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So much more than just a kiss…
Away from our lives together
Away from ‘us’…
…
I felt her fingers envelop my wrist, and felt how my resistance, the strength I needed to walk away, nearly broke… Her touch, evoking shivers that were deeper than I could have ever anticipated… She pulled me towards her, in what I thought would be a hug and in that one split second I felt everything inside of me object… I wanted to kick and scream, be left alone, to feel the pain I had inflicted on myself, to face myself again, to face what I had let slip away.
The words of protest however, never exited my mouth, for she slid her hand in the crook of my neck, as she had done so many times before…
I knew it was about to happen, at the exact same moment it did… My heart jumped up, and settled, easily, in the pace hers set.
We melted together…
Her fingertips merging with my skin…
Her body fusing against me…
Her lips, carefully, grazing mine…
Time was inaccessible, not measured in seconds, but in heartbeats, and she deepened the kiss, even before I could fully realize what happened… The tip of her tongue seeking an access I, willingly, granted
My eyes shot open, and closed again… My fingers, weak in astonishment, jerked, before they instinctively, found their way to her skin, her neck, her hair… Entangling in those soft, dark curls I had stroked in so many occasion… Their texture as velvet against my fingertips… Pulling her closer… Closer… always closer…
The world… My world… That had just come to an end, slowly started to revolve around its axis again…
The axis that was her…
A blur surrounded me, making it impossible for me to think, as I felt the softness of her tongue against mine, tasted the sweetness I thought I would never taste again… So familiar and yet so new, I kissed her back with all I held inside of me, with all that was me…
I felt my hands seeking, wanting to touch all of her, in that one short moment in time I was allowed… My heart was beating, in such velocity and strength that I felt my body tremble in the resonance of it, a resonance that seemed reinforced by her…
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(5 votes, average: 4.40 out of 5)
WOW
I cried when I watched them on screen but now reading you have Me sobbing! I am one of those that has now watched that scene over 20xs and I am awestruck at how much more you read in it, just from Tina’s pov. Awesome!
WOW
You guys need to put in the author’s note that we might need tissues. Just Beautiful,Now to read Bette’s POV.
Impressive, really enjoyed this journey with Tina.
A kiss that made the grey sky blue again,and the dying flower stand straighter. That was some kiss. thanks
Magnificent! Words simply would pale against your description of Tina’s feelings in that scene. Well done!
That was just amazing, can’t wait to read Bette’s pov.
So emotional, powerful… WOW
forever…i wish. beautifully sculptured.
As I said before, you two are the Dynamic Duo!!! LOL. This had me weeping, while my wife wondered what was wrong. I just pointed at the screen and said it was an incredibly beautiful chapter that I had read. Tina’s point of view just tugged at my heart strings. I can’t wait to read Bette’s. Thanks!!!
This story left me as breathless as Tina. So well written. I felt each and every moment as though it was standing still. Truly impressive. I can’t wait to read Bette.
Excellent – keep it going!
WOW. So poetic, so powerful, so poignant. You two rock!
AWESOME GUYS!!!! Great writing – hope you continue to write MORE together. Thank you!!
I know how Tina feels. I lost my soulmate,too. Wonderfully written, you have lost a love too.
WOW…that was just heartache and hope wrapped all in one
Want can I say – WOW. I really could feel Tina’s pain. What I great and emotional writing.
Beautiful!!! “it was my kiss of life…” WOW! Loved that line….
i dont know what else to do except bow down to u both and applaud u…i just dont have the words and i wont ramble so whewwwww is all i can say right now.. u are just both fantastic at writing…absolutly astounding and breathtaking..i had tears flowing from my eyes b/c this was just so amazing writing….this is just i dunno i dunno u leave me to speechless…
Absolutely beautiful reading of the characters and this special scene between them
The most powerful scene of the entire series for sure!