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Just The Girl – Chapter Twenty One (a HYD-inspired fic)
"You’ve got to be fucking kidding me.." Bette laughed as she read the small strip of paper with the restaurant’s name beside the number six. "Bread Pitt Sandwiches?" She looked at Tina and smirked.
"It’s clever." Tina retorted as she tried to defend her choice of restaurant, she had momentarily forgotten that the place had a funny name.
Bette shook her head in amusement. "I just hope that the food in there is better than it’s na–" Was all she managed to say before being cut off by the elevator making funny noises and jerking to a complete stop.
"What the fuck?!" The two exclaimed in unison as the elevator lights turned off and the emergency lamp flickered on.
"Heeelllllpppppppp!!!!" Tina banged on the elevator doors with her fists as Bette paced around the small space and pulled out her cell phone from inside her purse.
"Fuck." Bette cursed at the small screen as it indicated its inability to get a reception. "Kennard.. my phone’s not getting a signal. Can you check yours?" She asked as she turned to the blonde who was now furiously pressing the emergency call button.
"Umm.." Tina started. "I don’t have one.." She said sheepishly as she pried open the emergency box. "What the hell?" She frowned, holding up the red emergency phone with it’s cord cut off. "Damn." She cursed as she threw the phone to the floor.
"Shit." Bette rubbed her face with her hands in agitation. "Calm down.. it’s gonna be okay.." She chanted over and over to herself as she tried to even out her breathing.
"Somebody’s gonna find us right?" Tina asked in a small voice as she stared at the floor. She was trying hard not to panic, she was scared enough already. She rested her back on the elevator wall and slid down to the floor. "Yeah.. somebody is bound to find us in here.." She nodded her head as she tried to convince and comfort herself.
Bette sighed as she walked over to Tina and sat down beside her. "Kennard.." She said slowly.
"W-what?" Tina asked as her voice shaked a little. Fear was starting to get a grip on her.
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I haven’t read a fic this long in along time & I still can’t wait to read every new update. U are doing an amazing job-I am totally hooked.The elevator scene was nice-they are getting so close.
Fantastic update! Love the use of the elevator scene and how they were found cuddling by the demolition crew. There is some meaningful irony in that…
This is such a fun story. I wonder what thenew day will bring for these two. pps
just caught up on all the chapters you just posted :) What a date!!!! WOW,after reading that chapter i can’t help but think that Bette must be really hungry LOL.anyway please post more of this brilliant story soon.Thanks
hahaha what a date and Tina is funny calling Bette rape rape lol!
Well that is one hell of a first date. Let’s hope the next one is a little more tame. :)
WOW!!! What a date!!! Thanks PPS
”demolition men found them at six in the morning the following day” – that was some date!
pplllleeeaaaaassssssseeeeeeeee post another 20 chapters sometime soon…really soon…maybe now?!! i think i might just be addicted to this story!!
Hey, wat a date but at least the date happened:)I meant to leave u a comment last nite but there was sum prob wit da site. Anyway as u know love da story n looking forward to next chapter.