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All you need is love – chapter 66
He looked at Tina and smiled “Thanks “
Tina nodded “Behave yourselves for dad and Paul “
“We will “Hannah promised “ Can we have burgers for lunch ?”
“We’ll see “
Paul escorted Hannah and Madison outside where Bette was finishing her lecture to her three sons.
“Everything okay ? “
Bette nodded “Just putting certain people on their best behaviour – Josh – you have something to say to Paul ?”
“Thank you for taking us out for the day and we will be no trouble “
Paul laughed “Honestly Bette – we’re both looking forward to it – we are all going to have a great time “
“Thanks again “
“They are great boys – thanks Bette – it means a lot to both of us “
Bette smiled “As long as this is not the first and last time you offer “
Tina regarded Ollie who was wearing a huge sweater and jacket
“Thanks for taking them out “
“You can get the presents wrapped up in peace “
“I am not sure if I know what peace is – but it’s a real break to just be alone with Bette “
“Maybe you should ask her tonight “
Tina smiled
“No – New Years Eve – I’ve made my mind up “
“Thought about the rings ?”
“Yes – white gold “
“Nice”
“Think she’ll like white gold ?”
“Bette would wear a tin ring that turned her finger green if it was a declaration of love from you “
Tina smiled “Only two weeks to go “
“Nervous ?”
“No – I know my feelings “
“I am thrilled for you Tina – its right for you “
Tina nodded “Thanks – you’re being great “
“Making up for being such an asshole “
He sighed
“You don’t need it but Tina – you have my blessing “
“Thank you – it means a lot to me “
“She’s good for you “
“She is “
“I just drove you to drink – she keeps you sober “
“Its more complicated than that “
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Excellent chappy! As for another post, I wouldn’t mind an update on Something So Right too!
B and T are just made for each other both planning to propose, but looks like Bette is going to beat Tina to the punch and I bet she has already found the perfect house too. Gosh I don’t know which story to vote for, I think I will be happy with any one of them as long as we get a little bit of all of them over the next 16 days.
Snow shoveling is punishment? No Ally, it’s simply what you do in order to leave the house. We had many shovels when I was a kid, the theory being that many hands make light work. Unless the snow is wet, then it weighs a ton. Which is why I live in an apartment building. But I already have my boots on. The snow started a couple of hours ago and the forecasters (hedging their bets all the while) are calling for about 9 inches by early Monday morning. Well, they agree on white gold. Too bad they weren’t thinking of the same night. I was kind of hoping for simultaneous proposals.
Great up date, this story is just keep getting better and bettre, i can’t wait for the big event of their lives and what will happen next, thanks Ally post soon dear don’t let us wait for so longAll my best
I vote for another chapter of this story. Great update Ally as usual. I am really enjoying this story and it’s taking place at the right time of year. So it’s a race to see who proposes to who first….B & T at their best….you just gotta love it!
Ally I love all ur stories n would want an update on all:)U haven’t up dated love n Pride in soooooooooo long, so please:))))thanks
AYNIL please, then more AYNIL, then L Wing, AYNIL, Something So Right
“If she’ll say yes?” It’s freakin’ Bette Porter doing the asking. Of course, she’ll say yes. Tina will be pissed that she didn’t ask first. PPS. Your new story and TL Wing would be nice.
Great chapter. I love all your stories so don’t matter which one willbe next I will be happy with it. Enjoy your break
AWESOME UPDATE … I vote for AYNIL please!!!!! Ally enjoy your time off!!! but please PPS!!!
Ally enjoy ur time off. OMg they are both going to ask each other and bette will ask for first….maybe ollie can convince tina to ask sooner? great minds think a like! :)
What ever story you post, can you make it NC-17? ;-)
We vote for AYNIL. We are eager to see the proposal! Plueeeaase! Big hs & ks – Lucero & Marsha – Your friends from Mexico City
Love it!
I love Bette’s idea for the rings. Great update. I vote for more AYNIL or Something so Right. Thanks!
Can whatever it is be an NC-17??? LOL PPS
I can’t wait until Bette proposes. I have to vote for Something So Right though.. that story is very sweet so far.
The race to pop the question is on… who will ask first?? Love all of your stories, but would vote to see an update of Something So Right. Enjoy the holidays and all your time off.
Great chapter. Can’t wait for the proposal. I would like another chapter of your new story too please.
I do love this story and it was a great chapter. Both of them planning to propose and it looks as though Bette will get to propose first, Christmas Eve. How fitting, proposing during the season of love, happiness and all the warmth one can endure. Just Great. As for the next post, I always want this one but whatever you choose is fine, as long as it involves Bette, Tina and love I’m okay with whichever one you choose. PPS
Great update. Love this story. As for your next post? Another chapter of your new story would be lovely. Thanks for the hard work!
i got upgraded on my committment ring from my woman fri night. when i gave her her ring i was working as a valet, didnt make much money. very inexpensive rings weve been wearing. she upgraded mine to a very beautiful white gold also. it was very nice night. thanks.
i’m so loving this story…