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    The Greatest Love Story Ever Told

    Story written on November 12, 2009 by skimmer.
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    Story Shortlink: https://www.assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=74516
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    Chapter 14

    “Babe, those jeans look a little tight around the waist, maybe you would be better with some slacks”

    Bette who at this stage was A, missing the point and B, aware that she still had to do her final checks before leaving was beginning to feel a little miffed “Jesus Tina, I feel like a 3 year old getting dressed my her mother” despite her protests she quickly unfastened her jeans and slipped out of them.

    Mission accomplished Tina made no attempt to hide her true motive “Well you certainly don’t look like a 3 year old” she purred “And now I have you exactly how I wanted you…..come here” she demanded with a smile.

    Bette returned the smile “Oh you think your so smart” as she made her way over to their bed and Tina’s awaiting arms.

    “Oh I know I am” Tina attempted to wink

    They both heard the front door opening and slamming shut “Time to strap on our party hats on TK, where are you?” Alice shouted.

    “You would think for someone so smart they would have a better choice in friends” Bette winked.

    “Fuck, stay there, I mean it do not move” Tina warned as she hastily left the room fully intent on getting rid of the unwanted intrusion to her well manoeuvred plans, getting rid of Alice in a hurry was as easy as getting rid of syphilis without the aid of antibiotics and render you just as crazy.

    Disguising her annoyance Tina greeted her friend cheerfully “Hey Al ready to party”

    “Too right, jeez I can’t remember the last time we had a weekend just us, you know no Miss party pooper to cramp our style, so what’s the plan, a few swallows here before we hit the town”

    “Sounds like a plan” Tina agreed through gritted teeth, “Why don’t you run down to the basement and grab a bottle of red while I hit the shower” she motioned back towards her bedroom keeping an eye on Alice’s movements.

    “Sure” Alice replied heading to the basement door and opening it, as soon as her foot hit the first step she heard the door shut behind her and the key lock. “Hey, so not funny Tina open this fucking door” she shouted banging her fist against the wood.

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    1. Jeez, woman, why do you tempt me so? I’m supposed to be responsible right now! So… real comment now. My favorite line: “Ok, hit me with the good news, post haste”. HAHAHAHA, I almost died. That was freaking priceless. I love your Helena meanness. Which is good because… I CA

    2. Darn it, stupid computer. As I was saying, I CAN’T BELIEVE YOU’RE GIVING TINA A BRAIN TUMOUR, WOMAN!!!! That’s just all sorts of cruel. Especially remembering all this when she might not remember it in a few days. So sad… Don’t make me cross the Atlantic to kick your butt for being mean to them!

    4. Wooo Hooo the Skiminator is back! I was on the ground LMAO the entire chapter. Seriously Skim you’ve been missed. Don’t do that again…that was way too long to be gone!

    5. Thanks for bringing this story back! I am pretty much a silent reader but I just wanted to say I was missing this one. Please don’t make us wait too long to find out what happens with Tina.PPS

    7. ace skimmer, ace ace ace…. but noooooo! Tina can’t have a brain tumor, and she totally can’t lose all her memories of her life with Bette. :( fix it, skimmer, or make Shane fix it, please? thanks for posting again :)

    12. Oh Crap! Well… at least I knew you would BEAT me to posting before Friday! LOL ~ Skimmy, it’s ALWAYS a joy to read your writing. You have been missed, and it’s great to see you finding a bit of time these days to provide us with that special “nourishment” needed. See ya on the flip side. Oh, and MORE soon! Wanna bet I post my chappy before you post your next one? ;-)

    15. Skimmer! Skimmer! Welcome back. Thank you so much for posting and continuing this story. I have so missed it. This update was so freakin funny. Excellent update. Thank you thank you again.

    20. A wonderful chapter, I just love the way u write all these characters:)) Pls post soon and if u feel lack of confidence again just look at comments n c how in demand u r. PPPVS

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