your apartment building look like the Four Seasons Hotel.."
"Oh don’t be such an ass!"
"I’m not! This building looks like it came out of an episode of the Twilight Zone.."
"It does not!"
"Does too! Are you blind or something?"
"Shut up Porter!"
"Aaaaaaaaaaaa!!"
"What?!"
"There’s a giant cockroach near the entrance.."
"You big baby! It’s just a bug. Here.."
*Cruuuuuunch*
"Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeekkkkkkkkkkkkkk!!"
"What? It’s dead now, see?"
"That’s fucking gross Kennard!"
"Oh stop being a wuss Porter!"
"I’m not going in there. I’m not.. I’m not.. I’m NOT!!"
"Well, whether you like it or not, we are going to eat here. The restaurant has good food at cheap prices."
"You’re not kidding about the cheap part.."
"Do you want to continue this date or not?"
"I do.."
"Then pull yourself together and let’s go."
"…"
"What?"
"Tch.. fine."
And with the end of their little fight, Bette and Tina entered the most dilapidated and scariest looking building in all of Santa Monica. As soon as the dirty glass doors closed behind them, an ominous looking red paper flew off and landed on a puddle of water on the pavement. A teenager on his bike passed by it and read the writing in big bold letters: KEEP OUT! BUILDING SCHEDULED FOR DEMOLITION.
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"What floor is it again?" Bette asked as soon as they entered the crummy looking elevator. She wrinkled her nose and sneezed a little bit, the dust from inside irritating her nostrils.
"Six." Tina answered as the brunette pressed the corresponding button.
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I haven’t read a fic this long in along time & I still can’t wait to read every new update. U are doing an amazing job-I am totally hooked.The elevator scene was nice-they are getting so close.
Fantastic update! Love the use of the elevator scene and how they were found cuddling by the demolition crew. There is some meaningful irony in that…
This is such a fun story. I wonder what thenew day will bring for these two. pps
just caught up on all the chapters you just posted :) What a date!!!! WOW,after reading that chapter i can’t help but think that Bette must be really hungry LOL.anyway please post more of this brilliant story soon.Thanks
hahaha what a date and Tina is funny calling Bette rape rape lol!
Well that is one hell of a first date. Let’s hope the next one is a little more tame. :)
WOW!!! What a date!!! Thanks PPS
”demolition men found them at six in the morning the following day” – that was some date!
pplllleeeaaaaassssssseeeeeeeee post another 20 chapters sometime soon…really soon…maybe now?!! i think i might just be addicted to this story!!
Hey, wat a date but at least the date happened:)I meant to leave u a comment last nite but there was sum prob wit da site. Anyway as u know love da story n looking forward to next chapter.