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City Of Angels Chapter 7: Good Vs. Evil Part 1
“Always envision you opponents before you face them. Think about what you want to do to them and what you plan to get out of your match. Remember to envision them, show them no mercy because you will receive none.”
She opened her eyes with a brand new resolve. Everything that she loved in this world was taken away by this man. Victor Krash needed to pay.
She violently pushed open the doors of the large tower which splintered into little bits as she stared down the two large thugs guarding the elevator that goes up to Victor’s office. She clenched her fists as she saw the two henchmen rise. Both of them holding automatic weapons and staring down at her.
She stood her ground, not moving one inch as she prepared for her final battle. She didn’t come this far to be stopped by two over sized men who were easily mistaken for Bevis and Butthead.
“I’m here for Victor Krash.” She simply stated as the two men approached her.
They laughed and smiled not knowing what they had just gotten them selves into.
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The large elevator doors to Victor’s office opened up slowly as Dana emerged from inside the elevator. Blood from the guards below covered her entire clothes and her white painted face as she walked through the doors. She stepped into the office area as her black winged companion landed gracefully on her shoulders.
She looked around the office only to find Camilla tied to a chair in the middle of the drug dealer’s quarters. She was screaming something to Dana through the tape that was over her mouth. The crow flew over to the hostage’s shoulder and landed on Victor’s desk.
Dana rushes to Camilla’s side as she quickly removes the tape from the young girl’s mouth. She goes down to her wrists and starts to untie her wrists. The newly freed girl breaths in mouthfuls of air as she turns to Dana.
“Dana…leave…now…” she gasps still breathing in air. The looks in her eyes were wide with fear as she looked around the room frantically. Dana held the young girl by her shoulders as she gently embraced her trying to calm the hysterical girl down.
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(9 votes, average: 3.67 out of 5)
filler.. this was filler? this was fantastic all tho made me want to cry! but i know victor will get his! and as for the ending. it’ll be sad regardless cuz like Adelfiz said Dana and Alice are still dead but if Dana gets her full revenge ie: ending Victors life or making him pay (showing him what they went through when they died) perhaps but yeah either way i know its gonna be kick ass so plz post sooon! :)
I love it and I can’t wait to see what you come up with please post soon I think you have done great with this so please post soon great update
Great post girl,but im hoping for a sweet ending!!! Please post when you can! Thanks for the gr8 story and again keep up the gr8 work!
I don’t forsee Dana staying on once her last nemesis is dealt with…I think both ending is possible in this story and you certainly can do it!
this is crazy and sad at the same time!! I can’t believe that this happened, but hopefully, Dana will come back and kill Victor for what he has done!! I can’t wait to see what happens next!! and thanks for enjoying my first story Damaged!! I’m glad that you enjoyed it!! i miss it though!
I’m around, quietly watching… You’re a great weaver of a story, and coming from me… ~tooting my own horn~ is a lot cumming from moi — i’m just looking forward to ya next adventure….*EG*