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    The Greatest Love Story Ever Told

    Story written on November 12, 2009 by skimmer.
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    Chapter 14

    Tina who had languidly watched the whole packing process lying on the bed hands clasped behind her head. A quick glance at her watch confirmed it would be just under an hour before Bette left for the airport. Which usually meant Bette checking and rechecking that she had indeed packed everything she needed. Tina had other ideas on how that time could be more productive. There was an easy way and a hard way to get Bette to bend to her needs, the hard way was just more fun.

    “Are you planning on travelling in that shirt” Tina asked casually

    Bette who was returning the empty coat hangers back to the wardrobe turned to face Tina before checking what could possibly be wrong with her shirt. “Why you ask, what’s wrong with it”

    Trying to keep a smile off her face Tina replied “Nothing wrong with it, it just doesn’t look too comfortable for travelling in”

    “You think I should change”

    “Maybe something a little looser”

    “Oh ok” Bette proceeded to loosen the buttons on her shirt, while searching the remainder of her clothing for something a little looser. Tossing the shirt aside she grabbed a different shirt and turned to Tina for her approval “What about this”

    “Mmmm, I don’t like that colour” Tina shook her head all the while her eyes feasting upon Bette’s upper body now sexily clad only in a white lacy bra, oh how she loved Bette in white.

    “Oh really, that’s why you keep stealing it” Bette chuckled and put the shirt back, “So what you and Alice got planned for the weekend”

    “Not much, I really want to go see Four Weddings” Bette was holding out another shirt “Nope” Tina responded

    “Try not to get into too much trouble, I can actually see the intelligence seeping out of you whenever your together, god only knows what you will be like by the time I get back, talking in one syllables probably, duh duh duh duh”

    Tina laughed but her attention was no longer on the conversation, she could look at Bette all day everyday.

    Five attempts later and they still hadn’t agreed on Bette’s attire and time was pressing Tina had to up her game and quickly.

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    1. Jeez, woman, why do you tempt me so? I’m supposed to be responsible right now! So… real comment now. My favorite line: “Ok, hit me with the good news, post haste”. HAHAHAHA, I almost died. That was freaking priceless. I love your Helena meanness. Which is good because… I CA

    2. Darn it, stupid computer. As I was saying, I CAN’T BELIEVE YOU’RE GIVING TINA A BRAIN TUMOUR, WOMAN!!!! That’s just all sorts of cruel. Especially remembering all this when she might not remember it in a few days. So sad… Don’t make me cross the Atlantic to kick your butt for being mean to them!

    4. Wooo Hooo the Skiminator is back! I was on the ground LMAO the entire chapter. Seriously Skim you’ve been missed. Don’t do that again…that was way too long to be gone!

    5. Thanks for bringing this story back! I am pretty much a silent reader but I just wanted to say I was missing this one. Please don’t make us wait too long to find out what happens with Tina.PPS

    7. ace skimmer, ace ace ace…. but noooooo! Tina can’t have a brain tumor, and she totally can’t lose all her memories of her life with Bette. :( fix it, skimmer, or make Shane fix it, please? thanks for posting again :)

    12. Oh Crap! Well… at least I knew you would BEAT me to posting before Friday! LOL ~ Skimmy, it’s ALWAYS a joy to read your writing. You have been missed, and it’s great to see you finding a bit of time these days to provide us with that special “nourishment” needed. See ya on the flip side. Oh, and MORE soon! Wanna bet I post my chappy before you post your next one? ;-)

    15. Skimmer! Skimmer! Welcome back. Thank you so much for posting and continuing this story. I have so missed it. This update was so freakin funny. Excellent update. Thank you thank you again.

    20. A wonderful chapter, I just love the way u write all these characters:)) Pls post soon and if u feel lack of confidence again just look at comments n c how in demand u r. PPPVS

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