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    Now Kit talks and Bette listens

    Story written on December 14, 2014 by BAT2012.
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    Story Shortlink: https://www.assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=87678
    Author Notes:

    “She could have had it too Kit even more so now. She’s hurt her mother very deeply over the years and still Peggy hasn’t given up on her. I hope they make amends but I won’t stand by and let her continue to carelessly hurt the people around her. I laid down the law pretty

    “She could have had it too Kit even more so now. She’s hurt her mother very deeply over the years and still Peggy hasn’t given up on her. I hope they make amends but I won’t stand by and let her continue to carelessly hurt the people around her. I laid down the law pretty harshly this afternoon.”

    “I can only imagine what you said to her. She looked like a whipped puppy when she walked out here. She ran right to her mother.”

    “Let’s just say she was lucky I only gave her a verbal lashing because she really deserved to get her ass kicked.”

    “What did she do?” Kit asked curiously knowing that it took a lot to get her sister angry enough to even consider physical violence.

    “For one thing she disrespected Francesca calling her my ‘surrogate’ then had the nerve to put the moves on her.”

    “No way! She made a pass at Francesca? Francesca’s not into women is she?”

    “No she’s not but that doesn’t matter to a predator like Helena. She’s used to just taking what she wants without regard for the other person’s feelings. Even if Francesca wasn’t straight the way Helena looked at her was so lewd that it made her feel dirty. Francesca wouldn’t tell me what Helena said but when I walked up the bitch was about to caress Francesca’s belly. I don’t want her filthy hands anywhere near my baby. I was ready to deck her right then and would have if Francesca didn’t stop me.”

    “What did Francesca do?”

    “She calmed me down and told me that she could handle Helena. Said she would have slapped her if she tried to touch her. Seems we both share hot tempered Italian blood from our maternal side.”

    “That would have set Helena straight in a minute.” Kit laughed at the unintended pun.

    “I know right. I almost wish I hadn’t interrupted them. Maybe if she’d gotten her hands slapped she would have given a second thought to getting all touchy feely with Tina this afternoon.”

    “Does that slut have a death wish? She came on to your girlfriend too?

    “Claims she didn’t know Tina was my girlfriend.”

    “That’s such bullshit. After all the gushy conversations we’ve been having around here about you and Tina finding each other. I know she was sitting at the table with us when we talked about it. How could she not know?” 

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      • wkm – is it too slow for Bette and Tina or are you getting impatient for things to heat up :-). I can’t promise fireworks because I don’t really get into writing NC17’s but they will break a sweat soon.

      • azmama – the weekend will definitely provoke opportunity for action …

        You made a comment early in this story (chapter 11) where you said “In order for this Bette and Tina coupling to work, Tina has to modify her life plans. At this point, she is physically attracted to Bette but nothing has occurred so right now it all seems so sterile, no panting, no sweating, no carnal desires have been revealed. Seems too much like an arrangement, all very platonic and business like. Looking forward to the next chapter”.

        I responded that I thought their behavior was appropriate for the stage of their relationship at the time which was platonic friends but I also said that if you stuck with me I would address the supposed ‘lack of passion’. We’re almost there and they will have that conversation during the cabin weekend but there will also be ‘action’ to support it. I’m not an NC17 author and I don’t feel the need for graphic detail when the sex is implied but I hope you will see my point of view in having them take it very slowly – the main reason is they are not ready for sex for the sake of sex.

      • Hey SassyGran – thank you for continuing to read and for commenting. I promise they will do more than talk and cook during their weekend get-away. Remember this is also their date night weekend :-).

    4. Hey bat, did you have a change of heart about Helena? I am not expecting an answer as I know you never give anything away about your stories, but it was just too tempting reading that Winnie and Helena are going to the Planet together and about their interaction during the baby shower. Glad Bette and Tina are going to take some time out to just be together without any distraction. They really need to discuss how they are going to proceed with everything that is happening and what they expect from the other. Thank you so much for taking the time to re-post this intriguing story.

      • Hey as1219 – Thanks for commenting. No I won’t give anything away but as is my usual style in writing these stories you can expect me to introduce a lot of different directions in the storyline as I set up future chapters. I try not to be too predictable or redundant so hopefully I will keep the interest of the readers since I don’t do NC17’s – :-).

        I did some heavy editing in this chapter (25/25a) and the next (25b) from when I originally wrote this story. I actually softened Bette’s character a little because she was sounding like a commando but I didn’t change Helena. You were very observant to pick up on the Helena/Winnie match-up because if Helena does change for the better Winnie has something to do with it.

        Thanks for reading and for checking up on me.

    5. Great chapter BAT!! I actually like the progression of Bette and Tina in this story and look forward to their upcoming date weekend and interaction…Helena/Winnie of course I saw that one coming

    6. I like your story and appreciate the way
      Bette and Tina you take relationship, I confess
      I’m a fan nc 17 this is true, however
      I never fail to enjoy a great history as
      this, just because they do not have a Nc: 17.
      I love this charm that this discovery is
      Bette and Tina, I love those moments of conversation
      they have with small moments of snogging,
      you write without elaborating.
      10 Stars.
      Note: My reading is delayed with many history
      and am trying to upgrade it
      December is Christmas and New Year, and the
      Bethlehem Airport becomes a boiler of people
      coming and going

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