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    So much more than just a kiss…

    Story written on February 2, 2008 by JobadgeJustlovesB+T.
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    Story Shortlink: https://www.assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=68490
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    Part 1 – Tina and the kiss…

     

    She looked away, allowing me to close my eyes and push back the tears that were about to well up… Averting my eyes, I sensed rather than saw her lean against the bar, inhaling deeply and carefully letting the air escape her mouth…

     

    I shivered as I felt goose bumps instantly appear, making me think about other times of ‘having fun’… The sensation of her teasing me, careful not to touch, her lips only less than an inch away from my burning skin, blowing cold air against me… Her lips… Once upon a time so familiar, now so desired, so yearned for, so illicit, so…

     

    So nothing…

     

    So fucking nothing Tina…

     

    I tried to reprimand myself, my heart thumbing, heavily, against my chest. I tried to stay strong, I tried to hold back all the feelings that were tumbling in my abdomen, shooting up to the rapidly forming lump in my throat…

     

    ‘This is so not my scene, these bars…’

     

    I don’t know how the words exited my mouth without sounding choked, I felt the breathlessness of my realisation, the endlessness of it. I had lost her, it was as simple as that… I had just lost her… Simply, certainly, but never merely… Never only… I felt the breaking of my heart, as it fell, slowly, shattering…

     

    ‘I know, it’s just…’

     

    I smiled about the irony of her using that word… I smiled, and fully understood the meaning of bittersweet, about the feeling that unfinished sentence gave me… The way she could understand me, the way the ending of that sentence was just clear for both of us, without the need of it being uttered… It lingered between us, thickened the air. I glanced at her, and felt the gratitude for being allowed to have her in my life, to love her, even if it was from a distance… Looking at the, quite lessened, liquid in my glass, I clenched my jaws together, in an ultimate effort to accept, to see…

     

    She had found that one thing again…

     

    She had…

     

    And even though I wasn’t the source of her eyes that sparkle in her eye, anymore… No longer the cause of her heart racing, or that ultimate sensation of your soul melting into another…

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    2. I cried when I watched them on screen but now reading you have Me sobbing! I am one of those that has now watched that scene over 20xs and I am awestruck at how much more you read in it, just from Tina’s pov. Awesome!

    11. As I said before, you two are the Dynamic Duo!!! LOL. This had me weeping, while my wife wondered what was wrong. I just pointed at the screen and said it was an incredibly beautiful chapter that I had read. Tina’s point of view just tugged at my heart strings. I can’t wait to read Bette’s. Thanks!!!

    12. This story left me as breathless as Tina. So well written. I felt each and every moment as though it was standing still. Truly impressive. I can’t wait to read Bette.

    20. i dont know what else to do except bow down to u both and applaud u…i just dont have the words and i wont ramble so whewwwww is all i can say right now.. u are just both fantastic at writing…absolutly astounding and breathtaking..i had tears flowing from my eyes b/c this was just so amazing writing….this is just i dunno i dunno u leave me to speechless…

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