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City Of Angels Chapter 7: Good Vs. Evil Part 1
“Shh. It’s ok now Camilla. You’re safe.”
Camilla pushed her friend away from the embrace as she stared into her black eyes. Her body trembled uncontrollably.
“You don’t understand. It’s a trap he’s trying to…”
Camilla’s sentence was interrupted by Dana’s sixth sense ability. She turned around to see a black bullet coming for Camilla’s chest. She quickly grabbed her friend by the shoulders and threw their bodies down onto the floor just missing the bullet.
As Dana landed with Camilla onto the hard wooden floor, she felt something she hadn’t felt since she was resurrected.
Dana grunted as she sifted her body uneasily. She was feeling pain. Suddenly a wave of dizziness hit her like a ton of bricks. Camilla looked on in horror at Dana’s dismay. Victor Krash had set out what he wanted to do. She looked over her shoulder and saw a dying black crow bleeding to death on Victor’s desk.
It hit her suddenly. The bullet was not meant for them. Victor knew Dana would protect her friends in trouble. One of her weakness was that she always put herself in front of others. And he used to his advantage.
Dana slowly got up to her feet as she looked over to where the dying bird laid, struggling to get to its feet. She could literally feel her strength and speed slip through her body along with the dying bird’s blood pouring down onto the ground.
A loud laughter came from the corner of the room as it echoed through the large office. Dana shot a look towards the direction of the evil laughter. She saw Victor’s dark eyes staring down at her and his sadistic looking smile across his face.
“Beautiful…just beautiful, I couldn’t have planed this better.”
Dana glared at the drug overload as he walked out of the shadows and into the light. She knew she had to fight this guy and in her mind she knew she could take him, but she couldn’t ignore the feeling of pain that she started to feel. Not to mention the nagging feeling that she was missing something.
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(9 votes, average: 3.67 out of 5)
filler.. this was filler? this was fantastic all tho made me want to cry! but i know victor will get his! and as for the ending. it’ll be sad regardless cuz like Adelfiz said Dana and Alice are still dead but if Dana gets her full revenge ie: ending Victors life or making him pay (showing him what they went through when they died) perhaps but yeah either way i know its gonna be kick ass so plz post sooon! :)
I love it and I can’t wait to see what you come up with please post soon I think you have done great with this so please post soon great update
Great post girl,but im hoping for a sweet ending!!! Please post when you can! Thanks for the gr8 story and again keep up the gr8 work!
I don’t forsee Dana staying on once her last nemesis is dealt with…I think both ending is possible in this story and you certainly can do it!
this is crazy and sad at the same time!! I can’t believe that this happened, but hopefully, Dana will come back and kill Victor for what he has done!! I can’t wait to see what happens next!! and thanks for enjoying my first story Damaged!! I’m glad that you enjoyed it!! i miss it though!
I’m around, quietly watching… You’re a great weaver of a story, and coming from me… ~tooting my own horn~ is a lot cumming from moi — i’m just looking forward to ya next adventure….*EG*