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City Of Angels Chapter 7: Good Vs. Evil Part 1
“Oh we’ll see about that.” Victor went over to his large cabinet across his office. He took out a sniper pistol with a small scope attached to it. He attached a silencer to the other end of the barrel as he turned towards his hostage.
“You have an important part in our little Play Camilla. You’re going to help me capture the crow.”
Camilla’s eyes grew wide with fear as Victor mentioned his plan. That would be the last thing in the world she would ever do to some one she cared about. She would rather die than to see that happen.
“I would never help some one like you.” Camilla stated defiantly as Victor finished assembling the custom made hand gun. He walked over and grabbed her cheek as he violently placed a kiss on her pout lips.
“It’s not like you have a choice.” He said as he releases her cheeks from his hands.
She spat out the disgusting kiss that lingered on her lips as the fear of Victor’s unknown plan came into place. She didn’t know what she was getting her self into.
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The city streets are alive buzzing with people as the Dias De Muertos Celebrants flood the streets celebrating in a lavish style of dancing and singing. Children on the streets dance around in Halloween masks, running with sparkler sticks
Dana moves through the thousands of people who are flooding the streets. Invincible to everyone, she’s just another face in the crowd with her make up on. People furiously bump and run into her as they dance to the loud music playing over the large crowd.
Dana shifts her way through to massive crowd of bodies until she finally finds her self at the entrance of Victor’s Tower. She looks up at the massive building that juts out of the ground like a large giant.
She closes her eyes and starts to envision her opponent. A simple yet effective tactic that uses to do before her tennis matches. The voice of her first tennis coach entered her mind as she started to think about what was taken from her.
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(9 votes, average: 3.67 out of 5)
filler.. this was filler? this was fantastic all tho made me want to cry! but i know victor will get his! and as for the ending. it’ll be sad regardless cuz like Adelfiz said Dana and Alice are still dead but if Dana gets her full revenge ie: ending Victors life or making him pay (showing him what they went through when they died) perhaps but yeah either way i know its gonna be kick ass so plz post sooon! :)
I love it and I can’t wait to see what you come up with please post soon I think you have done great with this so please post soon great update
Great post girl,but im hoping for a sweet ending!!! Please post when you can! Thanks for the gr8 story and again keep up the gr8 work!
I don’t forsee Dana staying on once her last nemesis is dealt with…I think both ending is possible in this story and you certainly can do it!
this is crazy and sad at the same time!! I can’t believe that this happened, but hopefully, Dana will come back and kill Victor for what he has done!! I can’t wait to see what happens next!! and thanks for enjoying my first story Damaged!! I’m glad that you enjoyed it!! i miss it though!
I’m around, quietly watching… You’re a great weaver of a story, and coming from me… ~tooting my own horn~ is a lot cumming from moi — i’m just looking forward to ya next adventure….*EG*