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City Of Angels Chapter 7: Good Vs. Evil Part 1
“My reputation precedes me.” Victor walks up to his desk and picks up Camilla’s sketch book that he had taken for his own. He flips through the sketch pad looking through the random sketches of the crow like images.
“So I’ve been told that you have been acquainted with our ghost lady here. Is that true?”
He threw the sketch pad close to Camilla’s bounded feet. She looked over and noticed one of the sketches she made of Dana earlier that day. She looked back up at the drug lord.
“I’ve seen her…” She replied with out a hint of fear in her voice. She wouldn’t this man the satisfaction that she was afraid. Truthfully she was deathly afraid of this man and of what he has planed for her and Dana. Yet she knew that she had to be strong.
“Have you now?” he bent over and picked up her sketch pad. While he was down he gently caressed Camilla’s bare calf with his hands. His hands roamed up further the captive woman’s bare leg as she did her best to not flinch at Victor’s raping hands.
His hands began to travel up her half naked body as the rested on her cheeks. She had to close her eyes tightly to stop her body from shuddering at his touch.
“Tell me something dear.” He whispered seductively in her left ear. “How do you kill some one who’s already dead? How do you stop a heart that is already still.” His hands stopped on her shoulders. He tried to look into her eyes but her head was turned away from his sick gaze.
She turned back momentarily only to give him an answer. More like answering a question with another question.
“Is that a trick question?”
He laughed again at her rebuttal. She had guts. He had to admit that. Even after staring at the face of death, she still kept her unbroken allegiance to Dana. Victor raised his hands and slapped Camilla across the cheek again.
Reeling from the blow she looked up at him with hatred in her eyes.
“You can’t stop her. Not until she’s finishes what she was sent back for.”
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(9 votes, average: 3.67 out of 5)
filler.. this was filler? this was fantastic all tho made me want to cry! but i know victor will get his! and as for the ending. it’ll be sad regardless cuz like Adelfiz said Dana and Alice are still dead but if Dana gets her full revenge ie: ending Victors life or making him pay (showing him what they went through when they died) perhaps but yeah either way i know its gonna be kick ass so plz post sooon! :)
I love it and I can’t wait to see what you come up with please post soon I think you have done great with this so please post soon great update
Great post girl,but im hoping for a sweet ending!!! Please post when you can! Thanks for the gr8 story and again keep up the gr8 work!
I don’t forsee Dana staying on once her last nemesis is dealt with…I think both ending is possible in this story and you certainly can do it!
this is crazy and sad at the same time!! I can’t believe that this happened, but hopefully, Dana will come back and kill Victor for what he has done!! I can’t wait to see what happens next!! and thanks for enjoying my first story Damaged!! I’m glad that you enjoyed it!! i miss it though!
I’m around, quietly watching… You’re a great weaver of a story, and coming from me… ~tooting my own horn~ is a lot cumming from moi — i’m just looking forward to ya next adventure….*EG*