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    You (Part the Forty-First)

    Story written on June 21, 2007 by MutedTempest.
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    Story Shortlink: https://www.assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=66000
    Author Notes:

    Computer talk, dreams, kids, jewelry, and Drs. Fairbanks and McCutcheon try to solve Patient Pieszecki’s dilemma. (AlShaDane, because I needed some). *Please see the note at the end, too, if you have time. It’d mean a lot.*

    “I’ll call you about that,” he called over his shoulder. “And maybe we can all meet at the Planet tomorrow so I can look over you and Alice’s sites, okay?”

    Dana replied in the affirmative and walked inside, setting the cardio weight on the hall table and marveling at how much it had effected her right arm before the sound of crying filtered through her consciousness. Peeking into the bedroom in concern, Dana felt like she was being stabbed by a thousand tiny knives when she saw the love of her life curled into a ball on the bed, crying as if she’d just lost her best friend. The irony of that expression made Dana shake her head as she walked over to the bed, intending to take Alice into her arms. She had just started to embrace her girlfriend when she felt Alice jerk away from her. Figuring she’d just startled her, Dana chalked it up to Alice not being quite awake yet and tried again. This time, when Alice tried to jerk away, Dana held her tighter. “It’s okay,” she whispered, hoping she could calm Alice down.

    It didn’t work, and the whispered reassurance seemed to put Alice even more on edge. Dana had never had Alice fight her before, and she didn’t even realize that she was just increasing her grip as Alice struggled to get away from her until she felt something pull in her right shoulder. Dana winced but didn’t relax her hold, even as Alice twisted and jerked and tried to get out of her arms.

    “Leave me alone,” Alice said in a devastated whisper that broke Dana’s heart. “Just let me get over you. Please. Stop coming back,” she begged, not looking at Dana.

    “Sweetie, what are you talking about?” Dana asked quietly. “I live here. Stop fighting me, Al. It’s okay.”

    “It’s not okay!” Alice protested, struggling all the harder. “Don’t you even know you’re dead? Huh? Or is this just some way to punish me for leaving you when I said I wouldn’t? I didn’t mean to, I swear I didn’t. Please, just stop fucking with my head,” Alice begged. “If you ever loved me, just leave me alone,” she finished in a sob, finally looking at Dana with tear-filled eyes. All the fight seemed to have left her, and she finally stopped struggling and just sat there, looking at Dana with a pleading expression.

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    1. Yay, I do believe I’m first! I totally always thought Erin Daniels had a Sheryl Crow-esque look to her, but I thought I was the only one. I loved this update, it was really adorable and so well written. And yeah, I shuddered at the thought of them listening to Mariah Carey.

    3. Alice’s lack of sense of reality is a bit unsettling, but understandable. But getting AlShaDane back together is way cool. Dana eating the rest of the pizza was funny after she told Alice not to buy all garbage at the grocery store, haha. The Ari storyline is growing on me, as it shows Dana’s strength and compassion. Yet I don’t get the backlash against Mariah. I for one felt that for once Dana should get the entertainment of her choice. Circles, twas a nice touch!

    4. Alright, I’m a lurker and never posted because frankly I have too many website accounts and will lose track.But after reading the note at the bottom of this chapter I was forced to sign up just to beg you to somehow continue it.I check for updates pretty much every second day, which sounds creepy but it just shows how much I love this story. I refuse to watch L word after our beloved little ms fairbanks was taken from us and aside from watching season 1 and 2 over and over again this gives me something to actually look foward to. This is the only way danish love continues for me, and to have it taken away again would be toooo tragic. So if you need to end it, do so. But I’m praying you keep going because I don’t know where else to turn to for danish satisfaction.

    5. I love your writing and really enjoy this story. There has never been a bad chapter (I should know — when you posted the latest, I went back and re-read the whole thing). I hope you continue.

    6. Loved Loved Loved this update…Dana high classic…I read your note, I think there are alot places you can take this…but you are the writer with the vision…do what you feel is right…But I love this story…it’s an addiction what can I say!!Thank You…PPS!

    7. ok im re-commenting b/c i have 3 things to say: 1. Yes, we do rule! (very cool timing on both our parts with the post)2. I look forward to your re-comment later. 3. I’m still shuddering over the thought of Mariah.

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