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    What Hurts The Most

    Story written on June 25, 2009 by skimmer.
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    Story Shortlink: https://www.assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=73712
    Author Notes:

    Chapters 11-15 repost

    “I don’t mean yet but in time I still want my little boy and my little girl”

    “So tell me what have you decided to do are you carrying one and her the other or what”

    “I don’t know we haven’t discussed it yet”

    “WHAT….Tina….you haven’t discussed it yet, don’t you think you should before you make this huge commitment….what if she doesn’t want them”

    “Every woman wants kids Dana it’s ingrained in their genes”

    “Alice doesn’t and you know I’m not that keen either which was something we discussed before we moved in together”

    “Fuck”

    Bettes Apartment

    “ALICE Where the fuck did you put the tape” Bette shouts at Alice not for the first time this morning”

    “Jesus Bette it’s here” Alice walks back into the war zone that was formerly known as Bette’s bedroom. “I sure hope Tina knows what the hell she is letting herself in for”

    “What do you mean by that” Bette snarls.

    “Oh I don’t know….. coz you have been like a ray of sunshine this morning…what is it Bette…getting cold feet”

    “No Alice cold feet is the last thing I am getting…I have just had the worst fucking morning of my life”

    “Explaino”

    “Ok first of all I get to my car to find some asshole has smashed a tail light, ok no biggy, until I get pulled over by some prick of a cop who despite my protestations gives me a fucking ticket, but still my life is good in two days I get to spend the rest of my life with the girl of my dreams nothing can get me down right….so I’m still smiling”

    “Good for you coz the old Porter would have blown a gasket by now…..but if your still smiling why…..”

    “Oh I haven’t finished yet, I get home and can’t get my key in the lock as it has been filled with gum at some point last night and I spend over an hour picking the scum out with a nail file….during this hour I am trying to call the aforementioned girl of my dreams….as one does when feeling the need for a little tlc….but no Tina Kinnard is not available at the moment please leave a message after the fucking tone….again a little annoying the first 5 times, after 10 times and one fucked nail file later I’m starting to feel just a teeny weeny bit pissed ”

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    Comments

    1. I’m almost completely sure I said two days. That means tonight. Now, I’ll try, but I can’t promise anything. Thanks for reposting, though! But don’t think you can get away with not giving us new chapters just because we’re getting these ones. Like yesterday, can’t stay and read, but thanks for posting!

    2. HEY did I read right? Is Jikes posting????? OoOooO…I’ll be checking this site over and over! Hey Skimmer, so I can hand the “topper” tiara over to you now huh? LMAOOO!!! Hey, I’m glad you reposted. It’s fun to re-read them! Thanks Skimmy!!!!!!

    3. Ok, so it’s 12:09am, and I still have a ton of work to do. Clearly, tonight isn’t happening. In the future, Skimmer, please don’t subject me to the pressure of having Chicki check this site for my post, ok? I think I’ve wasted more of the last two hours trying to figure out if I was going to have time to write, which obviously resulted in no time to write :P Ok, back to work. I promise that I will write my next post before I go to sleep, even if it turns out the sun is rising. But only because you made me feel bad. :D XOX

    4. and yes, I do know it’s my fault for making promises on a public forum. But I’m going to blame it on you because… well, why not? You can’t cross the Atlantic and hurt me.

    5. Another 5 chapters that were excellent to read again. Now I’m off the read your next post. Skimmer – I tell you you can surely write :) Thank you again!

    7. I’m glad you reposted this cos I don’t think I ever got the chance to read chapters 13&14. I do remember how 12 ended though. Another thing with the chance to read the chapters back to back is to see how Tina is like, a bit withholding, to say the least. Bette’s a bit cranky, yeah, but Tina’s totally passive-aggressive. Maybe once they move in together some of that will get better? I hope so, but you said there’s only one chapter left?!? :( Skimmer, that chapter better be LONG. (I’ll take what I can get though). Thanks!

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