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All you need is love – chapter 66
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“Gee “
“Pardon ?” Bette queried
“Nothing – why don’t you make sure that Zak is dressed properly ?” Josh said
“He is – I helped him “ Dan grinned enjoying being his mother’s number one son.
Josh muttered something under his breathe that made Bette struggle to stifle the desire to laugh – these two were a hoot.
“Thank you Danny “
“No problem mom – shall I go and see if Tina needs a hand with Hannah and Madison ? “
“No – but you can see if Lara is ready to take you and Becky out – have you got your wallet ?”
“In my rucksack “
Bette put her hand in her jeans and handed him a $20 note.
“Give that to Lara to keep for you and no buying too much crap “
“Okay – thanks mom “
Bette kissed him “I love you “
“I love you too “ he whispered back.
Bette straightened herself up and glanced at Josh just in time to see him pulling a funny face at Dan
“Josh – the shovel for the snow is in the shed “ she warned
“Okay – I will get my boots “
Dan winked at Bette and strolled downstairs. Bette wondered if Tina was having as much trouble getting her daughters ready.
Next door Tina was helping Madison put on her boots – she could hear Becky in her bed room singing at the top of her considerable voice
“Hark the herald angels sing – glory to the new born king “
Madison giggled “ She was singing that in the shower this morning”
“And do you know the song that you are singing ?”
Tina was referring to the Christmas carol services that all of her daughters were singing in. Madison nodded
“Of course I do “
“Want to give me a display ?”
“I am saving my voice “
Tina nodded “Very wise – is that the reason for the extra orange juice this morning ?”
“Ms Roberts says it very important to take lots of vitamin C and not strain your voice “
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Excellent chappy! As for another post, I wouldn’t mind an update on Something So Right too!
B and T are just made for each other both planning to propose, but looks like Bette is going to beat Tina to the punch and I bet she has already found the perfect house too. Gosh I don’t know which story to vote for, I think I will be happy with any one of them as long as we get a little bit of all of them over the next 16 days.
Snow shoveling is punishment? No Ally, it’s simply what you do in order to leave the house. We had many shovels when I was a kid, the theory being that many hands make light work. Unless the snow is wet, then it weighs a ton. Which is why I live in an apartment building. But I already have my boots on. The snow started a couple of hours ago and the forecasters (hedging their bets all the while) are calling for about 9 inches by early Monday morning. Well, they agree on white gold. Too bad they weren’t thinking of the same night. I was kind of hoping for simultaneous proposals.
Great up date, this story is just keep getting better and bettre, i can’t wait for the big event of their lives and what will happen next, thanks Ally post soon dear don’t let us wait for so longAll my best
I vote for another chapter of this story. Great update Ally as usual. I am really enjoying this story and it’s taking place at the right time of year. So it’s a race to see who proposes to who first….B & T at their best….you just gotta love it!
Ally I love all ur stories n would want an update on all:)U haven’t up dated love n Pride in soooooooooo long, so please:))))thanks
AYNIL please, then more AYNIL, then L Wing, AYNIL, Something So Right
“If she’ll say yes?” It’s freakin’ Bette Porter doing the asking. Of course, she’ll say yes. Tina will be pissed that she didn’t ask first. PPS. Your new story and TL Wing would be nice.
Great chapter. I love all your stories so don’t matter which one willbe next I will be happy with it. Enjoy your break
AWESOME UPDATE … I vote for AYNIL please!!!!! Ally enjoy your time off!!! but please PPS!!!
Ally enjoy ur time off. OMg they are both going to ask each other and bette will ask for first….maybe ollie can convince tina to ask sooner? great minds think a like! :)
What ever story you post, can you make it NC-17? ;-)
We vote for AYNIL. We are eager to see the proposal! Plueeeaase! Big hs & ks – Lucero & Marsha – Your friends from Mexico City
Love it!
I love Bette’s idea for the rings. Great update. I vote for more AYNIL or Something so Right. Thanks!
Can whatever it is be an NC-17??? LOL PPS
I can’t wait until Bette proposes. I have to vote for Something So Right though.. that story is very sweet so far.
The race to pop the question is on… who will ask first?? Love all of your stories, but would vote to see an update of Something So Right. Enjoy the holidays and all your time off.
Great chapter. Can’t wait for the proposal. I would like another chapter of your new story too please.
I do love this story and it was a great chapter. Both of them planning to propose and it looks as though Bette will get to propose first, Christmas Eve. How fitting, proposing during the season of love, happiness and all the warmth one can endure. Just Great. As for the next post, I always want this one but whatever you choose is fine, as long as it involves Bette, Tina and love I’m okay with whichever one you choose. PPS
Great update. Love this story. As for your next post? Another chapter of your new story would be lovely. Thanks for the hard work!
i got upgraded on my committment ring from my woman fri night. when i gave her her ring i was working as a valet, didnt make much money. very inexpensive rings weve been wearing. she upgraded mine to a very beautiful white gold also. it was very nice night. thanks.
i’m so loving this story…