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Now Kit talks and Bette listens
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“It was a great party sis. I’m sure Sam captured some wonderful moments that you will enjoy and be able to share with Alex in the years to come.”
“Yeah. It was a good time wasn’t it Kit. I love being surrounded by family and friends and especially on such a special occasion.”
“We all love you dearly baby sis and we’re very happy for you. I’m glad I got a chance to get to know Tina a little better after spending some time with her today. I really like her. You think she’s the one?”
“I know she is but I worry about our timing.”
“What do you mean?”
“This might not be the best time for either of us to be starting a new relationship. She’s the head of a new movie studio and has a lot of responsibility to make it successful. I’m starting a new family and my focus is on Francesca and the baby. We’ve hardly had any time alone since we got together. We jumped from being friends to being ‘girlfriends’ and haven’t even really dated. We just sort of fell into this routine of accommodating each other.”
“Why don’t you plan a weekend at the cabin for just the two of you?” Kit suggested.
“That’s a really good idea Kit. I haven’t wanted to be too far away from Francesca as her delivery date is nearing but if we can get away this weekend …”
“Don’t you worry about Francesca and the baby, Peggy and I will take care of them. You’ll be two hours away by car Bette. Even if she should goes into early labor it’s doubtful the baby would be born before you get back here. If needs be we’ll send a helicopter to get you here in time.”
“Well Tina and I were to have our first date on Saturday. I asked her to wait.”
“Then the timing is perfect. I’ve seen the way you two looked at each other all day and the way you danced and touched every chance you got. I don’t think you’ll need to do too much convincing to get her to agree to a romantic weekend getaway.”
“You’re probably right but I don’t want her to think that I’m rushing things. We still have so much to work out between us. I will be a single mom in a month. I want her to be part of Alex’s life from the very beginning but I don’t know if she’s ready for an instant family.”
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Hope things get heated up quickly. Too slow for those two. Enjoyed it
wkm – is it too slow for Bette and Tina or are you getting impatient for things to heat up :-). I can’t promise fireworks because I don’t really get into writing NC17’s but they will break a sweat soon.
Good update. They are taking very slowly. I expect the weekend away will provoke opportunity for action.
azmama – the weekend will definitely provoke opportunity for action …
You made a comment early in this story (chapter 11) where you said “In order for this Bette and Tina coupling to work, Tina has to modify her life plans. At this point, she is physically attracted to Bette but nothing has occurred so right now it all seems so sterile, no panting, no sweating, no carnal desires have been revealed. Seems too much like an arrangement, all very platonic and business like. Looking forward to the next chapter”.
I responded that I thought their behavior was appropriate for the stage of their relationship at the time which was platonic friends but I also said that if you stuck with me I would address the supposed ‘lack of passion’. We’re almost there and they will have that conversation during the cabin weekend but there will also be ‘action’ to support it. I’m not an NC17 author and I don’t feel the need for graphic detail when the sex is implied but I hope you will see my point of view in having them take it very slowly – the main reason is they are not ready for sex for the sake of sex.
Now that’s what I call a post! Thank you!
Hope the Weekend away isn’t all cooking in the kitchen though!
Looking forward to reading 25b!
Hey SassyGran – thank you for continuing to read and for commenting. I promise they will do more than talk and cook during their weekend get-away. Remember this is also their date night weekend :-).
Hey bat, did you have a change of heart about Helena? I am not expecting an answer as I know you never give anything away about your stories, but it was just too tempting reading that Winnie and Helena are going to the Planet together and about their interaction during the baby shower. Glad Bette and Tina are going to take some time out to just be together without any distraction. They really need to discuss how they are going to proceed with everything that is happening and what they expect from the other. Thank you so much for taking the time to re-post this intriguing story.
Hey as1219 – Thanks for commenting. No I won’t give anything away but as is my usual style in writing these stories you can expect me to introduce a lot of different directions in the storyline as I set up future chapters. I try not to be too predictable or redundant so hopefully I will keep the interest of the readers since I don’t do NC17’s – :-).
I did some heavy editing in this chapter (25/25a) and the next (25b) from when I originally wrote this story. I actually softened Bette’s character a little because she was sounding like a commando but I didn’t change Helena. You were very observant to pick up on the Helena/Winnie match-up because if Helena does change for the better Winnie has something to do with it.
Thanks for reading and for checking up on me.
Great chapter BAT!! I actually like the progression of Bette and Tina in this story and look forward to their upcoming date weekend and interaction…Helena/Winnie of course I saw that one coming
I like your story and appreciate the way
Bette and Tina you take relationship, I confess
I’m a fan nc 17 this is true, however
I never fail to enjoy a great history as
this, just because they do not have a Nc: 17.
I love this charm that this discovery is
Bette and Tina, I love those moments of conversation
they have with small moments of snogging,
you write without elaborating.
10 Stars.
Note: My reading is delayed with many history
and am trying to upgrade it
December is Christmas and New Year, and the
Bethlehem Airport becomes a boiler of people
coming and going