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The Beginning of a friendship, chpt 28
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As if Id come home.
‘Did Eric do that to you?’
Her soft voice brought me back to reality…
Eric…
My cheek…
I gues the answer to that question laid in my bodylanguage because she knew instantly and stated:
‘Will you excuse me for a minute? I have to go kill someone…’
How could she care so much about me? I saw the anger in her eyes, but instead of it frightening me, like it had with Eric, it filled my heart with a warmth…
I reached for her arm and pulled her back, next to me, close to me… I needed her to stay… She was all I ever needed…
‘Bette… No… Please…’
‘Tina! He has no right what so ever to hurt you! Ill knock his f….’
‘I left him’
‘Yeah, I dont blame you!’
She calmed down a bit but I still saw the fire of anger in her eyes… It made me wonder… Since this made her look so beautifull…
*What will her fire of passion look like*
My own thought embarrassed me and I looked away…
‘I didn’t leave because of this’
The anger in her eyes made way for soft concern and puzzlement.
I tried to control all the emotions that were dazzling me…
I felt like a juggler who had dropped one ball and then, instead of continuing with the rest, just lost control over the others too…
The sobs came from somewhere deep inside me, a dark place in my soul I never knew existed…
They hurted, physicly but even more emotionaly.
My whole body was trembling and shivering and the tears were just pooring out of my eyes…
It seemed like al the tears I had ever bottled up, all my restrained emotions ever, choose to come to the surface than and there…
And I broke down, completely and totally…
Bette:
I could feel her sadness and hurt when she looked away from me…
‘I didn’t leave because of this’
She again hid her face behind her hands and now started to sob…
So desperatly…
The intenseness of her feelings took me by surprise and for one moment I did not know what to do…
Her sobs grew deeper and I saw her body tremble with her emotions…
There was only one thing I could do…
But I didnt know if she wanted me to…
Slowly I reached out to her, wrapping my armed around her warm and shaking shoulders. I felt her muscles tighten and loosened my grip but then she turned to me and allowed me to draw her nearer. She put her arms around my neck and all her pain came out of her body through those tears as I softly stroked her back. She held me as if she held a lifeline, her head leaning on my shoulder, her grip tight… And after a while, the sobbing became less desperate… The frequency of her breathing decreased and her tensed body relaxed… I stroked her hair tenderly as she slowly fell asleep in my arms… Looking at the sleeping beauty in my arms my felt my heart swell with the love I felt for her… I just held here close as I softly whispered:
‘I’ll take care of you, Tina… Dont worry…’
—————————– TBC ——————————–
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finally wow glad sorry its me walks changed my name so great post but westlefe really lol
yeah… sorry… I usually don’t like songs in fanfic, but then this is the second chapter with a song in it… It was just soooo right :)
Again f*cking awsome. Je hebt er weer eentje mooi bij elkaar gebreid, je gevoelens stop je in je keybord en die druipen daarna van mijn scherm. Heerlijk om te lezen. Bedankt daarvoor.
OMG we got a chapter this weekend! WEEEEEEEEEEEEE! I wonder if Bette was singing off-key with the radio? If she was and I had been in Tina’s place watching her through the window, I would’ve probably rolled on the ground laughing my butt off. lol
As an addict, I’m needing a larger fix and 2 a day…see this is what you have made me into…desperate for this beautiful story you are writing. They are exactly as I would love them, pls don’t skip a thing however long it takes, tks!!!
Im not worry if you take care of me too lol. Anyway this is so good and awesome, yeah let Bette take care of you Tina and you will be happy with her. Ok let them have a talk and see how thing go. OK post soon please, thanks!
ok the search is still on!!!!!!!! Now bette should cut off his balls and hand them to him or he should be sleeping with the fishes butter yet bette put a hoarse head in his bed!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! longer
wow i love this story… now please note i am back to work… and when i read at work i can’t comment… but know i am always reading… this is one of my favorites… bring on the love babe…
too much crying and NOT ENUFF TALKING!!!!!!! AND NOT FORGETTING A KISS OR 2…..do ya get me drift lassie????? LOL!!!!!!!!
thanks for this chapter just glad you liked my picture and thankyou foe sending me some of your catch you soon
Awwww… BEAUTIFUL! Aren’t they just cute or what. Oh man, since you know I’m an addict, so don’t forget my daily fix, I mean DAILY!!! NO is not an answer, do you read me?! Lol… Pardon me, I will behave myself if I get what I want. Lol… please continue
love this story. and now they are where they need to be, together. Thank you for the post.
this was great but i’m still waiting for a kiss LOL…B&T are so right for each other, they are already in each other’s arms, just a little push ;)
This slow bringing together of Bette and Tina is wonderfully agonizing. The way you tell this story is brilliant. I just love it–have I mentioned that lately. Post soon please!
I hoppe that YOUR knee is okay. Did you have to put a needle in and drain it? Bette singing to this song and thinking as she did was funny and sad at the same time. It took a lot of courage for Tina to make it to Bette’s house and actually ring the door bell. Bette must be in heaven to be holding her sleeping beauty in her arms. I know that I would be. Great chapter.
Tina shouldn’t be wasting time sleeping, she should be kissing!! Hope to see them happily together in the next chapter, maybe TODAY??? Thanks for your story.
Hi, I finally catched up on your story! Djeezes, I missed a whole lot in these twelve days of vacation! Anyway, great progress with the story! Loved all the chappies! Continue soon please!
Well well…I must say.. :) This lunchbreak in suddenly getting much much better…thanks for a great chapter and you have mad my day…again…post soon please…
Just amazing – just catching up on your story…..this is sooo good. Keep going, this is wonderfull :o)
W-O-W~~ GREAT chappy… Nobody will ever know if all ‘taking the easy way out’ ;) and then all will be guessing for the rest of our lives…
waooooo! girl you know how melt us! this last part was so swet! maybe Tina should have a talk with Bette about her feelings i know maybe is soon but with Tina in home this will be better! i love this story! take care
Take care of your knees I have two knee repartment in May last yrs. So be careful. Eric is a bully.Most men can beat up a woman, Takes a good one to walk away. He will get his just dues. Pay back is a bitch. thanks
Another great chapter, thanks. I love this story, it melts my heart:-) Ben je trouwens tweetalig ofzo? Ik zou me (als Nederlandse) nooit zo goed in het Engels kunnen uitdrukken, complimenten! I hope you’ll post another chapter soon!