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    A helping hand and a push in the right direction-CH. 29

    Story written on October 15, 2006 by toribio.
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    Number of Comments: 26
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    Story Shortlink: https://www.assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=62868
    Author Notes:

    B&T reunite 9 years after season 1: Lazing around the house and some big decisions are made

     

     

    “I don’t know what to do T I gave him an ultimatum and told him that he had to take us as we are…that you and Eli were my family and that if he wanted to remain in my life then he’d have to change…but when I saw him talking to Eli yesterday I couldn’t help but feel protective towards Eli…” Bette shook her head, “I won’t let anyone hurt him T not even Melvin.”

     

     

    It wasn’t lost on Tina that Bette hadn’t referred to Melvin as ‘daddy’ yet. “I know you won’t babe.”

     

     

    “It’s just…” Bette sighed, “…who does he think he is he has no right to criticize what Eli did in his spare time.”

     

     

    “What did he say?”

     

     

    “It’s not so much what he said you know Melvin can grill you and still appear polite doing so, it’s just he sounded so condescending…Eli was holding his own and Kit was there otherwise I wouldn’t have waited as long as I did to say something.”

     

     

    Tina was trying to keep Bette relaxed she could see that Bette was still upset about what happened. “Hey I know, I trust you to look out for Eli no matter what…I’ve never once questioned your devotion for Eli.”

     

     

    Bette grinned at the sincerity in Tina’s voice and leaned in for a kiss. They continued to kiss for a bit longer.

     

     

    “Did anything else happen?”

     

     

    Bette nodded. “After Eli left Melvin kept going on about how impressed he was with Eli and his choice in schools. He was practically drooling over how bright and articulate Eli was…”

     

     

    “That doesn’t sound so bad.”

     

     

    Bette let out a frustrated sigh. “It’d be fine…great if he had stopped there but he went on about all Eli needed was a little direction. You should of heard him T he was talking about Eli like he was some kind of project for him, another person he could mold. It just set me off T he just…he sounded so arrogant and I know that he didn’t suddenly morph into this person. I ignored this side of him but I’m not going to do that anymore. He won’t go near Eli if he tries to fill his head with his conservative bs. I told him T…you’ve done an excellent job raising Eli. He’s so great baby and I’m not going to let Melvin get his hooks into him.”

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    7. Awwww I love this amazingly sweet story, I’ve really missed an update, but totally understand your prioritys. Looking forward to the next one – btw I just loves the plans they’re making :o))

    8. I’ve been following this story from its beginning. It is so awesome. I also love that you write detailed and layered chapters. You take the time to have the story unfold at a realistic pace. Great job. Bette is so accomodating w/o being a doormat. Being a diehard TiBetter this is how I pictured their life together. I hope this happens on the TV show.

    12. Great job once again, toribio! Wish I could write such long chapters! The way you have everyone talking things out is great–filling in the gaps the show left. Can’t wait to see how Tina’s convo with Melvin goes–it was neat how you connected him and Peggy. All these characters are true to form. Please post again as soon as you can!

    13. You, of course, can’t see it, but I’m doing my happy dance. :) Glad to see this story back, finally! You peg Peggy pretty dead on; that stream of words without stopping. Ah, I do love her so! I had to laugh at Bette getting sleepy with Tina stroking her hair; I’m the same way. I think it’s cute that Bette wants to ask Eli’s permission. Seems about right if she’s going to be stepping into their lives. As for Tina and Melvin alone… yikes. Can’t wait to read all about it, though! Love how long your posts are, and I hope you don’t keep us waiting as long next time!

    15. Is this story every worth the wait. Great job. Love how B&T are actually talking to each other, how Eli is included in all they’re plans and thoughts, especially Bette. Melvin will come around now that Peggy got a hold of him. I agree with AmandaMG, a baby sister would be good.

    16. The talk that Peggy had with Melvin seemed to have kick started his want to maybe make things right. He maybe doing this for Bette and Himself but in the long run it will also be for Tina and Eli. I am so glad that they are working towards becoming a true family.

    20. EXCELLENT updateand Amanda, you took the words out of my mouth. I sooooo totally agree with Amanda and love you writing and comittment to this story, PPS :o)

    21. Toribio, this is absolutely fan-fucking-tastic!!! Sorry, but there are no better words! And great of Tina to let Bette in on her talk with her father, it would be an aweful move to start their new life with a lie indeed! I loved every single word of this chapter… Wrong, I loved every single word of every single chapter of this story!!! Thank you so much and please come back soon with either of your stories, you’re a fantastic writer!

    22. I love this B&T (and Eli) I love how they communicate better now…how they are with each other. I am proud of how Bette is so protective of her family. I like how they were both willing to compromise about the move. I guess in a nutshell I love this story. Thanks for continuing to post and giving us something wonderful to read.

    23. I like how long your chapters are. Thank you. This is such a sweet love story. Totally love Eli, although I don’t agree with Bette feeling like she has to his permission to marry Tina. It is cute, but Eli is still a nine year old child.

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